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These are the user uploaded subtitles that are being translated: 1 00:00:00,120 --> 00:00:02,670 Mm... 2 00:00:03,510 --> 00:00:04,320 I've returned. 3 00:00:05,180 --> 00:00:05,770 Hello. 4 00:00:06,459 --> 00:00:07,230 Welcome back. 5 00:00:07,270 --> 00:00:09,870 Now we're gonna talk about Mabitorial leads. 6 00:00:09,870 --> 00:00:12,260 We went through the headlines, and now we're gonna talk about the next thing 7 00:00:12,270 --> 00:00:13,739 that we would test in the Mabitorial. 8 00:00:14,245 --> 00:00:19,095 Are the leads or the lead of an abitorial now, a couple of things about leads. 9 00:00:19,105 --> 00:00:23,585 First off is that leads for an abitorial are much, much shorter than a lead 10 00:00:23,585 --> 00:00:26,085 for a VSL or for a sales letter. 11 00:00:26,105 --> 00:00:29,605 Sales letter leads tend to be like max, maybe 500 words, 12 00:00:30,055 --> 00:00:32,024 maybe 800 is even pushing it. 13 00:00:32,284 --> 00:00:36,605 I see leads that are way too long because also a lot of copywriters 14 00:00:36,605 --> 00:00:40,315 feel like everything has to go on that lead in order for to pull you through. 15 00:00:41,214 --> 00:00:42,624 Keep in mind with abitorial. 16 00:00:43,124 --> 00:00:46,084 It is get to it, get to it, right? 17 00:00:46,084 --> 00:00:49,765 They're going from an ad to an advertorial to then to the product. 18 00:00:49,785 --> 00:00:55,555 So the lead, if you think about the overall advertorial being max 1200 words. 19 00:00:56,540 --> 00:00:59,480 So you can kind of see, like, if that's the max, the lead is 20 00:00:59,480 --> 00:01:00,710 going to be much, much shorter. 21 00:01:00,720 --> 00:01:02,269 It's a couple paragraphs. 22 00:01:02,589 --> 00:01:05,199 It's at most, like, 250 words. 23 00:01:05,230 --> 00:01:07,049 It really shouldn't be that long at all. 24 00:01:07,380 --> 00:01:09,270 So what's great, though, is you could test a lot. 25 00:01:09,280 --> 00:01:12,930 You could test a lot of different leads to see which one is capturing. 26 00:01:12,959 --> 00:01:16,470 That's why when we test advertorials, we always test the headlines and 27 00:01:16,470 --> 00:01:18,110 the leads and the hero image. 28 00:01:18,559 --> 00:01:20,069 Of course, the offering, yada, yada, yada. 29 00:01:20,149 --> 00:01:24,589 But when it comes to the actual copy itself and the look on the 30 00:01:24,589 --> 00:01:28,469 page, headline, the lead, and the hero image above the fold. 31 00:01:28,630 --> 00:01:28,969 Okay. 32 00:01:29,399 --> 00:01:31,579 So let's go over the Mavatoria leads. 33 00:01:31,819 --> 00:01:35,439 Now with the leads, keep in mind, these are the three main ones that I 34 00:01:35,459 --> 00:01:37,339 see in the three main ones that I use. 35 00:01:37,699 --> 00:01:41,339 Now does that mean that these are the only three available, the only three that work? 36 00:01:41,340 --> 00:01:42,899 No, no, no, no, no. 37 00:01:43,250 --> 00:01:45,009 There are so many different types out there. 38 00:01:45,350 --> 00:01:47,850 A lot of times I have also seen combinations. 39 00:01:48,355 --> 00:01:51,405 So keep that in mind too, like just like in headlines, how we do a combination 40 00:01:51,415 --> 00:01:57,295 that might have a social proof with a stat and so on, uh, how kind of avatar, 41 00:01:57,355 --> 00:02:03,795 how kind of headline with an emotional, uh, personal story and so on, like that, 42 00:02:03,835 --> 00:02:05,325 there could be combinations as well. 43 00:02:05,325 --> 00:02:08,305 So I'm going to show you the three main types of leads that 44 00:02:08,315 --> 00:02:11,285 I always tend to go to, and I'll show you then of course examples. 45 00:02:11,575 --> 00:02:14,495 So here's the doc that you're going to be able to use, you could just... 46 00:02:14,760 --> 00:02:17,650 Copy paste over and then rewrite it. 47 00:02:17,780 --> 00:02:21,970 Um, but you get this idea when it comes to this, to these types. 48 00:02:22,030 --> 00:02:26,440 Um, sorry, I got, I'm not going to cut this at all. 49 00:02:26,480 --> 00:02:29,079 You get to see me struggle with something in my throat. 50 00:02:29,329 --> 00:02:30,289 I'm going to have a sip of coffee. 51 00:02:36,320 --> 00:02:38,030 Okay, so let's go through it. 52 00:02:38,040 --> 00:02:40,790 So first, uh, the first lead I want to talk about is the disruptor lead. 53 00:02:40,799 --> 00:02:42,160 Just like the disruptor headline. 54 00:02:42,535 --> 00:02:44,565 This is now going more into it. 55 00:02:44,575 --> 00:02:49,285 So the idea is a couple of things are, it's always a startup company that is 56 00:02:49,614 --> 00:02:51,864 disrupting this billion dollar industry. 57 00:02:52,295 --> 00:02:55,995 And because everyone loves an underdog and they love an underdog disrupting 58 00:02:55,995 --> 00:02:58,984 a billion dollar industry because they always say billion dollar industries 59 00:02:58,985 --> 00:03:04,584 are like these non personal personality type of brands that don't care about you 60 00:03:04,815 --> 00:03:06,445 and they're just look how big they are. 61 00:03:06,445 --> 00:03:07,775 They don't care about how you feel. 62 00:03:07,775 --> 00:03:08,445 And like people just. 63 00:03:08,780 --> 00:03:10,280 Eat up their products, right? 64 00:03:10,680 --> 00:03:14,690 So the underdog tale of a disrupting billion dollar industry So this 65 00:03:14,690 --> 00:03:18,750 one I use for this brand right here, uh for this product for this. 66 00:03:18,849 --> 00:03:25,140 Uh, Yes this offer now where I got this is I know that this lead is working So this 67 00:03:25,149 --> 00:03:30,110 is based on like what i'm seeing working in a lot of ads in the beauty brand ads. 68 00:03:30,110 --> 00:03:34,355 So a lot of it is Is going against the big enemy being the beauty brand 69 00:03:34,365 --> 00:03:38,345 industry So right here think the beauty industry is your friend think again 70 00:03:38,585 --> 00:03:41,265 beauty companies have been ripping women off with overpriced creams that 71 00:03:41,265 --> 00:03:44,775 do nothing for one's skin and then it goes It goes into this part, a genius 72 00:03:44,785 --> 00:03:48,394 startup company is fighting back against high end beauty brands with a simple and 73 00:03:48,394 --> 00:03:53,445 affordable skin rejuvenating therapy wand that's 100% safe, easy to use and can 74 00:03:53,445 --> 00:03:57,305 help turn back the clock on skin cells for a vibrant youthful look in minutes. 75 00:03:57,864 --> 00:03:59,334 Then it goes into the company. 76 00:03:59,364 --> 00:04:02,745 The company Revita Beauty has discovered how to use the same 77 00:04:02,755 --> 00:04:06,565 youth defying practices commonly used by A list celebrities, 78 00:04:06,565 --> 00:04:07,815 but at a fraction of the price. 79 00:04:08,165 --> 00:04:11,565 without seeing a dermatologist, expensive medical spa, or wasting 80 00:04:11,565 --> 00:04:13,375 money on skin damaging injections. 81 00:04:13,695 --> 00:04:15,385 So there's a lot to unpack here, right? 82 00:04:15,385 --> 00:04:18,935 So first off, it's, it's fighting against these big beauty brands 83 00:04:18,935 --> 00:04:20,055 with something that is affordable. 84 00:04:20,055 --> 00:04:21,885 You can easy, you can use at home. 85 00:04:22,315 --> 00:04:25,335 It's 100% safe and it can, what does it do? 86 00:04:25,525 --> 00:04:28,824 It turns back the clock on skin cells for vibrant looking minutes. 87 00:04:28,834 --> 00:04:32,185 So it gives them that benefit, that outcome of what they want, what the 88 00:04:32,185 --> 00:04:35,545 company is and how they discover this youth defining practices. 89 00:04:35,935 --> 00:04:39,465 It's commonly used by A list celebrities, so that's another part two, where it's 90 00:04:39,505 --> 00:04:44,304 used by people that they aspire to be, this A list celebrity, or not aspire, but 91 00:04:44,305 --> 00:04:47,574 they look upon these A list celebrities like, wow, how do they look so amazing? 92 00:04:47,995 --> 00:04:50,205 How are they able to look still so young? 93 00:04:50,555 --> 00:04:50,955 Um. 94 00:04:52,215 --> 00:04:54,895 And so, and also with that age list celebrity, it's kind of like 95 00:04:54,895 --> 00:04:59,854 this guarded secret that people also want to know, like, what is 96 00:04:59,854 --> 00:05:01,494 it that they have that I don't? 97 00:05:01,934 --> 00:05:05,044 That's something that's also used in lots of different industries. 98 00:05:05,044 --> 00:05:09,044 So, I use that also in the bodybuilding community, where it's like, what are the 99 00:05:09,054 --> 00:05:11,504 big guys at the gym doing that I'm not? 100 00:05:11,574 --> 00:05:12,804 Obviously steroids, right? 101 00:05:13,034 --> 00:05:17,685 But it's like, Um, what are the big guys at the gyms doing, like what are 102 00:05:17,685 --> 00:05:22,684 the secrets that they are using that I'm not and I want to know about it. 103 00:05:23,284 --> 00:05:26,874 That also, and then it's revealed, you know, you're able to look this big, 104 00:05:27,015 --> 00:05:29,825 I'm now talking about the bodybuilders, you're able to look this big, get 105 00:05:29,825 --> 00:05:34,025 this mean and so on without dirty gear and injections and all this stuff 106 00:05:34,025 --> 00:05:35,455 and you're able to do it naturally. 107 00:05:35,635 --> 00:05:36,249 So yeah, yeah. 108 00:05:37,250 --> 00:05:37,740 It works. 109 00:05:37,790 --> 00:05:41,700 So then you also unpack it by this, by also going against the 110 00:05:41,700 --> 00:05:42,900 objections that they don't want to do. 111 00:05:42,930 --> 00:05:45,900 They don't want to see a dermatologist, because it's expensive, and also maybe 112 00:05:45,900 --> 00:05:46,990 they don't have the money for it. 113 00:05:47,090 --> 00:05:49,389 They don't want to go to an expensive medical spa, which usually is 114 00:05:49,410 --> 00:05:51,469 multiple, multiple, uh, multiples. 115 00:05:52,724 --> 00:05:55,875 in order to look great or wasting money on skin damaging injections. 116 00:05:55,875 --> 00:05:58,405 So a lot of women that go get injections, maybe it doesn't 117 00:05:58,405 --> 00:05:59,604 turn out the way they want it to. 118 00:05:59,604 --> 00:06:02,905 Their lips can look funnier or something and it looks very fake. 119 00:06:03,044 --> 00:06:03,385 Right? 120 00:06:03,865 --> 00:06:06,824 So then it goes, so that's that one. 121 00:06:06,824 --> 00:06:07,345 Then this. 122 00:06:07,805 --> 00:06:08,965 This other one, same idea. 123 00:06:09,555 --> 00:06:12,305 The affordable smartwatch big tech companies don't want you to know about. 124 00:06:12,335 --> 00:06:13,815 I took this from just an ad. 125 00:06:14,325 --> 00:06:16,275 So this is also always used. 126 00:06:16,304 --> 00:06:17,395 This has been used forever. 127 00:06:17,404 --> 00:06:22,384 Like the blank blank that doctors, doctors don't want you to know about. 128 00:06:22,654 --> 00:06:27,755 The, you know, you can replace that with like the, the natural The natural 129 00:06:27,844 --> 00:06:32,125 plant remedy that doctors don't want you to know about because it's like it's 130 00:06:32,125 --> 00:06:35,525 going to hurt their bottom line and so on and these that would obviously go 131 00:06:35,525 --> 00:06:39,254 towards an audience that are skeptical of doctors that are doctors are just 132 00:06:39,265 --> 00:06:43,575 pill peddlers that are just like throwing another pill at you for them. 133 00:06:43,775 --> 00:06:46,445 For so they can make money off of you type of idea, right? 134 00:06:46,875 --> 00:06:49,835 So with this the affordable smartwatch big tech companies don't want you to know 135 00:06:49,835 --> 00:06:55,025 about a genius startup company again Same idea is flipping the five billion dollar 136 00:06:55,025 --> 00:06:57,335 in smartwatch industry on its head The u. 137 00:06:57,335 --> 00:06:57,464 s. 138 00:06:57,464 --> 00:07:00,705 Based company behind active track pro has invented a sleek easy to use smartwatch 139 00:07:00,705 --> 00:07:05,484 specifically designed for seniors So this is i'm going to i'm going right for 140 00:07:05,484 --> 00:07:08,915 that audience because like smartwatches can be used by everyone, right? 141 00:07:08,935 --> 00:07:13,845 but I notice Where we can have a leg up is when you're doing your research 142 00:07:13,865 --> 00:07:17,235 and you're looking at your competitors And then you're understanding your 143 00:07:17,235 --> 00:07:20,624 audience even better than they are and you're gonna see this too If you if 144 00:07:20,625 --> 00:07:24,684 you look at my bonus I actually write this abiturial from start to strip from 145 00:07:24,685 --> 00:07:29,225 start to finish for this and how I'm able to get to there and talk about the 146 00:07:29,225 --> 00:07:34,820 audience and and really home in on the actual The audience that we're going for. 147 00:07:34,820 --> 00:07:39,220 So it's not just this broad, like everyone wants a smartwatch and it's affordable, 148 00:07:39,250 --> 00:07:42,870 not really because a lot of the, because you're going to get a younger crowd 149 00:07:42,890 --> 00:07:45,910 that it was like, they want the big brand, they want the Apple watch, right? 150 00:07:46,270 --> 00:07:48,380 But seniors, they don't, they don't care. 151 00:07:48,440 --> 00:07:50,089 They don't care about the big brand, not all of them. 152 00:07:50,590 --> 00:07:53,299 Uh, but a lot of them don't care about it. 153 00:07:53,299 --> 00:07:56,230 They just want something that is one seniors love. 154 00:07:56,590 --> 00:07:57,750 Something that is affordable. 155 00:07:57,810 --> 00:07:58,840 They don't want to get ripped off. 156 00:07:59,100 --> 00:08:02,070 They want something affordable that also isn't cheap and isn't going to fall apart. 157 00:08:02,460 --> 00:08:05,130 And also another thing too, is they don't want it to be complicated. 158 00:08:05,140 --> 00:08:09,019 So, and then when I'm calling it out, it's like, that's something 159 00:08:09,020 --> 00:08:10,860 really, really, uh, powerful. 160 00:08:10,860 --> 00:08:12,920 And this has also been used for a long time too. 161 00:08:13,170 --> 00:08:14,769 I have some other examples. 162 00:08:14,820 --> 00:08:16,289 Uh, you could see it in magazines. 163 00:08:16,610 --> 00:08:18,930 There's a laptop that's made specifically for seniors. 164 00:08:18,930 --> 00:08:19,980 And that's like the headline. 165 00:08:19,980 --> 00:08:22,610 It's like, finally, a laptop made specifically for seniors. 166 00:08:22,620 --> 00:08:26,049 It's like, so it's, it's, it's using the tech. 167 00:08:26,255 --> 00:08:30,675 That seniors feel like they have to catch up to, but they don't want to deal 168 00:08:30,675 --> 00:08:32,145 with something that's more complicated. 169 00:08:32,455 --> 00:08:37,135 So it's like it's designed for them and they feel it's great, you know, 170 00:08:37,534 --> 00:08:41,544 um, so anyway Going into this active track pro is easy to set up can be done 171 00:08:41,544 --> 00:08:44,194 in seconds So that's something I want to make sure that they know because I 172 00:08:44,205 --> 00:08:48,829 noticed that a lot of The pain point is that a lot of people were confused 173 00:08:48,829 --> 00:08:50,550 or like it's complicated to set up. 174 00:08:50,550 --> 00:08:51,530 They got to get on a call. 175 00:08:51,530 --> 00:08:52,390 They have to figure out tech. 176 00:08:52,390 --> 00:08:54,209 They got to go online and look up instructions. 177 00:08:54,209 --> 00:08:58,730 They hate that and can do all the awesome features and as expensive smartwatches, 178 00:08:58,770 --> 00:09:00,260 but at a fraction of the cost. 179 00:09:00,480 --> 00:09:01,870 I mean, what more can you want, right? 180 00:09:02,110 --> 00:09:04,350 So this is, that's, that's all the lead is. 181 00:09:04,520 --> 00:09:06,390 It's just that this is how long it is. 182 00:09:06,670 --> 00:09:07,480 That's the lead. 183 00:09:07,920 --> 00:09:08,490 Literally. 184 00:09:08,710 --> 00:09:09,460 That's the lead. 185 00:09:09,930 --> 00:09:10,810 How long is that? 186 00:09:11,260 --> 00:09:12,150 That is. 187 00:09:12,630 --> 00:09:14,020 74 words? 188 00:09:15,350 --> 00:09:17,650 I mean, tight lead. 189 00:09:18,300 --> 00:09:19,449 You don't need a lot. 190 00:09:19,850 --> 00:09:21,120 You don't need a lot at all. 191 00:09:21,130 --> 00:09:25,160 Again, I am not, for this kind of lead, you are not trying to like 192 00:09:25,169 --> 00:09:27,360 pull them in on a certain emotion. 193 00:09:27,370 --> 00:09:31,209 I'm like, father, father, are you dying, father? 194 00:09:31,990 --> 00:09:35,060 Where's your smartwatch that tells you that you're dying, father? 195 00:09:35,460 --> 00:09:38,000 Like, you don't need to do anything dumb like that. 196 00:09:38,439 --> 00:09:42,849 I'll get to those emotional ones later, but it doesn't need to be this long, 197 00:09:42,860 --> 00:09:45,300 drawn out, ridiculous, emotional thing. 198 00:09:45,350 --> 00:09:47,619 Again, an abiturial is get to it. 199 00:09:47,760 --> 00:09:48,869 Get to the thing. 200 00:09:49,220 --> 00:09:51,730 What is it and how it's gonna benefit them? 201 00:09:51,730 --> 00:09:54,070 So then the next one is, look at this one. 202 00:09:54,070 --> 00:09:55,560 This one's also really, really short. 203 00:09:55,620 --> 00:09:56,250 This is the leaf. 204 00:09:56,950 --> 00:09:57,930 How short is this? 205 00:09:58,720 --> 00:09:59,970 57, even tighter. 206 00:09:59,980 --> 00:10:04,780 So this is for a security cam, uh, that, yeah. 207 00:10:04,969 --> 00:10:08,140 So it's a, it's those, this one has done really, really well. 208 00:10:08,140 --> 00:10:09,529 This is a great product that has done. 209 00:10:10,005 --> 00:10:11,035 Great in sales. 210 00:10:11,324 --> 00:10:16,324 So it's a, you can, I'm like looking around like, like there's an answer up in 211 00:10:16,334 --> 00:10:17,925 the ceiling, but it's a light socket one. 212 00:10:17,925 --> 00:10:20,385 You can screw it in and it's a security camera. 213 00:10:20,385 --> 00:10:23,704 And then you can, you can like move it around on your phone and stuff. 214 00:10:23,704 --> 00:10:26,224 But it's a, we called it a light socket security cam. 215 00:10:26,640 --> 00:10:26,990 Perfect. 216 00:10:27,320 --> 00:10:28,310 Doesn't need to be complicated. 217 00:10:28,790 --> 00:10:31,430 So would you like a security cam that keeps a permanent and stable connection 218 00:10:31,430 --> 00:10:35,730 without breaking the bank or dealing with shady expense and expensive installers? 219 00:10:35,730 --> 00:10:38,110 Immediately going right for the jugular in this. 220 00:10:38,209 --> 00:10:41,510 When I say jugular, like you'll, we'll talk about more like the, uh, 221 00:10:41,510 --> 00:10:43,819 throat grabber kind of lead, right? 222 00:10:43,920 --> 00:10:50,650 We don't need to, I don't need to go drawn out of, uh, this 223 00:10:50,650 --> 00:10:52,410 long lead to try to pull them in. 224 00:10:52,410 --> 00:10:53,390 I'm going right for it. 225 00:10:53,750 --> 00:10:56,180 And one of the biggest problems that I see. 226 00:10:56,439 --> 00:11:00,420 That a lot of our, um, pain point, a big pain point for a lot of 227 00:11:00,420 --> 00:11:02,860 these people when it deals with these kind of security cameras is 228 00:11:02,880 --> 00:11:04,410 like it doesn't keep a connection. 229 00:11:04,800 --> 00:11:06,319 So it keeps getting disconnected. 230 00:11:06,550 --> 00:11:09,180 So like if they try to get on their phone or whatever, it's disconnected. 231 00:11:09,399 --> 00:11:13,439 So this is something we want to back it up with like proof that 232 00:11:13,439 --> 00:11:15,179 this does a stable connection. 233 00:11:15,189 --> 00:11:15,749 It's amazing. 234 00:11:16,039 --> 00:11:19,759 So I wanted to go right for the jugular and I think this is this is Lee that did. 235 00:11:19,980 --> 00:11:22,790 The best out of the three that I did would you like a security 236 00:11:22,790 --> 00:11:25,270 cam that keeps a permanent stable connection without breaking the bank? 237 00:11:25,350 --> 00:11:26,230 So it's cheap. 238 00:11:26,410 --> 00:11:29,420 It's affordable or dealing with shading expensive installers. 239 00:11:29,420 --> 00:11:33,600 So Just like the other cameras that maybe you have to deal with 240 00:11:33,650 --> 00:11:38,505 installers or also a lot of wiring People don't want to deal with that. 241 00:11:38,515 --> 00:11:42,375 They just want it, they want it simple to install and this is really that. 242 00:11:42,415 --> 00:11:46,145 It's like you scan the QR code, you screw it in and boom, it's set to go. 243 00:11:46,564 --> 00:11:48,535 So, and then it goes right into this, the U. 244 00:11:48,535 --> 00:11:48,645 S. 245 00:11:48,645 --> 00:11:49,834 based tech company. 246 00:11:50,335 --> 00:11:50,904 This U. 247 00:11:50,904 --> 00:11:51,094 S. 248 00:11:51,125 --> 00:11:53,015 based tech, uh, tech company. 249 00:11:53,015 --> 00:11:54,344 So again, I also say U. 250 00:11:54,345 --> 00:11:54,505 S. 251 00:11:54,505 --> 00:11:54,825 based. 252 00:11:54,865 --> 00:11:57,764 This is really important too for if you're selling to Americans. 253 00:11:57,764 --> 00:11:58,995 They want to know that it's a U. 254 00:11:58,995 --> 00:11:59,145 S. 255 00:11:59,145 --> 00:11:59,659 based thing. 256 00:12:00,630 --> 00:12:03,880 It's disrupting a billion dollar market with their latest invention affordable 257 00:12:03,910 --> 00:12:07,140 indoor outdoor security camera that screws into most light sockets and 258 00:12:07,140 --> 00:12:08,700 works with either iPhone or Android. 259 00:12:09,435 --> 00:12:09,725 That's it. 260 00:12:10,535 --> 00:12:10,835 That's it. 261 00:12:10,905 --> 00:12:12,005 Just go right for it. 262 00:12:12,005 --> 00:12:13,585 And then it goes right into the body of it. 263 00:12:13,595 --> 00:12:14,145 What is it? 264 00:12:14,145 --> 00:12:14,595 And so on. 265 00:12:14,615 --> 00:12:15,675 So I'll get to that later. 266 00:12:17,225 --> 00:12:20,035 All right, the logic headline stating a startling fact and then 267 00:12:20,035 --> 00:12:21,044 following up with a solution. 268 00:12:21,044 --> 00:12:22,465 So I'm gonna give you some examples here. 269 00:12:22,655 --> 00:12:27,255 So now this is, you know, this is the giving the stat of like 270 00:12:27,600 --> 00:12:28,680 I mean, I'll just go through it. 271 00:12:28,689 --> 00:12:31,750 So, the average person spends about 26 of their life sleeping. 272 00:12:31,760 --> 00:12:34,120 That means you're spending 26 years of your life in bed sheets. 273 00:12:34,120 --> 00:12:38,360 So, why not spend that time in the best bed sheets in the world? 274 00:12:38,659 --> 00:12:41,480 It should come as no surprise that the quality of your sleep plays a huge 275 00:12:41,480 --> 00:12:42,800 role in your long term health, too. 276 00:12:43,130 --> 00:12:44,719 We've got good sleep starts with good sheets. 277 00:12:44,730 --> 00:12:46,059 Sheets are soft, well soft. 278 00:12:46,960 --> 00:12:48,920 So the idea is a big startling fact. 279 00:12:49,280 --> 00:12:50,470 I don't know how startling this is. 280 00:12:50,490 --> 00:12:53,910 Also, you're selling bedsheets, so you don't need to be super emotional with it. 281 00:12:54,300 --> 00:12:58,100 Now, also, if you look at Blissy, Blissy had this as well, where it's, 282 00:12:58,439 --> 00:13:00,390 uh, they would have a startling fact. 283 00:13:00,550 --> 00:13:01,630 I think it was a... 284 00:13:02,275 --> 00:13:02,845 I can't remember. 285 00:13:02,855 --> 00:13:06,705 They had multiple different leads, and I can probably show those examples as well. 286 00:13:07,035 --> 00:13:09,985 But if you're to look up Blissey, they've done really well with 287 00:13:10,025 --> 00:13:11,885 their advertorials for years. 288 00:13:12,225 --> 00:13:16,175 Um, and I think the one that did really well for a while is actually Personal 289 00:13:16,175 --> 00:13:17,845 Story, so we'll get down to that later. 290 00:13:18,305 --> 00:13:21,545 So the idea is it spends 26 years of life sleeping, so it's, it kind 291 00:13:21,585 --> 00:13:22,905 of makes you sit up and go, Oh! 292 00:13:23,439 --> 00:13:24,689 Oh, wow. 293 00:13:25,040 --> 00:13:26,520 You know, 26 years of your life sleeping, and it kind of makes 294 00:13:26,520 --> 00:13:28,069 you go, Oh, that means you use it. 295 00:13:28,420 --> 00:13:29,280 And bedsheets. 296 00:13:29,459 --> 00:13:31,620 You spend 26 years of your life in bedsheets. 297 00:13:31,939 --> 00:13:34,319 So why not spend that time in the best bedsheets in the world? 298 00:13:34,500 --> 00:13:35,380 Okay, that makes sense. 299 00:13:35,410 --> 00:13:36,660 You know, are you kind of making logic? 300 00:13:36,670 --> 00:13:38,300 Like, yeah, it's 26 years life. 301 00:13:38,309 --> 00:13:39,819 Why not make it the best, right? 302 00:13:40,990 --> 00:13:43,610 And this is selling the Miracle, uh, bedsheets. 303 00:13:43,640 --> 00:13:48,790 So it's those anti bacterial bedsheets, is their whole angle, made with like 304 00:13:48,800 --> 00:13:50,250 silver thread and all this stuff. 305 00:13:50,339 --> 00:13:51,290 And which, I have some. 306 00:13:51,300 --> 00:13:51,890 And they're good. 307 00:13:51,969 --> 00:13:52,339 They're nice. 308 00:13:52,339 --> 00:13:53,089 They're nice and soft. 309 00:13:53,560 --> 00:13:55,550 Um, so again, startling fact. 310 00:13:55,880 --> 00:13:57,280 It's just going into that startling fact. 311 00:13:57,280 --> 00:13:57,950 So here's another one. 312 00:13:57,950 --> 00:13:59,260 This is for finance. 313 00:13:59,649 --> 00:14:01,440 Many Americans worry they're not saving enough for their 314 00:14:01,440 --> 00:14:02,550 retirement, rightfully so. 315 00:14:02,925 --> 00:14:08,875 Um, a 20, 2022 Northwestern Mutual study found that 62% of US adults admit their 316 00:14:08,875 --> 00:14:10,264 financial planning needs improvement. 317 00:14:10,274 --> 00:14:13,585 However, only 35% of Americans work with a financial advisor. 318 00:14:13,744 --> 00:14:18,285 So it's going, this is a lead gen for, I think it's a smart asset. 319 00:14:18,414 --> 00:14:26,205 So it's a lead gen to that to get on, uh, A financial advisor list within 320 00:14:26,205 --> 00:14:29,795 your area, so the idea is you put in your name and all this and then it 321 00:14:29,795 --> 00:14:33,624 would go to like the top three financial advisors in your area and they would, 322 00:14:33,805 --> 00:14:36,605 whoever reaches out to you first idea. 323 00:14:37,025 --> 00:14:38,745 Uh, so lead gen editorial. 324 00:14:38,765 --> 00:14:42,105 So again, a startling, I don't know how startling that is, but they're giving 325 00:14:42,105 --> 00:14:46,435 a fact like, hey, you know, you're part of the, is it that great of a lead? 326 00:14:46,745 --> 00:14:47,255 I don't know. 327 00:14:47,255 --> 00:14:48,025 I don't, I don't know. 328 00:14:48,525 --> 00:14:50,095 Obviously, it's hard to tell. 329 00:14:50,135 --> 00:14:52,605 You can always, I never know anymore. 330 00:14:52,810 --> 00:14:54,890 I always and that's another thing too is keep in mind. 331 00:14:55,160 --> 00:14:59,890 You don't know what you don't know like, um, like I mentioned before in one of 332 00:14:59,900 --> 00:15:05,230 the videos you a lot of copywriters tend to be like Ah, my lead will crush. 333 00:15:05,230 --> 00:15:08,960 I know it'll crush because they have a lot of ego and they think that what 334 00:15:08,960 --> 00:15:12,740 they're writing is awesome and then it gets tested and they're like, oh, 335 00:15:13,239 --> 00:15:14,629 I'm not that great of a copywriter. 336 00:15:15,889 --> 00:15:17,739 But the truth is, is you just don't know. 337 00:15:17,739 --> 00:15:18,819 No, you're a great copywriter. 338 00:15:18,829 --> 00:15:22,100 But what makes a great copywriter is you just keep going, keep going and 339 00:15:22,100 --> 00:15:25,360 then keep researching and then keep trying again and again and again. 340 00:15:25,610 --> 00:15:27,220 So what I would do is, um. 341 00:15:27,654 --> 00:15:34,125 Test up this I I did a some finance advertorials in the past for like watchdog 342 00:15:34,145 --> 00:15:39,495 and stuff and I did What worked in the past as well is some sort of embarrassing 343 00:15:39,495 --> 00:15:43,925 story Embarrassing story about like their credit card perhaps declining. 344 00:15:44,264 --> 00:15:49,235 So maybe it's like a credit report kind of fix And so that would be lean more 345 00:15:49,235 --> 00:15:52,495 towards that emotion because no one wants to be embarrassed by like their credit 346 00:15:52,495 --> 00:15:54,185 card declining or something like that. 347 00:15:54,194 --> 00:15:55,914 That's super embarrassing, especially in public. 348 00:15:55,915 --> 00:15:56,185 Right? 349 00:15:56,505 --> 00:15:59,535 So the big thing that you have to know is. 350 00:15:59,885 --> 00:16:01,335 Always go back to the audience. 351 00:16:01,365 --> 00:16:04,965 Whenever in doubt, you're not sure, and you're like, oh, I want to write this 352 00:16:04,965 --> 00:16:08,524 over here, and I've seen copywriters that are like, I'm guessing this angle, 353 00:16:08,525 --> 00:16:12,505 I'm guessing, I'm trying out these three leads, and I'm guessing, because 354 00:16:12,505 --> 00:16:18,004 that's what, you know, I, uh, I believe these things, and like, don't, it sounds 355 00:16:18,004 --> 00:16:19,165 like you don't know your audience. 356 00:16:19,775 --> 00:16:25,020 When you know your audience, then you know, okay, I'm the more I've researched 357 00:16:25,020 --> 00:16:28,560 the more I realized that this lead will probably work because it seems like this 358 00:16:28,560 --> 00:16:32,349 is the biggest complaint This is the biggest pain point that they're suffering 359 00:16:32,349 --> 00:16:36,229 with And so then you agitate that pain point followed by the solution right the 360 00:16:36,699 --> 00:16:44,560 PAS system pain agitate salute salute solve solution So that's the always 361 00:16:44,560 --> 00:16:49,165 the thing always remember when in doubt Don't guess, go back to the audience. 362 00:16:49,694 --> 00:16:53,395 Go back to the audience that you're serving, uh, with the offer and 363 00:16:53,415 --> 00:16:57,285 understand them better and then they will reveal the lead to you. 364 00:16:57,734 --> 00:17:00,015 Uh, if you're not sure, get on the phone with them too. 365 00:17:00,035 --> 00:17:03,545 There's so many conversations I've had with the audience that we're serving, 366 00:17:03,735 --> 00:17:08,159 uh, through testimonial or, so like if, say for instance, Uh, nice little tip, 367 00:17:08,159 --> 00:17:11,220 like, as soon as the product is being sold or something, get on the phone 368 00:17:11,220 --> 00:17:12,410 with people that are buying the product. 369 00:17:12,470 --> 00:17:13,280 Get on the phone with them. 370 00:17:13,770 --> 00:17:15,760 Why did they buy a bunch of this product? 371 00:17:15,929 --> 00:17:17,369 Why did they buy a bunch of this supplement? 372 00:17:17,379 --> 00:17:18,730 What are they going through? 373 00:17:19,149 --> 00:17:20,689 So you can understand them. 374 00:17:21,000 --> 00:17:25,099 So then what they're doing is just kind of like, it's, it's kind of 375 00:17:25,099 --> 00:17:28,319 silly, but it's like fat club, a fight, fat club, fight club. 376 00:17:29,675 --> 00:17:32,865 Whether talk about like we're selling their fat asses back to themselves 377 00:17:32,885 --> 00:17:38,205 like it sounds so just grim and so awful but the idea is like that if you 378 00:17:38,205 --> 00:17:41,375 remember seeing Fight Club where it's like the Liposuction and the fat and 379 00:17:41,375 --> 00:17:44,795 they're making soap and they're selling it back to these Uh, to the women. 380 00:17:44,905 --> 00:17:46,715 So it's, that sounds awful. 381 00:17:46,735 --> 00:17:50,965 I, I'm just the quick metaphor that came to mind, but the idea is you're taking, 382 00:17:51,085 --> 00:17:55,805 I use the information that they're giving me to then sell them, sell them. 383 00:17:55,865 --> 00:17:58,455 I'm selling them on basically what they've already told me. 384 00:17:58,875 --> 00:18:00,254 That's just making that connection. 385 00:18:00,255 --> 00:18:03,025 So they tell me of why they want to lose weight. 386 00:18:03,025 --> 00:18:03,325 Great. 387 00:18:03,325 --> 00:18:04,885 I now use that in the thing. 388 00:18:05,310 --> 00:18:08,830 To explain why you want to lose weight and there's more people like that person 389 00:18:08,830 --> 00:18:13,580 that just told me that story I'm not I'm not creating it being creative. 390 00:18:13,580 --> 00:18:16,740 I'm literally just taking like thank you for telling me your story I'm now 391 00:18:16,740 --> 00:18:18,739 gonna sell you your story back to you. 392 00:18:19,170 --> 00:18:20,309 That's really what it is. 393 00:18:20,480 --> 00:18:21,100 So there you go. 394 00:18:22,809 --> 00:18:25,710 So this one too, uh, Am I going deaf? 395 00:18:26,230 --> 00:18:28,430 Um, this starts with like a little quote right here. 396 00:18:28,430 --> 00:18:30,419 If you find yourself asking this question lately, I like 397 00:18:30,419 --> 00:18:31,629 this, I actually like this one. 398 00:18:31,899 --> 00:18:33,050 And this is for a hearing aid. 399 00:18:33,280 --> 00:18:36,670 Um, if you find yourself asking this question lately, you're not alone. 400 00:18:36,670 --> 00:18:39,910 A recent report revealed that nearly 500 million people now 401 00:18:39,910 --> 00:18:41,619 suffer from hearing loss worldwide. 402 00:18:41,620 --> 00:18:42,829 Of course, it's not normal for a hearing... 403 00:18:43,650 --> 00:18:47,200 Of course, it's normal for a hearing to fade over time, but what isn't 404 00:18:47,230 --> 00:18:49,660 normal is all the extremely loud noise. 405 00:18:49,660 --> 00:18:51,750 We're now exposed to on a daily basis. 406 00:18:51,780 --> 00:18:52,180 Interesting. 407 00:18:52,180 --> 00:18:53,349 That's like an interesting fact. 408 00:18:53,350 --> 00:18:53,600 Right? 409 00:18:54,040 --> 00:18:56,129 Uh, for example, did you know that listening to your headphones 410 00:18:56,129 --> 00:18:58,519 at more than 60% volume can cause permanent hearing loss? 411 00:18:58,850 --> 00:19:02,850 So some, I would also test the lead and just make it go and put that up there. 412 00:19:03,250 --> 00:19:06,729 Did you know, uh, if you have, you know, you can like, did you 413 00:19:06,729 --> 00:19:10,280 know, it depends on the market. 414 00:19:10,699 --> 00:19:11,740 Cause I'm at the same time. 415 00:19:11,740 --> 00:19:15,985 I'm like, how many seniors, If they're selling to seniors, how many of 416 00:19:15,985 --> 00:19:17,355 them are actually using headphones? 417 00:19:17,514 --> 00:19:17,845 I don't know. 418 00:19:19,205 --> 00:19:27,415 Uh, so the idea for this though, is I would, there's certain things I would 419 00:19:27,435 --> 00:19:29,774 probably cut or move things around. 420 00:19:31,374 --> 00:19:34,304 So, cause like, because at the same time, like does this. 421 00:19:34,919 --> 00:19:37,710 Speak to the audience, these two lines, and then it goes. 422 00:19:37,710 --> 00:19:40,260 So if you notice, you're asking to speak up a normal conversation. 423 00:19:40,580 --> 00:19:42,270 So that is different, right? 424 00:19:42,280 --> 00:19:45,220 That would be, that would probably be connecting more to an older crowd. 425 00:19:45,220 --> 00:19:49,529 Like, I don't know if they say speak up or like, or like, wait, repeat that. 426 00:19:49,560 --> 00:19:50,649 And you feel embarrassed. 427 00:19:50,790 --> 00:19:54,929 A lot of people just are feeling how embarrassing is it for like, hey, he's. 428 00:19:55,294 --> 00:19:55,905 Say that again. 429 00:19:56,064 --> 00:19:56,614 Say that again. 430 00:19:56,955 --> 00:20:01,035 Like, it's so embarrassing because you just feel bad because it's like, you don't 431 00:20:01,035 --> 00:20:04,605 want to, you don't want to put out the person that has to repeat it again because 432 00:20:04,605 --> 00:20:09,275 then it makes you feel bad and then you, and then it makes you feel as if like 433 00:20:09,435 --> 00:20:10,875 they think that you're not listening. 434 00:20:10,875 --> 00:20:13,764 It's like, no, I'm trying to listen, but it's just, my hearing is bad, you know? 435 00:20:14,044 --> 00:20:18,235 So anyway, but I just want to point this out though, that there is a stat 436 00:20:18,235 --> 00:20:19,815 up front, like, hey, did you know? 437 00:20:20,745 --> 00:20:21,504 Is it the best lead? 438 00:20:21,544 --> 00:20:21,844 I don't know. 439 00:20:22,340 --> 00:20:22,500 I don't know. 440 00:20:22,740 --> 00:20:25,530 I think it could probably be done better, but maybe it's winning right 441 00:20:25,530 --> 00:20:26,980 now and I could be completely wrong. 442 00:20:28,360 --> 00:20:28,580 All right. 443 00:20:28,590 --> 00:20:29,400 Emotional story lead. 444 00:20:29,850 --> 00:20:32,910 So this is now throw them into the emotional story that we can connect to. 445 00:20:32,950 --> 00:20:35,790 So this is the emotional story leads. 446 00:20:35,879 --> 00:20:37,169 This is the personal story. 447 00:20:37,539 --> 00:20:38,690 And we know that this works. 448 00:20:38,720 --> 00:20:44,519 And if you've taken any lessons from like Chris, a dad with his pig, with his 449 00:20:44,549 --> 00:20:48,570 pig method and stuff like he's classic, you know, really, really good at this. 450 00:20:48,580 --> 00:20:49,310 So I'm not going to go. 451 00:20:49,660 --> 00:20:52,200 You can learn a lot of the emotional storytelling. 452 00:20:52,210 --> 00:20:55,840 He's a game changer at that, so shout out to Chris for that. 453 00:20:56,150 --> 00:20:59,870 Uh, but I'll show you, that works also for advertorials 454 00:20:59,870 --> 00:21:01,189 as well, as a story based one. 455 00:21:01,459 --> 00:21:04,490 Especially when it comes around something that is, um, uh, 456 00:21:05,359 --> 00:21:08,709 fearful, something embarrassing, something that you can really use. 457 00:21:08,709 --> 00:21:14,720 But, you know, not every single gadget is gonna make them, I don't think 458 00:21:14,730 --> 00:21:21,219 every single gadget is, Gonna be emotionally driven, if that makes sense. 459 00:21:22,129 --> 00:21:24,590 When I say emotionally driven, a personal story. 460 00:21:24,590 --> 00:21:27,169 I think emotion's always involved, of course. 461 00:21:27,199 --> 00:21:30,230 And everything is considered a story, you can argue. 462 00:21:30,620 --> 00:21:33,829 But I don't think everything needs to go for, like, the jugular. 463 00:21:33,830 --> 00:21:36,560 And, like, father was dying on the patio. 464 00:21:36,840 --> 00:21:40,209 And, thankfully, I had this remote control car. 465 00:21:40,925 --> 00:21:45,555 You know, like some sort of gadget, like it doesn't need to be super, it just, 466 00:21:45,685 --> 00:21:47,205 and I'll show you an example of why. 467 00:21:47,665 --> 00:21:48,515 So here's one. 468 00:21:48,555 --> 00:21:53,155 So this is for the Better Butter Spreader, which I named, you know, 469 00:21:53,155 --> 00:21:54,304 like the Better Butter Spreader. 470 00:21:54,394 --> 00:21:54,634 Hmm. 471 00:21:54,864 --> 00:21:55,414 It's fun to say. 472 00:21:55,995 --> 00:21:59,455 So the Better Butter Spreader, it's this knife that has holes in it. 473 00:21:59,694 --> 00:22:02,775 And the whole, the whole benefit is you can now. 474 00:22:03,750 --> 00:22:06,450 Instead of having butter out on the counter and waiting forever to get to 475 00:22:06,450 --> 00:22:10,700 room temperature, you could take ice cold butter and scrape it over with this knife, 476 00:22:10,770 --> 00:22:14,970 and it comes out all noodley, and you're able to spread that over toast, or bread, 477 00:22:15,240 --> 00:22:17,150 without it getting chunked up and ruined. 478 00:22:17,150 --> 00:22:21,619 It can, it can actually, uh, be spread over smoothly. 479 00:22:22,235 --> 00:22:24,635 And it's because of those, that cool knife. 480 00:22:24,975 --> 00:22:30,645 So I think this is, this is the lead that did the best at the time 481 00:22:30,665 --> 00:22:32,165 where it's an emotional story. 482 00:22:32,694 --> 00:22:35,225 Uh, emotional story meaning it's nothing like super emotional, 483 00:22:35,225 --> 00:22:36,545 but it's, it's a story. 484 00:22:37,034 --> 00:22:40,155 Uh, I'm 55 and I almost stole something for the first time in my life. 485 00:22:40,194 --> 00:22:40,815 Here's what happened. 486 00:22:41,254 --> 00:22:42,675 So right away it's like, what? 487 00:22:43,020 --> 00:22:45,960 It makes you kind of like, huh, I'm 55 and I almost stole something 488 00:22:45,960 --> 00:22:47,000 for the first time in my life. 489 00:22:47,010 --> 00:22:47,610 Here's what happened. 490 00:22:48,210 --> 00:22:50,600 Husband and I went to a fancy restaurant for our 25th wedding anniversary. 491 00:22:50,600 --> 00:22:53,280 You could tell it was fancy because they had what looked like five sets of 492 00:22:53,280 --> 00:22:54,669 silverware on either side of the plate. 493 00:22:54,750 --> 00:22:57,670 Big spoons, little spoons, forks galore, and an assortment of knives. 494 00:22:58,010 --> 00:23:01,149 I didn't know what half of them were besides making me feel like a duchess. 495 00:23:01,540 --> 00:23:03,550 But there was one butter knife that I fell in love with. 496 00:23:03,570 --> 00:23:06,810 It's also the one that I wanted to stick in my purse and not tell a soul. 497 00:23:06,820 --> 00:23:08,139 It had these holes on. 498 00:23:08,230 --> 00:23:09,710 It had these holes on. 499 00:23:10,270 --> 00:23:10,970 Holes on? 500 00:23:11,080 --> 00:23:11,600 Nice Heath. 501 00:23:11,885 --> 00:23:12,195 Good. 502 00:23:12,455 --> 00:23:14,514 How's that English degree working out for you, Heath? 503 00:23:15,054 --> 00:23:16,505 It's working out okay. 504 00:23:17,465 --> 00:23:21,014 Ah, it had these holes in it. 505 00:23:25,185 --> 00:23:26,485 Or it had these holes. 506 00:23:31,034 --> 00:23:32,235 Yeah, we'll work it there. 507 00:23:32,905 --> 00:23:35,874 You get to see me, in real time, make a goof. 508 00:23:35,874 --> 00:23:37,225 Whatever, I'm not editing it out. 509 00:23:37,895 --> 00:23:39,194 You get to see the real me, baby! 510 00:23:39,824 --> 00:23:43,014 And when I scraped cold butter, the butter would go through these holes. 511 00:23:43,820 --> 00:23:47,190 And become creamy and fluffy, which made it super easy to spread on bread. 512 00:23:47,730 --> 00:23:51,310 Out of all the silverware, this is the one kitchen utensil that I felt is actually 513 00:23:51,310 --> 00:23:53,390 worth taking up space in a kitchen drawer. 514 00:23:53,730 --> 00:23:57,540 After that dinner, I was searching for that same knife everywhere, but it seemed 515 00:23:57,540 --> 00:24:01,370 like it was a closely guarded secret that only the top restauranteurs knew about. 516 00:24:01,669 --> 00:24:05,890 I continued to do my sleuthing, and after what felt like forever, eventually found 517 00:24:05,890 --> 00:24:08,760 the exact butter knife I was looking for, and immediately bought five of them. 518 00:24:08,970 --> 00:24:09,270 Right? 519 00:24:09,570 --> 00:24:11,330 So the idea is, this is... 520 00:24:11,689 --> 00:24:16,909 It's that desire of they used it. 521 00:24:16,949 --> 00:24:20,080 I mean, how many times have you done that when you went to a restaurant and 522 00:24:20,080 --> 00:24:23,199 you're like, what, what sauce is this? 523 00:24:23,519 --> 00:24:24,110 What hot sauce? 524 00:24:24,149 --> 00:24:26,840 Or you go to a hotel and you're like, what towels are these? 525 00:24:27,550 --> 00:24:27,840 What? 526 00:24:27,850 --> 00:24:29,400 I think they actually use that in Blissy. 527 00:24:29,840 --> 00:24:34,310 Uh, Blissy used, yes, I know that for a fact, they used, one of their 528 00:24:34,310 --> 00:24:38,340 leads was like the family went to a hotel and they all slept amazing. 529 00:24:38,480 --> 00:24:39,810 Why do they sleep amazing? 530 00:24:39,810 --> 00:24:41,440 It was because of these pillowcases. 531 00:24:41,810 --> 00:24:45,520 Hotel quality pillowcase, like high end hotel quality pillowcases. 532 00:24:45,919 --> 00:24:47,080 It was unbelievable. 533 00:24:47,120 --> 00:24:49,820 And then that was the story of the editorial. 534 00:24:50,740 --> 00:24:56,210 So it's taking, uh, you know, a desire to have this thing that you saw it 535 00:24:56,220 --> 00:24:58,079 elsewhere and you want it for your own. 536 00:24:58,399 --> 00:25:02,019 For yourself for at home and so you go and research it. 537 00:25:02,029 --> 00:25:03,709 So that's always really powerful. 538 00:25:03,719 --> 00:25:07,349 It's almost it's what's really make sense is it's kind of 539 00:25:07,350 --> 00:25:08,729 like a real life demonstration. 540 00:25:08,729 --> 00:25:12,009 If you think about it, like they go and they are able to demonstrate it somewhere, 541 00:25:12,039 --> 00:25:14,519 use it and be like, holy smokes. 542 00:25:14,539 --> 00:25:15,770 Now I want one. 543 00:25:16,370 --> 00:25:18,840 So then they go home and they search out and try to get it, 544 00:25:18,900 --> 00:25:19,980 because they want it, right? 545 00:25:20,530 --> 00:25:23,200 So, uh, that was for the Better Butter Spreader. 546 00:25:23,220 --> 00:25:26,559 And obviously, I'm not going to tell an emotional story about a butter knife. 547 00:25:26,570 --> 00:25:29,449 Like, I'm not going to tell a story of like, an intruder came in. 548 00:25:29,710 --> 00:25:33,340 I had nothing, except my Better Butter Spreader. 549 00:25:34,200 --> 00:25:38,870 And I, I turned the intruder into small noodles. 550 00:25:39,530 --> 00:25:42,070 Of flesh when I wiped it on his face. 551 00:25:42,070 --> 00:25:47,439 He was like, ah, and he ran away and then I spread his skin over toast Like 552 00:25:47,710 --> 00:25:51,540 I can't use an emotional story for the better butter spreader in that sense. 553 00:25:51,550 --> 00:25:55,609 I'm sure you could Maybe it's some sort of like nostalgia. 554 00:25:55,610 --> 00:26:00,415 That's another thing to understand is um Older people, older individuals, they 555 00:26:00,415 --> 00:26:06,044 tend to, and even myself, if you lean into nostalgia, it's very, very powerful. 556 00:26:06,044 --> 00:26:07,264 I forgot who talked about this. 557 00:26:07,274 --> 00:26:08,194 It might have been Eugene Schwartz. 558 00:26:08,205 --> 00:26:08,625 No. 559 00:26:10,085 --> 00:26:11,045 Some marketer. 560 00:26:11,054 --> 00:26:12,304 It might have even been Dan Kennedy. 561 00:26:12,304 --> 00:26:13,874 But it's just, it's been passed on for a long time. 562 00:26:13,875 --> 00:26:16,395 If you lean into nostalgia, people love that. 563 00:26:16,585 --> 00:26:21,324 People want, because everyone's always, when you get older, you're always kind of 564 00:26:21,324 --> 00:26:24,215 like wistful for, oh, the good old times. 565 00:26:24,805 --> 00:26:27,165 The good old, the good old Reagan days. 566 00:26:27,750 --> 00:26:31,469 Oh, I miss Reagan, you know, like it's, I don't know why Reagan, but, 567 00:26:32,080 --> 00:26:34,270 uh, the idea is that nostalgia. 568 00:26:34,270 --> 00:26:35,449 It's really powerful stuff. 569 00:26:37,340 --> 00:26:37,870 Oh, that's right. 570 00:26:37,870 --> 00:26:40,249 Because the reason why I mentioned that is because I had another lead that's 571 00:26:40,250 --> 00:26:43,710 like, hey, I mean, do you remember the days of, I remember the days of 572 00:26:43,710 --> 00:26:47,459 like, you know, waking up and having jelly on toast, something like that. 573 00:26:47,469 --> 00:26:49,800 Like I was using that kind of idea. 574 00:26:50,190 --> 00:26:53,070 Um, Anyway, so let's move on. 575 00:26:53,350 --> 00:26:54,440 So this is an example. 576 00:26:54,440 --> 00:26:56,730 This is for the, this pillow. 577 00:26:56,890 --> 00:26:57,500 Suterra? 578 00:26:57,660 --> 00:26:58,510 The Suterra pillow. 579 00:26:58,870 --> 00:26:59,320 Diana. 580 00:26:59,320 --> 00:27:02,180 So this was interesting because it's done in a third person point of view. 581 00:27:02,200 --> 00:27:03,380 So it's giving names. 582 00:27:03,630 --> 00:27:06,110 Diana, 67, was terrified that her husband's poor sleeping habits 583 00:27:06,110 --> 00:27:07,460 would destroy their marriage. 584 00:27:07,995 --> 00:27:08,455 Ooh. 585 00:27:08,925 --> 00:27:13,115 As a retired, uh, as a, uh, as a retired claims service supervisor, she made a 586 00:27:13,115 --> 00:27:14,685 priority to Joyer Golden Years with him. 587 00:27:15,055 --> 00:27:18,734 The couple even moved to Arizona to become closer to the son and grandkids. 588 00:27:18,735 --> 00:27:21,375 However, all that changed a few months ago when her husband's 589 00:27:21,375 --> 00:27:22,495 health dramatically worsened. 590 00:27:22,895 --> 00:27:26,255 So he was dealing with sleeping problems, right? 591 00:27:26,354 --> 00:27:29,904 Uh, husband was dealing with sleeping problems, I guess, but he couldn't 592 00:27:29,904 --> 00:27:31,279 get, he couldn't get out of bed. 593 00:27:31,490 --> 00:27:33,170 So he was so stiff, he couldn't get out of bed. 594 00:27:33,190 --> 00:27:34,860 I was so alarmed, I almost called 911. 595 00:27:35,380 --> 00:27:37,070 Um, 70 million Americans. 596 00:27:37,110 --> 00:27:38,870 Oh, this is a nice little coupling, too. 597 00:27:38,870 --> 00:27:39,989 It's also bringing in a stat. 598 00:27:40,000 --> 00:27:41,960 70 million Americans experience trouble sleeping. 599 00:27:43,169 --> 00:27:45,219 Public health problem, the CDC says. 600 00:27:45,560 --> 00:27:47,330 At first, our husband's health problems were bearable with 601 00:27:47,330 --> 00:27:48,570 medication and frequent doctor visits. 602 00:27:48,910 --> 00:27:50,960 After all, They've been married for over 30 years. 603 00:27:50,960 --> 00:27:54,290 Diaz wasn't going to let that, let that get in the way of the relationship. 604 00:27:54,290 --> 00:27:58,129 And as years of poor sleeping habits passed by, she noticed behavior changes. 605 00:27:58,270 --> 00:28:02,460 He no longer wanted to play with their two pet cockatoos and go on daily walks. 606 00:28:02,469 --> 00:28:05,760 So bringing in a lot of emotion of who they were, like it's really 607 00:28:05,760 --> 00:28:07,090 leaning into these older people. 608 00:28:07,090 --> 00:28:09,889 They have cockatoos, they're retired, they're in Arizona. 609 00:28:10,199 --> 00:28:11,980 They're just wanting to spend all their golden years. 610 00:28:12,040 --> 00:28:12,490 Um. 611 00:28:13,020 --> 00:28:14,420 He didn't want to visit grandkids anymore. 612 00:28:14,420 --> 00:28:17,300 He would randomly snap at her emotional distance, so he was not getting good 613 00:28:17,300 --> 00:28:18,740 sleep, so he's being really grumpy. 614 00:28:19,130 --> 00:28:20,880 My husband and I started growing apart. 615 00:28:20,910 --> 00:28:23,030 I didn't know it was even possible after 30 years of marriage and 616 00:28:23,030 --> 00:28:23,830 building a family together. 617 00:28:23,830 --> 00:28:26,179 She admitted one day he told her that he wanted to start 618 00:28:26,180 --> 00:28:27,310 sleeping in separate rooms. 619 00:28:27,340 --> 00:28:28,529 Oh, devastating too. 620 00:28:28,860 --> 00:28:30,280 So, and also this is interesting. 621 00:28:30,299 --> 00:28:34,555 If you were to bring in, Um, I highly recommend reading a lot of fiction 622 00:28:34,865 --> 00:28:36,605 and also getting into psychology. 623 00:28:36,605 --> 00:28:39,605 If you're reading psychology, anything with Carl Jung, I talk 624 00:28:39,605 --> 00:28:43,435 about archetypes and then talk about also, uh, things with relationship. 625 00:28:43,435 --> 00:28:46,715 This could be really powerful too if you talk about, uh, attachment theories. 626 00:28:46,785 --> 00:28:51,365 And so this is obviously she, certain attachment theories, attachment styles. 627 00:28:51,515 --> 00:28:54,905 Because we each have an attachment style to our significant other, uh, if 628 00:28:54,905 --> 00:28:56,525 you are married or in a relationship. 629 00:28:56,525 --> 00:28:56,925 And so. 630 00:28:57,130 --> 00:28:59,920 Learning about that is really powerful because then you can also bring that 631 00:28:59,940 --> 00:29:04,550 into the story because people can relate to attachment styles because 632 00:29:04,560 --> 00:29:06,850 that's what it makes when you listen to. 633 00:29:07,330 --> 00:29:10,940 Stories about relationships and go and then you're like, oh, that's totally us. 634 00:29:11,010 --> 00:29:15,030 Oh, yeah, that's my spouse You know you even hear for other people you go. 635 00:29:15,070 --> 00:29:19,390 Oh, yeah Your husband sounds just like my husband or your husband sounds like 636 00:29:19,390 --> 00:29:23,820 my wife or you know It's vix versa or vice versa because we all have attachment 637 00:29:23,830 --> 00:29:25,549 styles and so you can see right here. 638 00:29:25,549 --> 00:29:30,245 There's a certain attachment style that um You can feel from her. 639 00:29:30,245 --> 00:29:31,955 It's coming from her point of view. 640 00:29:32,595 --> 00:29:34,995 Uh, so it's like a close third person is what we would call it. 641 00:29:34,995 --> 00:29:38,115 So it's coming from, it's the third person, meaning that it's 642 00:29:38,115 --> 00:29:39,585 giving names, but it's close. 643 00:29:39,585 --> 00:29:44,435 It's meaning we are closer to Diana and her experience of what's going 644 00:29:44,435 --> 00:29:46,264 on than we are to her husband. 645 00:29:46,745 --> 00:29:50,375 But we're also sensing like she is clearly more attached to him and 646 00:29:50,375 --> 00:29:55,155 is wanting to, wanting him to love her more, but it's getting more 647 00:29:55,155 --> 00:29:57,855 difficult and it's causing her grief. 648 00:29:58,294 --> 00:29:58,865 So. 649 00:29:59,580 --> 00:30:00,930 I actually like this. 650 00:30:00,960 --> 00:30:02,160 I think this is pretty good. 651 00:30:02,160 --> 00:30:05,470 And I imagine, um, and then it goes to sell a pillow, right? 652 00:30:05,500 --> 00:30:06,690 And this pillow is really unique. 653 00:30:06,690 --> 00:30:07,880 It's really weirdly shaped. 654 00:30:08,140 --> 00:30:09,330 I'll bring it up as an example. 655 00:30:09,369 --> 00:30:10,800 Oh, matter of fact, it's right here. 656 00:30:10,870 --> 00:30:11,230 There you go. 657 00:30:12,480 --> 00:30:15,640 67 year old woman discovers simple side sleeper secret. 658 00:30:17,770 --> 00:30:19,370 Help eliminate neck and back discomfort. 659 00:30:19,390 --> 00:30:19,770 True story. 660 00:30:19,770 --> 00:30:21,860 The secret saved her marriage. 661 00:30:22,150 --> 00:30:25,340 So right away it goes into the benefit of that it helps eliminate 662 00:30:25,530 --> 00:30:26,930 neck and back discomfort, right? 663 00:30:27,100 --> 00:30:30,450 So the main benefit isn't going to be, and it saved her marriage. 664 00:30:30,469 --> 00:30:34,309 The main benefit is what it actually does, which is reasonable, 665 00:30:34,520 --> 00:30:38,190 which is understandable because a pillow can help with this. 666 00:30:38,460 --> 00:30:43,450 How can it, you know, I would, it'd be interesting to see 60 667 00:30:43,450 --> 00:30:47,510 year old, seven, 67 year old woman discovers simple size sleeper seeker 668 00:30:47,510 --> 00:30:49,160 that helped save her marriage. 669 00:30:50,530 --> 00:30:53,290 And eliminate naked back discovery, you know what I mean? 670 00:30:53,300 --> 00:30:56,840 Like it just I don't know, it'd be weird to test, but it's like 671 00:30:57,310 --> 00:30:58,840 it, the secret saved her marriage. 672 00:30:59,030 --> 00:31:03,620 So the first initial thing is that fact that it, it, um, it helps. 673 00:31:03,630 --> 00:31:06,620 So the idea is, and then it goes into what the pillow is, 674 00:31:06,620 --> 00:31:07,760 it's this weird shaped pillow. 675 00:31:07,780 --> 00:31:08,650 How does it work? 676 00:31:09,049 --> 00:31:09,189 Yeah. 677 00:31:09,539 --> 00:31:12,669 Oh, what's also good to this editorial to, um, something we'll talk about 678 00:31:12,669 --> 00:31:19,539 later in design, but, um, showing that it is, so you see how it's, this is 679 00:31:19,539 --> 00:31:27,109 really powerful stuff is when you show the, it's coming from another, nice. 680 00:31:28,615 --> 00:31:31,775 We show it, uh, social proof from an outside source. 681 00:31:31,785 --> 00:31:35,730 So when they see it like this, when they see And then breaks out and it 682 00:31:35,730 --> 00:31:39,740 shows this is like a screenshot from what looks like Instagram, right? 683 00:31:40,130 --> 00:31:43,060 This is really powerful stuff to use in Abiturial because it shows social 684 00:31:43,060 --> 00:31:44,139 proof from a different platform. 685 00:31:45,090 --> 00:31:49,540 So it look, so it shows that this is gone, this is bigger than 686 00:31:49,540 --> 00:31:50,790 where you're looking at it now. 687 00:31:51,080 --> 00:31:55,110 It's, in a sense, it's To the mind, you go, oh, it's even being featured 688 00:31:55,110 --> 00:31:59,220 on Instagram, which I'm also on, or maybe even show it on Facebook, 689 00:31:59,220 --> 00:32:03,110 or show it on TikTok, and so on, like, that's really powerful stuff. 690 00:32:03,110 --> 00:32:06,420 So having a screenshot from Instagram and having it plopped in here as 691 00:32:06,420 --> 00:32:07,780 well, I think it's pretty powerful. 692 00:32:14,000 --> 00:32:14,530 Dang it. 693 00:32:16,139 --> 00:32:17,919 Every time I do that, I like spill. 694 00:32:18,379 --> 00:32:22,410 It's like I, sometimes I wonder if I don't know how to drink properly. 695 00:32:22,670 --> 00:32:25,960 Heath, you're just a mess. 696 00:32:26,340 --> 00:32:27,510 And I'm not editing this out. 697 00:32:27,810 --> 00:32:28,670 You get to see me. 698 00:32:29,330 --> 00:32:30,740 This is part of the bonuses. 699 00:32:31,155 --> 00:32:35,275 It's just Heath being a, just a, just a messy boy. 700 00:32:35,545 --> 00:32:36,675 Messy boy. 701 00:32:37,035 --> 00:32:37,355 All right. 702 00:32:40,765 --> 00:32:41,345 Here we go. 703 00:32:41,725 --> 00:32:42,485 Example three. 704 00:32:45,640 --> 00:32:48,520 I can show this one, see if I could, okay, I'll pull it up later. 705 00:32:49,430 --> 00:32:52,960 Example three, there aren't many older folks, there aren't many 706 00:32:52,970 --> 00:32:54,260 older folks without knee pain. 707 00:32:54,290 --> 00:32:55,400 And so this is interesting. 708 00:32:55,400 --> 00:32:56,470 It's a nice combo. 709 00:32:56,769 --> 00:32:58,970 And this is also what I've seen done with like Blissy. 710 00:32:59,010 --> 00:33:03,120 So they'll give like maybe a statistic and then it'll go into so and so's chronic 711 00:33:03,120 --> 00:33:05,570 knee pain or like so and so's story. 712 00:33:05,745 --> 00:33:09,215 I've seen it where it's like Sally's story or something like that. 713 00:33:09,215 --> 00:33:10,245 Paula's story. 714 00:33:10,245 --> 00:33:11,715 And then it's like really brief story. 715 00:33:11,815 --> 00:33:13,685 So here's a nice little stat. 716 00:33:13,695 --> 00:33:15,775 An estimated 30 million seniors suffer with chronic knee pain. 717 00:33:15,775 --> 00:33:17,425 Millions have more have occasional knee pain. 718 00:33:17,425 --> 00:33:21,635 It's super common, but one senior has found the answer is as simple as changing 719 00:33:21,635 --> 00:33:22,955 how he gets dressed every morning. 720 00:33:23,095 --> 00:33:23,995 Ooh, that's nice, right? 721 00:33:24,364 --> 00:33:27,505 It's, it's as simple as just getting dressed. 722 00:33:27,970 --> 00:33:28,550 That's awesome. 723 00:33:28,560 --> 00:33:31,150 That's, that's a nice little connection, right? 724 00:33:31,510 --> 00:33:36,320 So what's good about that too, and this is nice, is that it's nothing 725 00:33:36,430 --> 00:33:39,330 outside of the norm of their daily life. 726 00:33:39,360 --> 00:33:42,710 That's another thing too, is you want to make the product, 727 00:33:42,710 --> 00:33:45,929 the offer part of their routine. 728 00:33:46,219 --> 00:33:47,759 It's as simple as just. 729 00:33:48,000 --> 00:33:50,200 It's, you know, it's part of now my breakfast. 730 00:33:50,210 --> 00:33:52,390 It's part of my now morning routine. 731 00:33:52,730 --> 00:33:55,570 It's I just add it as I'm combing my hair. 732 00:33:55,890 --> 00:33:58,509 So it doesn't, it's not an extra step. 733 00:33:58,510 --> 00:34:01,080 You don't want people, people don't want to do anything. 734 00:34:01,440 --> 00:34:04,070 They don't want to do an extra thing they have to do. 735 00:34:04,289 --> 00:34:07,460 So then this actually slides right into the normal thing 736 00:34:07,460 --> 00:34:08,849 that they are already doing. 737 00:34:09,215 --> 00:34:14,225 And whammo, like the benefit, uh, how it benefits her life without 738 00:34:14,235 --> 00:34:16,185 having to do an extra something else. 739 00:34:16,225 --> 00:34:17,425 It's, it's great. 740 00:34:18,185 --> 00:34:19,905 So, uh, Jack's chronic knee pain. 741 00:34:19,905 --> 00:34:24,564 Jack was a typical 65 year old, a pretty, so again, third person, pretty active 742 00:34:24,575 --> 00:34:28,895 middle class life and a nice pension coming to him as a parcel delivery driver. 743 00:34:28,985 --> 00:34:29,335 Cool. 744 00:34:29,585 --> 00:34:32,885 So giving him a backstory, but he was a, so it's like really 745 00:34:32,905 --> 00:34:35,685 honing in, honing, homing in the. 746 00:34:35,880 --> 00:34:37,100 Uh, avatar. 747 00:34:37,640 --> 00:34:39,720 One thing that wasn't the typical was his knee pain. 748 00:34:39,720 --> 00:34:41,680 Years of delivering packages took a toll on his knees. 749 00:34:41,750 --> 00:34:44,260 You can replace this with a construction worker. 750 00:34:44,430 --> 00:34:45,280 You know, contractor. 751 00:34:45,280 --> 00:34:45,999 I think I've done that. 752 00:34:46,260 --> 00:34:47,699 I did that actually, yes, back in the day. 753 00:34:47,699 --> 00:34:49,520 Years ago, I did it for a CBD patch. 754 00:34:49,600 --> 00:34:54,260 One of the leads was like a construction worker after years back breaking work. 755 00:34:54,519 --> 00:34:58,590 And it was a CBD patch that, you know, you're able to just slap it where it's 756 00:34:58,730 --> 00:35:01,560 needs, where you need some, uh, help with. 757 00:35:02,095 --> 00:35:05,445 Pain relief, uh, and plane turns. 758 00:35:05,445 --> 00:35:06,375 Both of my knees hurt. 759 00:35:06,405 --> 00:35:09,855 Those years of truck, of truck steps, then porch steps took their toll. 760 00:35:09,855 --> 00:35:12,905 My knees hurt more than, uh, hurt more than most of my friends. 761 00:35:12,905 --> 00:35:15,815 Jack explained he went to the doctor seeking relief and left disappointed. 762 00:35:15,820 --> 00:35:17,795 The doctor said they weren't bad enough for knee replacements. 763 00:35:17,795 --> 00:35:19,805 He just suggested physical therapy. 764 00:35:20,105 --> 00:35:23,135 So like, this is going right into this is great because 765 00:35:23,135 --> 00:35:24,755 it's like not getting answers. 766 00:35:25,045 --> 00:35:27,865 So it's being skeptical of doctors not getting the answers they want. 767 00:35:27,865 --> 00:35:32,960 But then, uh, you know, And then got stuck on painkillers and it sucked and 768 00:35:32,960 --> 00:35:38,260 then he came across this simple solution, which is, of course, this knee sleeve. 769 00:35:38,580 --> 00:35:40,600 Um, and then I'm going to show these different avatars. 770 00:35:40,609 --> 00:35:43,059 Let's go, let's go and look at right here. 771 00:35:44,130 --> 00:35:45,189 Find the avatar. 772 00:35:54,749 --> 00:35:55,079 Here we go. 773 00:35:57,099 --> 00:35:59,090 So it's this knee sleeve, right? 774 00:35:59,350 --> 00:35:59,940 So it's. 775 00:36:00,475 --> 00:36:01,645 Super simple. 776 00:36:02,195 --> 00:36:03,625 And then it's the answer. 777 00:36:03,635 --> 00:36:05,005 It's an alternative to surgery. 778 00:36:05,005 --> 00:36:06,665 It's alternative to painkillers. 779 00:36:07,005 --> 00:36:07,955 How awesome is that? 780 00:36:07,955 --> 00:36:11,295 He's able to do, and what the knee, and then it goes into, and I'll talk 781 00:36:11,295 --> 00:36:14,614 about it in the body, what, how the knee sleeve is different than other 782 00:36:14,615 --> 00:36:16,275 knee sleeves and it's affordable. 783 00:36:16,554 --> 00:36:18,975 And a lot of knee sleeves through the doctor usually costs 784 00:36:18,984 --> 00:36:20,315 hundreds of dollars or whatever. 785 00:36:20,315 --> 00:36:21,425 This is very affordable. 786 00:36:21,665 --> 00:36:24,195 That's another thing too, is always like lean into when it's, 787 00:36:24,245 --> 00:36:26,195 when it's a crowd that is 55 plus. 788 00:36:26,310 --> 00:36:29,350 Always lean into the fact that it's affordable and it won't cost 789 00:36:29,350 --> 00:36:30,740 an arm and a leg, no pun intended. 790 00:36:31,060 --> 00:36:34,500 But like it won't cost them a small fortune and it's, they 791 00:36:34,500 --> 00:36:35,330 don't have to see a doctor. 792 00:36:35,330 --> 00:36:36,830 They don't have to get hooked on painkillers. 793 00:36:36,910 --> 00:36:37,290 Awesome. 794 00:36:37,370 --> 00:36:38,910 That's what seniors want. 795 00:36:39,349 --> 00:36:39,789 Okay. 796 00:36:40,000 --> 00:36:41,910 So those are the main leads. 797 00:36:41,910 --> 00:36:46,450 Now I'm going to go kind of talk about it on, let's, let me show 798 00:36:46,520 --> 00:36:47,730 you some more examples here. 799 00:36:47,730 --> 00:36:48,320 Let's see here. 800 00:36:49,925 --> 00:36:50,795 Oh yeah, the actor trial. 801 00:36:50,825 --> 00:36:53,405 Okay, so this one is a personal story that I recently wrote. 802 00:36:53,705 --> 00:36:57,755 So I wrote this from start to start to finish in the bonus thing, 803 00:36:57,755 --> 00:37:00,785 and I, and I rewrote it, and then I cleaned it up and everything. 804 00:37:01,165 --> 00:37:02,875 I lost my mind during all that. 805 00:37:02,875 --> 00:37:06,385 It was like two and a half hours of me just like, whoa, late at night like. 806 00:37:06,385 --> 00:37:07,250 putting this together. 807 00:37:07,400 --> 00:37:07,880 It was fun. 808 00:37:07,880 --> 00:37:08,450 I had a good time. 809 00:37:08,890 --> 00:37:12,020 Uh, so this is based on what I know. 810 00:37:12,020 --> 00:37:13,070 Elite is working. 811 00:37:13,110 --> 00:37:17,770 I know that there is an editorial already working for a watch 812 00:37:17,800 --> 00:37:19,390 a kind of Fitbit alternative. 813 00:37:19,520 --> 00:37:22,880 So I'm if I know that it is working according to what I'm hearing from 814 00:37:22,880 --> 00:37:24,860 affiliates, why reinvent the wheel? 815 00:37:25,245 --> 00:37:26,605 Don't need to reinvent the wheel. 816 00:37:26,995 --> 00:37:28,755 Take what's working and rewrite it. 817 00:37:28,975 --> 00:37:33,125 Rewrite it and test another and see where it's missing. 818 00:37:33,365 --> 00:37:35,565 See where you can improve upon. 819 00:37:36,075 --> 00:37:38,785 And rewrite it and get it out there. 820 00:37:38,794 --> 00:37:39,755 So quick summary. 821 00:37:40,864 --> 00:37:43,604 So if you're 55 and concerned about your health, this new smartwatch 822 00:37:43,985 --> 00:37:46,815 May for seniors is a game changer and can help detect serious health 823 00:37:46,815 --> 00:37:47,755 issues before it's too late. 824 00:37:47,995 --> 00:37:51,055 Where I saw where it's missing is that they weren't mentioning 825 00:37:51,055 --> 00:37:52,804 that it's for seniors. 826 00:37:52,804 --> 00:37:58,134 Weren't, like, really getting down to the brass tacks of the 827 00:37:58,145 --> 00:37:59,695 audience and who they're going for. 828 00:38:00,135 --> 00:38:01,560 So, I thought I was dying. 829 00:38:01,570 --> 00:38:03,490 The pain, the pain in my chest was so intense. 830 00:38:03,500 --> 00:38:04,800 I thought for sure this is it. 831 00:38:04,810 --> 00:38:05,910 This is how I'm leaving this earth. 832 00:38:06,520 --> 00:38:07,690 It happened about a month back. 833 00:38:07,690 --> 00:38:09,920 I was outside fixing our sprinkler system when I got lightheaded. 834 00:38:09,939 --> 00:38:12,709 My limbs went cold and my vision blurred like I was swimming with my eyes open. 835 00:38:13,219 --> 00:38:15,089 Then my chest felt like something was sitting on me, 836 00:38:15,200 --> 00:38:16,289 like someone was sitting on me. 837 00:38:16,290 --> 00:38:17,099 It was difficult to breathe. 838 00:38:17,160 --> 00:38:20,790 I panicked, went inside the house and embarrassingly asked my wife for help. 839 00:38:21,415 --> 00:38:23,285 She arrested me to the emergency room. 840 00:38:23,285 --> 00:38:26,335 The dog checked me out and asked me a ton of questions I didn't know. 841 00:38:26,635 --> 00:38:28,455 Questions like, are you keeping an eye on your heart rate? 842 00:38:28,465 --> 00:38:29,975 Do you regularly check your blood pressure? 843 00:38:30,264 --> 00:38:31,225 How have you been sleeping? 844 00:38:31,285 --> 00:38:33,235 I couldn't help but feel ashamed like a little kid. 845 00:38:33,514 --> 00:38:34,854 I never paid attention to that stuff. 846 00:38:34,855 --> 00:38:38,164 I come from a long line of men that could walk it off and be fine the next day. 847 00:38:38,405 --> 00:38:41,415 So a lot of this stuff is like, I'm using the same cadence that I know 848 00:38:41,415 --> 00:38:43,805 is working from that abiturial, but I'm switching things up and 849 00:38:43,805 --> 00:38:45,415 where I see it could improve upon. 850 00:38:45,805 --> 00:38:48,415 Um, being more specific, getting the specificity. 851 00:38:48,424 --> 00:38:53,105 Anytime That you anytime I can see a generalization or some sort of general. 852 00:38:53,125 --> 00:38:58,065 I want to be more specific There is more emotion and connection with specificity 853 00:38:58,185 --> 00:39:02,374 Okay I couldn't help but feel ashamed and this is also true through the 854 00:39:02,514 --> 00:39:06,295 through the research and also if you know anyone In your family that is 855 00:39:06,295 --> 00:39:10,430 older Especially men, older men, they, they can fall off a roof and break 856 00:39:10,430 --> 00:39:12,490 up their body and be like, I'm fine. 857 00:39:12,950 --> 00:39:13,270 Right. 858 00:39:13,280 --> 00:39:17,279 It's just, it's a ego thing for older guys that are like, I'm fine. 859 00:39:17,280 --> 00:39:18,170 I don't complain. 860 00:39:18,189 --> 00:39:19,040 I'm not a baby. 861 00:39:20,200 --> 00:39:21,049 I'm not even that old. 862 00:39:21,080 --> 00:39:22,419 So pointing out that he's not even that old. 863 00:39:22,420 --> 00:39:25,110 He's put on an extra few pounds, but he wasn't as bad shape as other men. 864 00:39:25,460 --> 00:39:28,630 He sees his age and then it turns out he has acute, he had 865 00:39:28,630 --> 00:39:32,140 acute pain, uh, you know, panic attack from anxiety and stress. 866 00:39:32,510 --> 00:39:34,670 But the doc did warn me that my age and size could be 867 00:39:34,670 --> 00:39:35,970 cute closer on my heart rate. 868 00:39:36,380 --> 00:39:39,500 And then the doc also told him like what to do, cut out some beer, do 869 00:39:39,500 --> 00:39:40,779 some more walking, get better sleep. 870 00:39:41,130 --> 00:39:42,609 So then like, how can he do that? 871 00:39:42,670 --> 00:39:46,350 He wants to take these steps to do that, but it's, there's so it's 872 00:39:46,350 --> 00:39:47,640 overwhelming for a lot of people. 873 00:39:47,640 --> 00:39:48,320 So what do you do? 874 00:39:48,330 --> 00:39:49,100 You start small. 875 00:39:49,110 --> 00:39:49,770 How do you do that? 876 00:39:50,010 --> 00:39:52,540 By getting this, by getting this device. 877 00:39:53,020 --> 00:39:57,370 So by getting this ActiveTrack Pro, you're able to keep starting 878 00:39:57,370 --> 00:39:59,780 to keep track of these issues. 879 00:39:59,790 --> 00:40:03,320 So he was a little scared, you know, he went searching online, found a good 880 00:40:03,320 --> 00:40:07,920 fitness tracker that was also, uh, affordable and wasn't super expensive. 881 00:40:08,020 --> 00:40:11,670 Big brand name, like smart, like Apple or Fitbit or any of that. 882 00:40:12,845 --> 00:40:15,055 And that it was made specifically for him. 883 00:40:15,065 --> 00:40:18,335 It's made for seniors, uh, which I, you know, which I hate that 884 00:40:18,335 --> 00:40:19,565 word, but I hate computers more. 885 00:40:19,565 --> 00:40:22,455 So I'm pointing out the fact that like, he doesn't want to be considered a senior. 886 00:40:22,455 --> 00:40:24,574 I'm not a senior, but I also hate computers. 887 00:40:24,585 --> 00:40:27,065 So it's like, I want to point that out, right? 888 00:40:27,525 --> 00:40:28,525 Made it easy to set up. 889 00:40:28,525 --> 00:40:31,085 And it was all awesome features as the expense of smartwatches, 890 00:40:31,085 --> 00:40:32,045 but a fraction of the costs. 891 00:40:32,365 --> 00:40:32,995 So. 892 00:40:33,310 --> 00:40:37,710 Then it goes into, I do a comparison, I'll talk more about the abiturial, the body of 893 00:40:37,710 --> 00:40:42,840 it later, but I wanted to bring in that, like, that's just, that is not a long. 894 00:40:43,089 --> 00:40:44,950 I mean, maybe it's longer than usual. 895 00:40:44,990 --> 00:40:48,820 The story ones tend to be a little bit longer when it comes to word count. 896 00:40:48,820 --> 00:40:50,159 So this is 311. 897 00:40:50,660 --> 00:40:50,980 Okay. 898 00:40:51,119 --> 00:40:53,839 So that one's a little bit longer for sure for a lead. 899 00:40:54,289 --> 00:41:00,560 Um, but again, super short compared to what you're seeing in VSLs 900 00:41:00,580 --> 00:41:02,079 or sales letters and all that. 901 00:41:02,500 --> 00:41:03,154 Um, Okay. 902 00:41:03,705 --> 00:41:04,495 Let's see here. 903 00:41:04,735 --> 00:41:04,995 Okay. 904 00:41:04,995 --> 00:41:06,965 And then I have a lead here. 905 00:41:06,975 --> 00:41:07,325 Let's see. 906 00:41:07,455 --> 00:41:08,215 No, that's the light. 907 00:41:08,325 --> 00:41:09,305 Oh, this is light socket. 908 00:41:11,140 --> 00:41:12,280 Diabetes solar. 909 00:41:12,340 --> 00:41:13,300 Okay, here's another one. 910 00:41:13,880 --> 00:41:17,160 So you know, some of a groan wall light on my back in severe 911 00:41:17,160 --> 00:41:18,240 pain and covered red tomatoes. 912 00:41:18,240 --> 00:41:19,530 So I see the kitchen trash was swollen. 913 00:41:19,530 --> 00:41:20,490 I went down to take it out. 914 00:41:20,790 --> 00:41:23,670 It was late at night and I didn't realize my back patio stairs had frozen over. 915 00:41:23,670 --> 00:41:24,360 It was dark and back. 916 00:41:24,365 --> 00:41:27,410 Patio light stopped working a while ago, but meaning to get it replaced, but I 917 00:41:27,410 --> 00:41:30,320 just never got it around to it Anyway, I slipped on the first step and down I went 918 00:41:30,320 --> 00:41:34,010 with a bag of trash, which ripped open, made a mess all over me in the stairs. 919 00:41:34,040 --> 00:41:36,380 I was in pain for a good week with really bad bruise on my 920 00:41:36,380 --> 00:41:37,730 pal bone and beating up ankle. 921 00:41:37,850 --> 00:41:38,570 Really feeling. 922 00:41:38,940 --> 00:41:39,890 Up there in my age. 923 00:41:40,340 --> 00:41:42,750 I told my neighbor about what happened and he mentioned how he had 924 00:41:42,750 --> 00:41:46,230 something, how something similar, something similar happened to him. 925 00:41:46,330 --> 00:41:50,810 He said he lucked out though, because he had these new motion sensor floodlights 926 00:41:50,810 --> 00:41:51,900 that requires the electricity. 927 00:41:51,900 --> 00:41:53,570 No wire can be installed in 30 seconds. 928 00:41:54,029 --> 00:41:57,819 So the idea is we saw these lights that you just, they're sensor lights, they're 929 00:41:57,819 --> 00:41:59,480 just sensor lights and you just can like. 930 00:42:00,080 --> 00:42:04,100 Put in the battery and put it up and it just like brights up. 931 00:42:04,100 --> 00:42:07,560 Yeah, wherever you walk, it's sensor picks you up and able to light your way. 932 00:42:07,820 --> 00:42:11,419 So the idea, the story goes is like I told a, you know, 933 00:42:11,430 --> 00:42:13,020 scary story that no one wants. 934 00:42:13,269 --> 00:42:15,580 And then this is based on what I've seen in research is like 935 00:42:15,590 --> 00:42:17,439 people that fall down their stairs. 936 00:42:17,750 --> 00:42:20,690 Because they're, they didn't realize how cold it was outside. 937 00:42:20,700 --> 00:42:24,320 It frozen, the stairs frozen over, they fell down, they didn't see it. 938 00:42:24,750 --> 00:42:25,400 And. 939 00:42:25,755 --> 00:42:28,015 And they hurt themselves and no one wants that. 940 00:42:28,065 --> 00:42:28,335 Right. 941 00:42:29,355 --> 00:42:31,655 So that's an emotional one too. 942 00:42:31,665 --> 00:42:32,995 Let me show some more here. 943 00:42:32,995 --> 00:42:33,885 So I'll show you some. 944 00:42:33,895 --> 00:42:35,345 So this is the disruptor angle. 945 00:42:35,355 --> 00:42:35,975 How to German. 946 00:42:36,605 --> 00:42:39,155 Two Germans are crushing the market with these powerful hearing aids. 947 00:42:39,155 --> 00:42:39,965 So this is here. 948 00:42:40,175 --> 00:42:40,545 com. 949 00:42:41,245 --> 00:42:47,995 Um, and this is, this is more, you know, this talking about who they are. 950 00:42:48,065 --> 00:42:49,474 They've been knowing each other for a long time. 951 00:42:49,724 --> 00:42:53,145 And then they came up with this breakthrough technology that now 952 00:42:53,145 --> 00:42:56,684 they're able to disrupt this market because now people can get amazing 953 00:42:56,694 --> 00:42:59,355 hearing aids for a fraction of the cost of what it normally, you know, 954 00:42:59,395 --> 00:43:01,834 hearing aids can cost up to 5, 000. 955 00:43:01,835 --> 00:43:02,925 These are a fraction of the cost. 956 00:43:03,160 --> 00:43:03,520 Cost. 957 00:43:03,520 --> 00:43:05,140 And then you go click to qualify. 958 00:43:05,150 --> 00:43:09,290 And this is a lead gen because then people would go to different locations, wherever 959 00:43:09,290 --> 00:43:13,479 they're located and get this specific type of hearing aid, uh, installed. 960 00:43:15,270 --> 00:43:15,740 PowerPod. 961 00:43:15,740 --> 00:43:17,609 So this is a story base. 962 00:43:17,610 --> 00:43:19,020 Don't get straddled by a dead phone battery. 963 00:43:19,020 --> 00:43:21,589 PowerPod gives you hours more and it fits on any key chain. 964 00:43:21,590 --> 00:43:22,450 So, okay. 965 00:43:22,450 --> 00:43:23,400 I have a funny story to tell you. 966 00:43:23,410 --> 00:43:24,240 It wasn't funny at the time. 967 00:43:24,570 --> 00:43:26,660 To me, I think there's a lot of rambling, but it's funny because 968 00:43:26,660 --> 00:43:29,790 it's told from this perspective of an older individual because they're 969 00:43:29,790 --> 00:43:31,480 using, you know, it's about their son. 970 00:43:31,765 --> 00:43:34,435 Let's see their son Harrison who's skateboarding. 971 00:43:34,675 --> 00:43:43,765 Um, and the idea is he When he was out, you know his mom said like call when 972 00:43:43,765 --> 00:43:46,595 he's done You know, he'd never called. 973 00:43:46,665 --> 00:43:51,110 I just thought that it started raining and I mean pouring He was still with 974 00:43:51,110 --> 00:43:54,620 his friends, I remember, oh yeah, he told them about like, bring his power 975 00:43:54,620 --> 00:43:56,210 pod, he forgot about his power pod. 976 00:43:56,260 --> 00:44:00,130 He got in the car and said like, oh, my, you know, my phone was dead. 977 00:44:01,460 --> 00:44:04,020 He threw open the car door and said, my phone's dead again, 978 00:44:04,020 --> 00:44:04,830 I couldn't help but laugh. 979 00:44:04,830 --> 00:44:07,380 His friends left a while ago, but he stayed to his perfect 980 00:44:07,380 --> 00:44:10,500 crowd as he, uh, as he called out about got caught in the rain. 981 00:44:11,350 --> 00:44:13,980 I think, I think this is a very long lead, it's kind of silly. 982 00:44:14,310 --> 00:44:18,570 But the idea was like, this kid goes skateboarding, he didn't call. 983 00:44:19,390 --> 00:44:20,720 Mom goes and picks him up. 984 00:44:20,830 --> 00:44:21,300 He's poor. 985 00:44:21,310 --> 00:44:21,900 He's soak. 986 00:44:22,170 --> 00:44:27,610 He's soaking wet in the rain From skateboarding because his phone died 987 00:44:27,680 --> 00:44:31,709 and he power, you know, but because he forgot his power pod So what I would 988 00:44:31,709 --> 00:44:36,399 do too is make there's an opportunity to make it more emotional like getting 989 00:44:36,429 --> 00:44:40,860 somewhere so an older individual Obviously this is leaning into the fact 990 00:44:40,860 --> 00:44:45,950 of, uh, the emotion being coming from the parent and their child being stuck 991 00:44:45,950 --> 00:44:47,460 stranded somewhere with a dead phone. 992 00:44:47,529 --> 00:44:49,240 Like no one wants, no parent wants that. 993 00:44:49,240 --> 00:44:49,860 It's very scary. 994 00:44:50,069 --> 00:44:53,700 So you could probably up the ante on the emotion part of this story. 995 00:44:54,029 --> 00:44:56,019 Uh, instead of it just being, I mean. 996 00:44:56,265 --> 00:44:58,435 Possibly this is working really, really well for them. 997 00:44:58,465 --> 00:45:02,955 Obviously, if it's on native, but I, I would argue another lead 998 00:45:02,955 --> 00:45:06,414 that I would test out as I do a dramatic one, do a dramatic one. 999 00:45:06,415 --> 00:45:09,324 Because no one, you know, if you're stuck somewhere, if you're really like, 1000 00:45:09,335 --> 00:45:12,694 think about you as an individual, if you got stuck somewhere and you couldn't 1001 00:45:12,704 --> 00:45:17,730 get a hold of friends, family, and then you're, you know, You know, and then 1002 00:45:17,740 --> 00:45:19,610 bring it back to that attachment style. 1003 00:45:19,610 --> 00:45:22,800 Your husband or wife has a certain attachment style at home and they're 1004 00:45:22,800 --> 00:45:25,960 freaking out where you're at and they can't get ahold of you and they go and 1005 00:45:25,960 --> 00:45:29,320 call and call and call, but it goes right to voicemail and they're freaking out 1006 00:45:29,320 --> 00:45:34,860 like that is, you can sense that emotions like no one wants to be in that situation. 1007 00:45:35,149 --> 00:45:39,810 So there's an opportunity, I think, for another story to test out for this one. 1008 00:45:40,180 --> 00:45:43,490 And that's another thing too, is like when you're, when you're. 1009 00:45:44,325 --> 00:45:47,385 Pitching advertorials and they show you like, say, for instance, you get with a 1010 00:45:47,385 --> 00:45:49,985 client that's already doing advertorials and they show you the advertorials 1011 00:45:49,995 --> 00:45:53,865 that are, you ask, like, which ones are working, which ones got close to 1012 00:45:53,884 --> 00:45:58,674 beating the current one and so on and you can see, like, the more research 1013 00:45:58,674 --> 00:46:02,774 you do, the more you do these, you could see, uh, opportunity to test out. 1014 00:46:02,774 --> 00:46:05,664 Hey, let's try out this angle because, uh, Yeah. 1015 00:46:06,305 --> 00:46:09,285 Based on this audience, based on the emotion, whatever, like 1016 00:46:09,485 --> 00:46:11,795 there's opportunity, there's always opportunities to try out different 1017 00:46:11,795 --> 00:46:13,665 angles because you could be testing. 1018 00:46:13,735 --> 00:46:17,254 That's another thing too, is a lot of these people, you come, you test so 1019 00:46:17,255 --> 00:46:19,405 many advertorials, test, test, test. 1020 00:46:19,405 --> 00:46:20,125 It never ends. 1021 00:46:20,704 --> 00:46:21,645 So let's go through here. 1022 00:46:21,645 --> 00:46:22,465 So miracle sheets. 1023 00:46:22,474 --> 00:46:27,585 So this is that one talk about, uh, again, using that, uh, social proof. 1024 00:46:27,625 --> 00:46:29,855 People are, these are just, they're viral. 1025 00:46:29,855 --> 00:46:33,775 People are picking them up and then talks about the stat and these 1026 00:46:33,775 --> 00:46:35,145 are the best sheets in the world. 1027 00:46:35,155 --> 00:46:35,175 Yeah. 1028 00:46:35,610 --> 00:46:36,700 What makes them so great? 1029 00:46:36,790 --> 00:46:38,650 Okay, I think you get the idea of that one. 1030 00:46:39,150 --> 00:46:43,490 Uh, so this is the startup disrupting So startup is disrupting the entire multi 1031 00:46:43,860 --> 00:46:48,160 multi billion dollar smartwatch industry health benefits are credible So like 1032 00:46:48,160 --> 00:46:51,660 this one is very straightforward like gaining popularity quickly in the u. 1033 00:46:51,660 --> 00:46:54,815 s And selling out everywhere for long time support Watch industry, 1034 00:46:54,855 --> 00:46:57,355 just a big companies that could set the prices they wanted. 1035 00:46:57,645 --> 00:47:01,705 So this line has been used so many times for so many different leads. 1036 00:47:01,715 --> 00:47:06,515 First, I've used it for HVAC for, uh, you can use it for lead gen. 1037 00:47:06,525 --> 00:47:10,134 You can use it just like the idea is again, it's this underdog 1038 00:47:10,144 --> 00:47:11,265 going against the big guys. 1039 00:47:11,305 --> 00:47:12,035 It's powerful. 1040 00:47:12,475 --> 00:47:13,715 So look how short this lead is. 1041 00:47:13,815 --> 00:47:14,625 This is the lead. 1042 00:47:15,385 --> 00:47:18,275 That's not like what barely like a over a little over a hundred words, 1043 00:47:18,275 --> 00:47:19,965 maybe not even, I don't even know. 1044 00:47:19,965 --> 00:47:21,075 Like it's so short. 1045 00:47:21,535 --> 00:47:24,035 That's not even a hundred words, probably maybe like 50. 1046 00:47:25,320 --> 00:47:26,690 You know, and then it goes right into it. 1047 00:47:26,700 --> 00:47:27,290 What is it? 1048 00:47:28,110 --> 00:47:29,880 And we'll talk about that in another one. 1049 00:47:32,100 --> 00:47:35,919 So this one, this one is a great example of right to it. 1050 00:47:36,220 --> 00:47:39,410 So this two inch arm patch from a company called sleep is making 1051 00:47:39,410 --> 00:47:41,769 waves across the internet by helping thousands finally get the sleep they 1052 00:47:41,770 --> 00:47:43,720 deserve and wake up feeling refreshed. 1053 00:47:43,929 --> 00:47:45,219 I mean, just gets right to it. 1054 00:47:45,240 --> 00:47:47,160 You could say that this is the lead right here. 1055 00:47:47,615 --> 00:47:48,365 Gets right to it. 1056 00:47:48,385 --> 00:47:53,885 Some are saying breakthrough oral sleep, uh, or break could eventually 1057 00:47:54,095 --> 00:47:56,984 make oral sleep supplements and even prescription sleeping things. 1058 00:47:57,745 --> 00:47:59,955 Sleeping pills, I think in the past I'm talking too fast. 1059 00:47:59,955 --> 00:48:00,395 I'm sorry. 1060 00:48:01,005 --> 00:48:05,205 Um, and then it goes into the reviews and then it's like Susie story and 1061 00:48:05,205 --> 00:48:09,725 it's like, it's interspersed with these little stories about which is just. 1062 00:48:10,035 --> 00:48:14,405 Testimonials dripping through and then what is it? 1063 00:48:14,425 --> 00:48:16,415 How does it work and the benefits of it? 1064 00:48:16,715 --> 00:48:21,295 So that's really powerful That's again example of get to it abattoir. 1065 00:48:21,305 --> 00:48:22,325 It just gets right to it. 1066 00:48:22,685 --> 00:48:24,984 This is a long one This is actually a longer lead. 1067 00:48:24,985 --> 00:48:28,385 This is a story based one, which is it's been running for a long 1068 00:48:28,385 --> 00:48:30,085 time So it must be working. 1069 00:48:30,155 --> 00:48:33,795 Um, it's interesting So this japanese method sucks out 1070 00:48:33,805 --> 00:48:34,955 all the toxins in the body. 1071 00:48:35,075 --> 00:48:40,895 So this lead is so dragged out So what I would do to test if they were to 1072 00:48:40,895 --> 00:48:46,170 test it I would Get right to it faster because it's like one of our top editors 1073 00:48:46,170 --> 00:48:49,850 was great until he wasn't that's so weird Dennis renamed here for privacy 1074 00:48:49,860 --> 00:48:53,360 reasons a great colleague a friend of us It almost feels like a long like vsl 1075 00:48:53,369 --> 00:48:58,400 type lead and talks about all them All this stuff about him like he started 1076 00:48:58,400 --> 00:49:04,330 dissing himself in the office all this stuff He didn't like all these problems. 1077 00:49:04,330 --> 00:49:09,310 Like it's like It's just it's just all of david is just all these problems all the 1078 00:49:09,520 --> 00:49:15,020 way through here and then he went Um, he went to a spiritual retreat for a week. 1079 00:49:15,040 --> 00:49:16,270 So that was the solution. 1080 00:49:16,680 --> 00:49:18,990 Is he went, cause that's where he found the solution, is when 1081 00:49:18,990 --> 00:49:20,280 he went to a spiritual retreat. 1082 00:49:20,690 --> 00:49:24,570 And where and what he found at the spiritual retreat changed his life and can 1083 00:49:24,570 --> 00:49:26,760 now change thousands of other lives now. 1084 00:49:27,150 --> 00:49:27,510 Right? 1085 00:49:27,530 --> 00:49:29,090 So this one is a really long one. 1086 00:49:29,110 --> 00:49:32,960 And if you got my order bump, uh, for all these swipes, you can read all this. 1087 00:49:33,100 --> 00:49:34,909 I think it's working. 1088 00:49:35,220 --> 00:49:35,730 Um. 1089 00:49:36,075 --> 00:49:40,095 What I would do, I'd be interested to know what they were trying to do to 1090 00:49:40,135 --> 00:49:46,845 test different leads because this is a very, it's very long and I wonder, 1091 00:49:46,885 --> 00:49:54,634 I would test some other, maybe I would test an outcome, a benefit outcome 1092 00:49:54,644 --> 00:49:58,085 lead where it's like what it can do. 1093 00:49:58,795 --> 00:50:01,735 I would, there could be a possibility for a disruptor market. 1094 00:50:02,160 --> 00:50:07,250 Um, some sort of stat could be here too, just something that can get to it and 1095 00:50:07,250 --> 00:50:09,170 needs to get to it faster in my opinion. 1096 00:50:09,220 --> 00:50:12,209 It's just as like talking about David and how he's just a schlub, 1097 00:50:12,429 --> 00:50:16,430 like basically just this like, no, I'm sad at the office all the time. 1098 00:50:16,430 --> 00:50:18,150 And everyone's like, David, get out of here, dude. 1099 00:50:18,579 --> 00:50:19,730 You're bumming everyone out. 1100 00:50:19,730 --> 00:50:20,660 Go on to a retreat. 1101 00:50:20,660 --> 00:50:21,180 He's like, fine. 1102 00:50:21,180 --> 00:50:22,130 I'll go and retreat. 1103 00:50:22,730 --> 00:50:25,240 Hey, I put these things on my feet and now I'm better. 1104 00:50:25,600 --> 00:50:28,910 You know, like I feel like we can get to it faster, but anyway, I just want 1105 00:50:28,910 --> 00:50:30,440 to show you this is a story based one. 1106 00:50:30,890 --> 00:50:36,740 So Excuse me, uh shine armor. 1107 00:50:36,840 --> 00:50:39,059 So are you tired of getting showroom show always wanted? 1108 00:50:39,170 --> 00:50:42,410 So this is a good example of like things of the past like people 1109 00:50:42,410 --> 00:50:47,610 aren't using wax anymore not getting uh as good of A good of job. 1110 00:50:47,610 --> 00:50:51,510 So then it just kind of like I like this waxing is dead So it's 1111 00:50:51,510 --> 00:50:56,429 bringing in this kind of stat, you know using you know wax is the old 1112 00:50:56,430 --> 00:50:58,935 way of doing things You know, it's 1113 00:51:09,515 --> 00:51:11,845 yeah, it's just getting right to it's where it's like, it's 1114 00:51:11,845 --> 00:51:12,915 just going right to the pain. 1115 00:51:12,915 --> 00:51:15,285 Like, are you, are you tired of not getting the showroom shine? 1116 00:51:15,285 --> 00:51:18,124 You always wanted to get, maybe your detailing products aren't as good as 1117 00:51:18,125 --> 00:51:19,465 you hope you need to keep bringing it. 1118 00:51:20,624 --> 00:51:22,654 I think the lead's okay, but maybe it's. 1119 00:51:24,115 --> 00:51:25,825 There's some ways to test. 1120 00:51:26,625 --> 00:51:31,535 And I did one for these guys years ago, uh, through an agency, Weekend Digital. 1121 00:51:31,545 --> 00:51:34,664 Shout out to Tommy over at Weekend Digital. 1122 00:51:34,674 --> 00:51:39,875 So when they had them as a client, so I did one where it's like more of that 1123 00:51:39,875 --> 00:51:42,904 desire of wanting that showroom shine. 1124 00:51:43,304 --> 00:51:48,105 And um, it was almost like this jealousy, like other people, 1125 00:51:48,105 --> 00:51:51,325 like, how are you getting your car so shiny and leveraging that? 1126 00:51:51,335 --> 00:51:52,345 Like leveraging. 1127 00:51:53,145 --> 00:51:57,855 What others want from that guy that is like the professional detailer and what 1128 00:51:57,955 --> 00:52:01,825 what are the professionals using that they're not again It goes back to that 1129 00:52:01,825 --> 00:52:06,364 like what's the secret to these guys getting huge that I'm not using to get 1130 00:52:06,365 --> 00:52:09,775 huge, you know People always want that. 1131 00:52:10,014 --> 00:52:10,314 Okay. 1132 00:52:11,754 --> 00:52:13,115 So this is again. 1133 00:52:13,125 --> 00:52:19,465 It's what works is kind of like I guess you could say another example of a lead 1134 00:52:19,465 --> 00:52:23,815 is like the old thing, the old way of doing things or it doesn't work anymore. 1135 00:52:23,945 --> 00:52:26,315 It might, it might've worked up until a point, but now it's, 1136 00:52:26,345 --> 00:52:27,824 here's the new way of doing things. 1137 00:52:28,155 --> 00:52:29,805 So like this one has done really well. 1138 00:52:30,155 --> 00:52:34,474 Uh, this, this cosmic, uh, impressive high res near and far 1139 00:52:34,494 --> 00:52:35,755 photos with just a smartphone. 1140 00:52:35,755 --> 00:52:38,485 So the idea is you hook up this to your phone and you 1141 00:52:38,485 --> 00:52:39,815 can get a closer, better shot. 1142 00:52:39,905 --> 00:52:43,685 So, uh, and obviously in the hero image, they're showing like. 1143 00:52:44,030 --> 00:52:47,840 An outdoorsman and what you're able to capture look at that image of that ego 1144 00:52:47,840 --> 00:52:50,920 what you're able to capture and here's what it looks Like and now it hooks up to 1145 00:52:50,920 --> 00:52:53,160 your iphone or to your smartphone, right? 1146 00:52:53,430 --> 00:52:56,120 So right here smartphone camera technology has come a long way in 1147 00:52:56,120 --> 00:53:00,449 recent years putting a near pro quality camera everyone's hands But still even 1148 00:53:00,449 --> 00:53:03,130 the best phone cameras have limits. 1149 00:53:03,140 --> 00:53:07,420 So it's again showing like it's it's come a long ways however, it's no longer 1150 00:53:07,450 --> 00:53:12,695 like it's not as good as it could be and that this answer helps it be Even 1151 00:53:12,695 --> 00:53:16,265 better you can get better shots and it's and it's also bringing the fact 1152 00:53:16,265 --> 00:53:20,445 that it's so simple It's like you can if anyone has a smartphone you can have 1153 00:53:20,445 --> 00:53:25,384 this and take the best shots of your life Out and about and whatever so it 1154 00:53:25,435 --> 00:53:29,135 adds that again that convenience factor of like you don't have to do an extra 1155 00:53:29,175 --> 00:53:32,815 step You literally just take this thing and hook it to your and there you go 1156 00:53:33,165 --> 00:53:36,455 Um, it's with you all the time Okay. 1157 00:53:38,495 --> 00:53:38,995 That's it. 1158 00:53:39,065 --> 00:53:41,245 That's it for now of all the leads. 1159 00:53:41,245 --> 00:53:42,225 I think I've given you plenty. 1160 00:53:42,225 --> 00:53:43,365 It's almost an hour long thing. 1161 00:53:43,365 --> 00:53:43,915 Yikes. 1162 00:53:44,255 --> 00:53:49,705 Uh, but I wanted to give you that look at the best thing to do is obviously go 1163 00:53:49,705 --> 00:53:51,914 back to the audience, go to the audience. 1164 00:53:51,935 --> 00:53:58,325 And is this a product that is, has, can be set to disrupt a market, disrupt 1165 00:53:58,325 --> 00:54:03,665 a market that everyone That everyone is part of, and like, it's the big 1166 00:54:03,675 --> 00:54:05,325 market, like again, the smartwatch. 1167 00:54:05,625 --> 00:54:08,545 So if there's, everyone knows about the smartwatch, but like this, the 1168 00:54:08,545 --> 00:54:12,085 underdog smartwatch that's coming through and is even better, and no one 1169 00:54:12,085 --> 00:54:17,255 knows about, the disruptor, the hearing aids that are a cost of fraction, that 1170 00:54:17,255 --> 00:54:21,085 are a fraction of the cost of normal hearing aids, and it's disrupting the 1171 00:54:21,095 --> 00:54:23,955 big hearing aid tech company, right? 1172 00:54:24,315 --> 00:54:27,205 So under, disruptor angles always work for the leads. 1173 00:54:27,970 --> 00:54:32,850 Maybe I don't want to say always work, but they work so well for a lot 1174 00:54:32,850 --> 00:54:37,480 of the gadgets, a lot of the e comm products, the logic headline, um, 1175 00:54:38,630 --> 00:54:43,960 bringing in a logic, like what the, uh, the problems help, like a statistic. 1176 00:54:45,249 --> 00:54:49,710 Did you know that, you know, one in three houses get robbed every, every. 1177 00:54:50,565 --> 00:54:52,705 Or like, you know, did you know that there's a robbery? 1178 00:54:52,705 --> 00:54:56,375 I use this actually for these little, we called it the home howler, 1179 00:54:56,465 --> 00:54:59,405 but it's like this little alarm we've set up underneath the door. 1180 00:54:59,605 --> 00:55:02,885 And when the door opens, it like, it like triggers the alarm. 1181 00:55:03,125 --> 00:55:05,985 And so we use a statistic where it's like, what is it? 1182 00:55:05,985 --> 00:55:08,925 Like a home gets robbed every thirty seconds or something like that. 1183 00:55:09,215 --> 00:55:10,305 So using that. 1184 00:55:10,630 --> 00:55:14,700 As a statistic, like, wow, like, it just makes you like, oh, it kind of makes you 1185 00:55:14,700 --> 00:55:18,350 sit up and, you know, and this little, this little door stopping alarm, this 1186 00:55:18,350 --> 00:55:22,940 little door stopper alarm is now set to disrupt the home security system, 1187 00:55:23,510 --> 00:55:27,920 uh, the billion dollar home security system, and it's so easy and it costs 1188 00:55:27,920 --> 00:55:30,020 a fraction and you can get one today. 1189 00:55:30,330 --> 00:55:33,550 So, statistic is really, really powerful. 1190 00:55:33,640 --> 00:55:37,540 Statistic with a disruptor, even bigger whammy. 1191 00:55:38,670 --> 00:55:40,700 And then, of course, an emotional story, we'll always. 1192 00:55:41,155 --> 00:55:47,955 Not again, I'm using always, but not always, but if it calls, if it can use an 1193 00:55:47,955 --> 00:55:53,444 emotional hook, if there is an emotional hook available, if you, if it, again, 1194 00:55:53,444 --> 00:55:57,034 it goes to your audience, if there's something there that could be used, great. 1195 00:55:57,365 --> 00:56:01,045 I've seen it where I'm like, I don't think this is, I've seen an advertorial 1196 00:56:01,055 --> 00:56:06,165 with her using an emotional story for something that I felt was too 1197 00:56:06,165 --> 00:56:08,405 far left field for this product. 1198 00:56:08,425 --> 00:56:12,285 In other words, like it's just the emotion didn't. 1199 00:56:13,415 --> 00:56:16,915 It didn't match for what the product is actually solving. 1200 00:56:17,215 --> 00:56:18,295 It was a reach. 1201 00:56:18,325 --> 00:56:21,805 In other words, it's equivalent, again, to that Better Butter Spreader, where 1202 00:56:21,805 --> 00:56:25,085 like, I didn't have a weapon, but I added my Better Butter Spreader to 1203 00:56:25,085 --> 00:56:26,895 this, to this burglar that came in. 1204 00:56:27,355 --> 00:56:28,425 It's a reach. 1205 00:56:28,565 --> 00:56:34,644 Like, you don't need, you don't, don't force an emotional story if it's not. 1206 00:56:35,005 --> 00:56:39,725 If it's not available, uh, and when I say emotional, like dramatic 1207 00:56:39,875 --> 00:56:43,885 life and death, there could still be an emotional story based on 1208 00:56:43,894 --> 00:56:45,725 nostalgia, based on embarrassment. 1209 00:56:45,725 --> 00:56:49,664 There's other emotions that we can feel, uh, that people can relate to. 1210 00:56:49,665 --> 00:56:51,055 So just keep that in mind. 1211 00:56:51,385 --> 00:56:55,525 I hope this was really helpful and you can, again, take this, take this example. 1212 00:56:55,945 --> 00:56:59,735 Take this as your example download this and you can use it and replace 1213 00:56:59,735 --> 00:57:03,385 it and be there with you So you can now like anytime you write a lead 1214 00:57:03,385 --> 00:57:06,744 you're like, how did he What did he thrive for that lead for the disruptor? 1215 00:57:06,745 --> 00:57:11,245 Here you go Um, and then also if you have the order bump if you picked up for all 1216 00:57:11,245 --> 00:57:14,555 the swipes You can take a look at all those leads and help you out as well. 1217 00:57:14,835 --> 00:57:17,665 Uh, that's it for now That was a long lesson on leads, 1218 00:57:17,665 --> 00:57:18,765 but I hope it was helpful. 1219 00:57:18,855 --> 00:57:19,425 Thanks guys. 1220 00:57:19,835 --> 00:57:19,945 Bye. 1221 00:57:19,945 --> 00:57:20,575 Bye 103085

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