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in this lesson I'm going to give you a
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few final words of advice for what
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happens after you've written your novel
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so hopefully by now you have a really
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great idea and you're ready to get down
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and start writing the first two pages of
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your book but I'd just like to talk to
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you a little bit about what will happen
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later the traditional route to getting
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published is via a literary agent
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Publishers rarely accept unsolicited
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manuscripts they want to receive a full
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book from a literary agent who sort of
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says this is an amazing book and you've
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got to have a look at it otherwise they
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get sent so much material that they just
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never get a chance to read at all but
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literary agents also get sent a lot of
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material so obviously you know you need
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to still be sending a book that is as
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close to perfect as it can possibly be
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the traditional route getting published
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is to impress a literary agent by
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sending them a copy of your edited book
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along with a a cover letter and a short
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synopsis which will include the title
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and maybe a tagline there is a really
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great book that I cannot recommend more
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highly to you it's called the writers
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and artists yearbook make sure you get
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the latest edition because it has all
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the most up-to-date information about
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which literary agents work at which
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agencies what sort of books they publish
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so you make sure that you only submit to
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people who are going to be interested in
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the type of book that you've written you
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can also find out which literary agents
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might work well for you by looking at
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the acknowledgements of some of your
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favorite books authors almost always
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think they're literary agents so have a
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look and see who they think and perhaps
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you know pay a little bit more attention
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to them do some online research and it
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may be that they might be interested in
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your book at some
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stage in terms of coming up with the
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title it can be really helpful if you
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talk to friends about it and the same
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thing with the tagline I still remember
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when I had the idea for Lucy in the Sky
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and it didn't have a title and I already
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had interest from a publisher who I was
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going to meet a week later and I said to
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my brother you know I need a title for
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this book can you help me he's already
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creative and and so I told him what the
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book was about and he just shot back a
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text message with a few different titles
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including Lucy in the Sky I was thinking
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well that's a great title so my heroin
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wasn't even called Lucy um so I ended up
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copying and pasting and my heroin wasn't
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even called Lucy so I ended up doing a
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find and replace on the character's name
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and changing it to Lucy and sending it
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off to to my publisher when when we
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ended up having a chat so just you know
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get some inspiration from friends and
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family about your book idea they might
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someone out there might have really good
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inspiration for for a title that you
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know might just be the thing that helps
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you to get a book deal and then the case
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of Only Love Can Hurt Like This an earth
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shattering secret a life-changing love
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story I think that tagline really sums
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up what readers will be able to expect
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when they come to read this book it's
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going to be emotional and it's a love
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story ultimately I want people to know
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that what they're picking up is a love
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story so it's great if you can somehow
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convey the essence of your book through
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a tagline one of my most favorite
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taglines of recent years features on
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Beth O's book The Flat share and it just
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says Tiffy and Leon share a bed Tiffy
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and Leon have never met I just think
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that's just such a great tagline it's
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like what what they share a bed but
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they've never met each other and you
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realize the book is called the flat
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share and you know that just seems like
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a really intriguing proposition so yeah
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have a think about something that you
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think might be quite intriguing and and
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make a publisher or literary agent want
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to read
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on but Far and Away the most important
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thing you will need to do when you get
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to the end of your novel apart from
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celebrating CU you should definitely
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definitely celebrate because it is a
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huge achievement but what you will need
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to do is edit your book as I've said
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before literary agents and Publishers
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get sent so many manuscripts that they
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are looking for reasons to say no so
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don't give them one if your book is
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riddled with mistakes or typos or errors
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they're just going to put it to one side
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and look for something a little bit
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easier it's highly unlikely they'll keep
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reading if if they see that it's just
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filled with mistakes there are a lot of
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very very successful dyslexic authors so
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you know don't be put off if you if you
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worry that you're you're not absolutely
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perfect with everything that you write
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grammatically I would actually suggest
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that anyone hires a professional editor
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if they can or otherwise that they get a
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very trusted friend who's really good
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with grammar to read through their book
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and check for mistakes obviously all of
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this is after you have already edited it
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yourself now the thing with editing is
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that you need to make sure that your
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book is really pacy throughout that it's
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not you know you haven't gone off on too
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many tangents and you know that you've
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always kept the story driving forward I
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can't go into too much detail in this
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course because this course was all about
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helping you to write a book we could do
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an entire course just on publishing or
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on editing so and in fact you know you
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might want to have a look and see if
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there's something like that that that
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might interest you but you know I'm
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mainly focusing on helping you to write
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the book and then afterwards you know
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the editing is going to come down to you
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but just to give you a few tips on
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editing as you through your book are
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there any moments at all that you feel a
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little bit underwhelmed by as you're
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reading them if you find it a little bit
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boring chances are you'll read as will
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too so you need to either cut it out or
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cut it down you can just make sure that
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the story keeps moving forward and
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doesn't get weed down with too much
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detail cut words sentences whole
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paragraphs even an entire chapter if you
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find that it's not really adding to the
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story and if it's slowing the pace down
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too much when I wrote Lucy in the Sky I
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remember receiving my manuscript back
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from my editor and she had drawn an
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entire line through a whole chapter and
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she just said cut and I was like what
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you know you got to cut the whole
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chapter and she's like it's not adding
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to the story you've just written an
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entire chapter about the characters
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something you know and it's just you
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know wasn't very exciting so we did cut
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it and I think that's another really
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important piece of advice if you do
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decide to hire an editor or even if
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you're at the stage where you've got an
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editor at a Publishing House and they're
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giving you some advice I remember when
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my editor said to me she said it's your
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book if there's anything you really
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disagree with then you know you don't
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have to do it I really like that she
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said this to me because you know made me
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feel a little bit more in control but
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I'd already said to myself my editor had
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30 years of experience and I had
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absolutely none I'd never written a book
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before so I just decided in advance I'm
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going to do absolutely everything she
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tells me to do and I think that's a
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really good attitude you know listen to
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The Experts listen to you know what
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suggest and just be open to it it's not
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an insult to you you know everybody
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makes the odd mistake and you know you
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just need to listen to really good words
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of advice but ultimately do remember it
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is your novel if something doesn't feel
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right to you and if there's something
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that you're really really passionate
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about keep it in plenty of authors
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do also as you're editing check the
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timeline and make sure everything's
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accurate you know don't include little
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details there or you know make sure
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things are consistent throughout and
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that you haven't sort of said one thing
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somewhere and something else somewhere
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else just make sure it's all as
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consistent as possible and then once
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you've done this whole process you need
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to repeat it do the whole thing again
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read the book from the beginning all the
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way through to the end tightening up
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dialogue tightening up scenes making
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sure it's pacy and keeping the story
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moving forward if you find that your
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characters have gone off on a tangent
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that maybe you quite enjoyed writing but
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actually really doesn't add very much to
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the story line think about trimming that
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down or cutting it out completely you
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just want your story to always feel as
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though it's you want your story to be a
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page Turner you know this is ultimately
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what it comes down to and as I say with
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my editor with Lucy in the Sky she cut
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out a whole chapter she cut out
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paragraphs here she cut out paragraphs
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there that weren't really adding to the
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story I'd really enjoyed writing those
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paragraphs but um if they didn't really
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add anything I've always sort of said
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since you know when readers say that my
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books are a page Turner well that's you
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know partly down to my editor you know
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she cut out all of that loose wood and
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just kept going forward so you'll need
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to do that job for yourself or get a
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really great friend who's very very good
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at at grammar and and ask for their
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opinion but when I talk to you about
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friends also do be a little bit careful
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because if you give your book to too
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many friends to read and only give it to
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them when you feel really happy with
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your book and make sure you get to the
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end first because any constructive
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criticism may damage your confidence and
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stop you from writing so you want to get
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to the end of your book first and then
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have edited it you know enough times
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yourself and then you will find you know
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that if you give trusted people to read
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it they may have different opinions as
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to what needs to be done to the story
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and that can be really overwhelming so
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ultimately you need to have a pretty
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clear idea of what you think your story
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needs and what your readers will get
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from it because if one friend says I
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didn't really like this part of the
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story line and another friend says I you
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know I liked this more than anything
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else ultimately you have to listen to
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your heart the most important thing for
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you is to write the book that you love
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and if you love writing it then
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guaranteed you will find readers out
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there who love reading it just as much
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as you loved writing it so that's what
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you're looking
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for so I'm just going to finish this
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lesson again with these words of advice
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but the most important one is do get
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yourself a copy of the writers and
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artists yearbook the most recent Edition
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because it has all the up-to-date
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information about agents where they work
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and it also gives you some fantastic
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advice on how to write a cover letter
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how to draft a synopsis and it also
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helps you with self-publishing advice
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because if you don't end up getting an
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agent do not disp fair you know it might
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be that you will end up publishing this
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book and it might end up becoming a huge
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success and later get a traditional
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publishing deal you know you just don't
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know that's happened to so many people
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but you know the most important thing is
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just to really really enjoy the book
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that you're writing write it for
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yourself don't write it for anyone else
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just enjoy it so we're reaching the end
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of the course but we still have one
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final video where I'm going to outline
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the essential steps you'll need to
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follow in order to start writing your
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book and especially those first two
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pages
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