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Mm...
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I've returned.
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Hello.
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Welcome back.
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Now we're gonna talk
about Mabitorial leads.
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We went through the headlines, and now
we're gonna talk about the next thing
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that we would test in the Mabitorial.
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Are the leads or the lead of an abitorial
now, a couple of things about leads.
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First off is that leads for an abitorial
are much, much shorter than a lead
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for a VSL or for a sales letter.
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Sales letter leads tend to
be like max, maybe 500 words,
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maybe 800 is even pushing it.
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I see leads that are way too long
because also a lot of copywriters
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feel like everything has to go on that
lead in order for to pull you through.
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Keep in mind with abitorial.
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It is get to it, get to it, right?
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They're going from an ad to an
advertorial to then to the product.
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So the lead, if you think about the
overall advertorial being max 1200 words.
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So you can kind of see, like,
if that's the max, the lead is
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going to be much, much shorter.
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It's a couple paragraphs.
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It's at most, like, 250 words.
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It really shouldn't be that long at all.
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So what's great, though,
is you could test a lot.
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You could test a lot of different
leads to see which one is capturing.
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That's why when we test advertorials,
we always test the headlines and
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the leads and the hero image.
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Of course, the offering, yada, yada, yada.
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But when it comes to the actual
copy itself and the look on the
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page, headline, the lead, and
the hero image above the fold.
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Okay.
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So let's go over the Mavatoria leads.
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Now with the leads, keep in mind,
these are the three main ones that I
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see in the three main ones that I use.
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Now does that mean that these are the only
three available, the only three that work?
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No, no, no, no, no.
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There are so many
different types out there.
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A lot of times I have
also seen combinations.
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So keep that in mind too, like just like
in headlines, how we do a combination
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that might have a social proof with a
stat and so on, uh, how kind of avatar,
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how kind of headline with an emotional,
uh, personal story and so on, like that,
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there could be combinations as well.
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So I'm going to show you the
three main types of leads that
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I always tend to go to, and I'll
show you then of course examples.
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So here's the doc that you're going
to be able to use, you could just...
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Copy paste over and then rewrite it.
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Um, but you get this idea when
it comes to this, to these types.
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Um, sorry, I got, I'm not
going to cut this at all.
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You get to see me struggle
with something in my throat.
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I'm going to have a sip of coffee.
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Okay, so let's go through it.
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So first, uh, the first lead I want
to talk about is the disruptor lead.
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Just like the disruptor headline.
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This is now going more into it.
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So the idea is a couple of things are,
it's always a startup company that is
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disrupting this billion dollar industry.
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And because everyone loves an underdog
and they love an underdog disrupting
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a billion dollar industry because they
always say billion dollar industries
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are like these non personal personality
type of brands that don't care about you
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and they're just look how big they are.
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They don't care about how you feel.
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And like people just.
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Eat up their products, right?
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So the underdog tale of a disrupting
billion dollar industry So this
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one I use for this brand right
here, uh for this product for this.
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Uh, Yes this offer now where I got this is
I know that this lead is working So this
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is based on like what i'm seeing working
in a lot of ads in the beauty brand ads.
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So a lot of it is Is going against
the big enemy being the beauty brand
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industry So right here think the beauty
industry is your friend think again
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beauty companies have been ripping
women off with overpriced creams that
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do nothing for one's skin and then it
goes It goes into this part, a genius
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startup company is fighting back against
high end beauty brands with a simple and
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affordable skin rejuvenating therapy wand
that's 100% safe, easy to use and can
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help turn back the clock on skin cells
for a vibrant youthful look in minutes.
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Then it goes into the company.
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The company Revita Beauty has
discovered how to use the same
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youth defying practices commonly
used by A list celebrities,
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but at a fraction of the price.
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without seeing a dermatologist,
expensive medical spa, or wasting
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money on skin damaging injections.
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So there's a lot to unpack here, right?
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So first off, it's, it's fighting
against these big beauty brands
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with something that is affordable.
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You can easy, you can use at home.
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It's 100% safe and it
can, what does it do?
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It turns back the clock on skin
cells for vibrant looking minutes.
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So it gives them that benefit, that
outcome of what they want, what the
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company is and how they discover
this youth defining practices.
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It's commonly used by A list celebrities,
so that's another part two, where it's
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used by people that they aspire to be,
this A list celebrity, or not aspire, but
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they look upon these A list celebrities
like, wow, how do they look so amazing?
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How are they able to look still so young?
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Um.
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And so, and also with that age
list celebrity, it's kind of like
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this guarded secret that people
also want to know, like, what is
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it that they have that I don't?
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That's something that's also used
in lots of different industries.
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So, I use that also in the bodybuilding
community, where it's like, what are the
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big guys at the gym doing that I'm not?
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Obviously steroids, right?
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But it's like, Um, what are the big
guys at the gyms doing, like what are
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the secrets that they are using that
I'm not and I want to know about it.
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That also, and then it's revealed, you
know, you're able to look this big,
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I'm now talking about the bodybuilders,
you're able to look this big, get
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this mean and so on without dirty
gear and injections and all this stuff
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and you're able to do it naturally.
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So yeah, yeah.
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It works.
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So then you also unpack it by
this, by also going against the
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objections that they don't want to do.
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They don't want to see a dermatologist,
because it's expensive, and also maybe
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they don't have the money for it.
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They don't want to go to an expensive
medical spa, which usually is
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multiple, multiple, uh, multiples.
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in order to look great or wasting
money on skin damaging injections.
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So a lot of women that go get
injections, maybe it doesn't
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turn out the way they want it to.
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Their lips can look funnier or
something and it looks very fake.
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Right?
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So then it goes, so that's that one.
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Then this.
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This other one, same idea.
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The affordable smartwatch big tech
companies don't want you to know about.
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I took this from just an ad.
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So this is also always used.
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This has been used forever.
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Like the blank blank that doctors,
doctors don't want you to know about.
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The, you know, you can replace that
with like the, the natural The natural
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plant remedy that doctors don't want
you to know about because it's like it's
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going to hurt their bottom line and so
on and these that would obviously go
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towards an audience that are skeptical
of doctors that are doctors are just
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pill peddlers that are just like
throwing another pill at you for them.
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For so they can make money off
of you type of idea, right?
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So with this the affordable smartwatch
big tech companies don't want you to know
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about a genius startup company again Same
idea is flipping the five billion dollar
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in smartwatch industry on its head The u.
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s.
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Based company behind active track pro has
invented a sleek easy to use smartwatch
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specifically designed for seniors So
this is i'm going to i'm going right for
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that audience because like smartwatches
can be used by everyone, right?
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but I notice Where we can have a leg
up is when you're doing your research
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and you're looking at your competitors
And then you're understanding your
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audience even better than they are and
you're gonna see this too If you if
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you look at my bonus I actually write
this abiturial from start to strip from
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start to finish for this and how I'm
able to get to there and talk about the
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audience and and really home in on the
actual The audience that we're going for.
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So it's not just this broad, like everyone
wants a smartwatch and it's affordable,
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not really because a lot of the, because
you're going to get a younger crowd
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that it was like, they want the big
brand, they want the Apple watch, right?
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But seniors, they don't, they don't care.
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They don't care about the
big brand, not all of them.
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Uh, but a lot of them don't care about it.
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They just want something
that is one seniors love.
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Something that is affordable.
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They don't want to get ripped off.
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They want something affordable that also
isn't cheap and isn't going to fall apart.
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And also another thing too, is they
don't want it to be complicated.
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So, and then when I'm calling it
out, it's like, that's something
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really, really, uh, powerful.
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And this has also been
used for a long time too.
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I have some other examples.
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Uh, you could see it in magazines.
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There's a laptop that's made
specifically for seniors.
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And that's like the headline.
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It's like, finally, a laptop
made specifically for seniors.
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It's like, so it's, it's,
it's using the tech.
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That seniors feel like they have to
catch up to, but they don't want to deal
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with something that's more complicated.
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So it's like it's designed for them
and they feel it's great, you know,
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um, so anyway Going into this active
track pro is easy to set up can be done
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in seconds So that's something I want
to make sure that they know because I
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noticed that a lot of The pain point
is that a lot of people were confused
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or like it's complicated to set up.
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They got to get on a call.
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They have to figure out tech.
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They got to go online
and look up instructions.
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They hate that and can do all the awesome
features and as expensive smartwatches,
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but at a fraction of the cost.
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I mean, what more can you want, right?
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So this is, that's,
that's all the lead is.
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It's just that this is how long it is.
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That's the lead.
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Literally.
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That's the lead.
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How long is that?
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That is.
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74 words?
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I mean, tight lead.
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You don't need a lot.
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You don't need a lot at all.
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Again, I am not, for this kind of
lead, you are not trying to like
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pull them in on a certain emotion.
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I'm like, father, father,
are you dying, father?
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Where's your smartwatch that tells
you that you're dying, father?
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Like, you don't need to do
anything dumb like that.
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I'll get to those emotional ones later,
but it doesn't need to be this long,
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drawn out, ridiculous, emotional thing.
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Again, an abiturial is get to it.
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Get to the thing.
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What is it and how it's
gonna benefit them?
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So then the next one is, look at this one.
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This one's also really, really short.
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This is the leaf.
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How short is this?
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57, even tighter.
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So this is for a security
cam, uh, that, yeah.
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So it's a, it's those, this one
has done really, really well.
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This is a great product that has done.
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Great in sales.
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So it's a, you can, I'm like looking
around like, like there's an answer up in
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the ceiling, but it's a light socket one.
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You can screw it in and
it's a security camera.
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And then you can, you can like move
it around on your phone and stuff.
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But it's a, we called it a
light socket security cam.
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Perfect.
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Doesn't need to be complicated.
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So would you like a security cam that
keeps a permanent and stable connection
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without breaking the bank or dealing with
shady expense and expensive installers?
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Immediately going right
for the jugular in this.
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When I say jugular, like you'll,
we'll talk about more like the, uh,
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throat grabber kind of lead, right?
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We don't need to, I don't need
to go drawn out of, uh, this
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long lead to try to pull them in.
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I'm going right for it.
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And one of the biggest
problems that I see.
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That a lot of our, um, pain point,
a big pain point for a lot of
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these people when it deals with
these kind of security cameras is
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like it doesn't keep a connection.
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So it keeps getting disconnected.
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So like if they try to get on their
phone or whatever, it's disconnected.
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So this is something we want to
back it up with like proof that
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this does a stable connection.
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It's amazing.
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So I wanted to go right for the jugular
and I think this is this is Lee that did.
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The best out of the three that
I did would you like a security
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cam that keeps a permanent stable
connection without breaking the bank?
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So it's cheap.
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It's affordable or dealing with
shading expensive installers.
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So Just like the other cameras
that maybe you have to deal with
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installers or also a lot of wiring
People don't want to deal with that.
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They just want it, they want it simple
to install and this is really that.
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It's like you scan the QR code, you
screw it in and boom, it's set to go.
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So, and then it goes
right into this, the U.
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S.
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based tech company.
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This U.
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S.
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based tech, uh, tech company.
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So again, I also say U.
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S.
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based.
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This is really important too for
if you're selling to Americans.
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They want to know that it's a U.
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S.
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based thing.
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It's disrupting a billion dollar market
with their latest invention affordable
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indoor outdoor security camera that
screws into most light sockets and
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works with either iPhone or Android.
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That's it.
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That's it.
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Just go right for it.
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And then it goes right
into the body of it.
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What is it?
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And so on.
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So I'll get to that later.
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All right, the logic headline
stating a startling fact and then
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following up with a solution.
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So I'm gonna give you some examples here.
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So now this is, you know, this
is the giving the stat of like
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I mean, I'll just go through it.
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So, the average person spends
about 26 of their life sleeping.
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That means you're spending 26
years of your life in bed sheets.
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So, why not spend that time in
the best bed sheets in the world?
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It should come as no surprise that
the quality of your sleep plays a huge
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role in your long term health, too.
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We've got good sleep
starts with good sheets.
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Sheets are soft, well soft.
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So the idea is a big startling fact.
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I don't know how startling this is.
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Also, you're selling bedsheets, so you
don't need to be super emotional with it.
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Now, also, if you look at Blissy,
Blissy had this as well, where it's,
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uh, they would have a startling fact.
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I think it was a...
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I can't remember.
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They had multiple different leads, and I
can probably show those examples as well.
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But if you're to look up Blissey,
they've done really well with
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their advertorials for years.
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Um, and I think the one that did really
well for a while is actually Personal
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Story, so we'll get down to that later.
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So the idea is it spends 26 years
of life sleeping, so it's, it kind
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of makes you sit up and go, Oh!
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Oh, wow.
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You know, 26 years of your life
sleeping, and it kind of makes
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you go, Oh, that means you use it.
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And bedsheets.
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You spend 26 years of
your life in bedsheets.
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So why not spend that time in
the best bedsheets in the world?
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Okay, that makes sense.
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You know, are you kind of making logic?
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Like, yeah, it's 26 years life.
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Why not make it the best, right?
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And this is selling the
Miracle, uh, bedsheets.
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So it's those anti bacterial bedsheets,
is their whole angle, made with like
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silver thread and all this stuff.
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And which, I have some.
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And they're good.
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They're nice.
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They're nice and soft.
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Um, so again, startling fact.
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It's just going into that startling fact.
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So here's another one.
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This is for finance.
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Many Americans worry they're
not saving enough for their
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retirement, rightfully so.
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Um, a 20, 2022 Northwestern Mutual study
found that 62% of US adults admit their
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financial planning needs improvement.
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However, only 35% of Americans
work with a financial advisor.
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So it's going, this is a lead gen
for, I think it's a smart asset.
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So it's a lead gen to that to get on,
uh, A financial advisor list within
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your area, so the idea is you put in
your name and all this and then it
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would go to like the top three financial
advisors in your area and they would,
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whoever reaches out to you first idea.
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Uh, so lead gen editorial.
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So again, a startling, I don't know how
startling that is, but they're giving
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a fact like, hey, you know, you're part
of the, is it that great of a lead?
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I don't know.
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I don't, I don't know.
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Obviously, it's hard to tell.
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You can always, I never know anymore.
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I always and that's another
thing too is keep in mind.
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You don't know what you don't know like,
um, like I mentioned before in one of
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the videos you a lot of copywriters
tend to be like Ah, my lead will crush.
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I know it'll crush because they have
a lot of ego and they think that what
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they're writing is awesome and then
it gets tested and they're like, oh,
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I'm not that great of a copywriter.
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But the truth is, is you just don't know.
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No, you're a great copywriter.
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But what makes a great copywriter is
you just keep going, keep going and
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then keep researching and then keep
trying again and again and again.
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So what I would do is, um.
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Test up this I I did a some finance
advertorials in the past for like watchdog
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and stuff and I did What worked in the
past as well is some sort of embarrassing
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story Embarrassing story about like
their credit card perhaps declining.
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So maybe it's like a credit report kind
of fix And so that would be lean more
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towards that emotion because no one wants
to be embarrassed by like their credit
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card declining or something like that.
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That's super embarrassing,
especially in public.
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Right?
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So the big thing that you have to know is.
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Always go back to the audience.
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Whenever in doubt, you're not sure, and
you're like, oh, I want to write this
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over here, and I've seen copywriters
that are like, I'm guessing this angle,
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I'm guessing, I'm trying out these
three leads, and I'm guessing, because
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that's what, you know, I, uh, I believe
these things, and like, don't, it sounds
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like you don't know your audience.
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When you know your audience, then you
know, okay, I'm the more I've researched
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the more I realized that this lead will
probably work because it seems like this
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is the biggest complaint This is the
biggest pain point that they're suffering
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with And so then you agitate that pain
point followed by the solution right the
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PAS system pain agitate salute salute
solve solution So that's the always
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the thing always remember when in doubt
Don't guess, go back to the audience.
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Go back to the audience that you're
serving, uh, with the offer and
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understand them better and then
they will reveal the lead to you.
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Uh, if you're not sure, get
on the phone with them too.
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There's so many conversations I've had
with the audience that we're serving,
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uh, through testimonial or, so like if,
say for instance, Uh, nice little tip,
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like, as soon as the product is being
sold or something, get on the phone
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with people that are buying the product.
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Get on the phone with them.
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Why did they buy a bunch of this product?
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Why did they buy a bunch
of this supplement?
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What are they going through?
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So you can understand them.
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So then what they're doing is just
kind of like, it's, it's kind of
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silly, but it's like fat club,
a fight, fat club, fight club.
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Whether talk about like we're selling
their fat asses back to themselves
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like it sounds so just grim and so
awful but the idea is like that if you
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remember seeing Fight Club where it's
like the Liposuction and the fat and
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they're making soap and they're selling
it back to these Uh, to the women.
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So it's, that sounds awful.
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I, I'm just the quick metaphor that came
to mind, but the idea is you're taking,
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I use the information that they're
giving me to then sell them, sell them.
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I'm selling them on basically
what they've already told me.
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That's just making that connection.
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So they tell me of why
they want to lose weight.
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Great.
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I now use that in the thing.
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To explain why you want to lose weight
and there's more people like that person
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that just told me that story I'm not
I'm not creating it being creative.
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I'm literally just taking like thank
you for telling me your story I'm now
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gonna sell you your story back to you.
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That's really what it is.
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So there you go.
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So this one too, uh, Am I going deaf?
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Um, this starts with like
a little quote right here.
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If you find yourself asking
this question lately, I like
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this, I actually like this one.
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And this is for a hearing aid.
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Um, if you find yourself asking this
question lately, you're not alone.
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A recent report revealed that
nearly 500 million people now
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suffer from hearing loss worldwide.
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Of course, it's not
normal for a hearing...
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Of course, it's normal for a hearing
to fade over time, but what isn't
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normal is all the extremely loud noise.
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We're now exposed to on a daily basis.
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Interesting.
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That's like an interesting fact.
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Right?
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Uh, for example, did you know
that listening to your headphones
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at more than 60% volume can
cause permanent hearing loss?
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So some, I would also test the lead and
just make it go and put that up there.
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Did you know, uh, if you have,
you know, you can like, did you
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know, it depends on the market.
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Cause I'm at the same time.
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I'm like, how many seniors, If they're
selling to seniors, how many of
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them are actually using headphones?
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I don't know.
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Uh, so the idea for this though, is I
would, there's certain things I would
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probably cut or move things around.
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So, cause like, because at
the same time, like does this.
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Speak to the audience, these
two lines, and then it goes.
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So if you notice, you're asking
to speak up a normal conversation.
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So that is different, right?
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That would be, that would probably
be connecting more to an older crowd.
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Like, I don't know if they say speak
up or like, or like, wait, repeat that.
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And you feel embarrassed.
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A lot of people just are feeling how
embarrassing is it for like, hey, he's.
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Say that again.
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Say that again.
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Like, it's so embarrassing because you
just feel bad because it's like, you don't
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want to, you don't want to put out the
person that has to repeat it again because
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then it makes you feel bad and then you,
and then it makes you feel as if like
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they think that you're not listening.
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It's like, no, I'm trying to listen, but
it's just, my hearing is bad, you know?
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So anyway, but I just want to point
this out though, that there is a stat
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up front, like, hey, did you know?
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Is it the best lead?
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I don't know.
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I don't know.
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I think it could probably be done
better, but maybe it's winning right
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now and I could be completely wrong.
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All right.
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Emotional story lead.
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So this is now throw them into the
emotional story that we can connect to.
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So this is the emotional story leads.
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This is the personal story.
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And we know that this works.
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And if you've taken any lessons from
like Chris, a dad with his pig, with his
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pig method and stuff like he's classic,
you know, really, really good at this.
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So I'm not going to go.
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You can learn a lot of the
emotional storytelling.
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He's a game changer at that,
so shout out to Chris for that.
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Uh, but I'll show you, that
works also for advertorials
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as well, as a story based one.
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Especially when it comes around
something that is, um, uh,
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fearful, something embarrassing,
something that you can really use.
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But, you know, not every single gadget
is gonna make them, I don't think
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every single gadget is, Gonna be
emotionally driven, if that makes sense.
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When I say emotionally
driven, a personal story.
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I think emotion's always
involved, of course.
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And everything is considered
a story, you can argue.
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But I don't think everything needs
to go for, like, the jugular.
463
00:21:33,830 --> 00:21:36,560
And, like, father was dying on the patio.
464
00:21:36,840 --> 00:21:40,209
And, thankfully, I had
this remote control car.
465
00:21:40,925 --> 00:21:45,555
You know, like some sort of gadget, like
it doesn't need to be super, it just,
466
00:21:45,685 --> 00:21:47,205
and I'll show you an example of why.
467
00:21:47,665 --> 00:21:48,515
So here's one.
468
00:21:48,555 --> 00:21:53,155
So this is for the Better Butter
Spreader, which I named, you know,
469
00:21:53,155 --> 00:21:54,304
like the Better Butter Spreader.
470
00:21:54,394 --> 00:21:54,634
Hmm.
471
00:21:54,864 --> 00:21:55,414
It's fun to say.
472
00:21:55,995 --> 00:21:59,455
So the Better Butter Spreader, it's
this knife that has holes in it.
473
00:21:59,694 --> 00:22:02,775
And the whole, the whole
benefit is you can now.
474
00:22:03,750 --> 00:22:06,450
Instead of having butter out on the
counter and waiting forever to get to
475
00:22:06,450 --> 00:22:10,700
room temperature, you could take ice cold
butter and scrape it over with this knife,
476
00:22:10,770 --> 00:22:14,970
and it comes out all noodley, and you're
able to spread that over toast, or bread,
477
00:22:15,240 --> 00:22:17,150
without it getting chunked up and ruined.
478
00:22:17,150 --> 00:22:21,619
It can, it can actually,
uh, be spread over smoothly.
479
00:22:22,235 --> 00:22:24,635
And it's because of
those, that cool knife.
480
00:22:24,975 --> 00:22:30,645
So I think this is, this is the
lead that did the best at the time
481
00:22:30,665 --> 00:22:32,165
where it's an emotional story.
482
00:22:32,694 --> 00:22:35,225
Uh, emotional story meaning it's
nothing like super emotional,
483
00:22:35,225 --> 00:22:36,545
but it's, it's a story.
484
00:22:37,034 --> 00:22:40,155
Uh, I'm 55 and I almost stole something
for the first time in my life.
485
00:22:40,194 --> 00:22:40,815
Here's what happened.
486
00:22:41,254 --> 00:22:42,675
So right away it's like, what?
487
00:22:43,020 --> 00:22:45,960
It makes you kind of like, huh,
I'm 55 and I almost stole something
488
00:22:45,960 --> 00:22:47,000
for the first time in my life.
489
00:22:47,010 --> 00:22:47,610
Here's what happened.
490
00:22:48,210 --> 00:22:50,600
Husband and I went to a fancy restaurant
for our 25th wedding anniversary.
491
00:22:50,600 --> 00:22:53,280
You could tell it was fancy because
they had what looked like five sets of
492
00:22:53,280 --> 00:22:54,669
silverware on either side of the plate.
493
00:22:54,750 --> 00:22:57,670
Big spoons, little spoons, forks
galore, and an assortment of knives.
494
00:22:58,010 --> 00:23:01,149
I didn't know what half of them were
besides making me feel like a duchess.
495
00:23:01,540 --> 00:23:03,550
But there was one butter knife
that I fell in love with.
496
00:23:03,570 --> 00:23:06,810
It's also the one that I wanted to
stick in my purse and not tell a soul.
497
00:23:06,820 --> 00:23:08,139
It had these holes on.
498
00:23:08,230 --> 00:23:09,710
It had these holes on.
499
00:23:10,270 --> 00:23:10,970
Holes on?
500
00:23:11,080 --> 00:23:11,600
Nice Heath.
501
00:23:11,885 --> 00:23:12,195
Good.
502
00:23:12,455 --> 00:23:14,514
How's that English degree
working out for you, Heath?
503
00:23:15,054 --> 00:23:16,505
It's working out okay.
504
00:23:17,465 --> 00:23:21,014
Ah, it had these holes in it.
505
00:23:25,185 --> 00:23:26,485
Or it had these holes.
506
00:23:31,034 --> 00:23:32,235
Yeah, we'll work it there.
507
00:23:32,905 --> 00:23:35,874
You get to see me, in
real time, make a goof.
508
00:23:35,874 --> 00:23:37,225
Whatever, I'm not editing it out.
509
00:23:37,895 --> 00:23:39,194
You get to see the real me, baby!
510
00:23:39,824 --> 00:23:43,014
And when I scraped cold butter, the
butter would go through these holes.
511
00:23:43,820 --> 00:23:47,190
And become creamy and fluffy, which
made it super easy to spread on bread.
512
00:23:47,730 --> 00:23:51,310
Out of all the silverware, this is the one
kitchen utensil that I felt is actually
513
00:23:51,310 --> 00:23:53,390
worth taking up space in a kitchen drawer.
514
00:23:53,730 --> 00:23:57,540
After that dinner, I was searching for
that same knife everywhere, but it seemed
515
00:23:57,540 --> 00:24:01,370
like it was a closely guarded secret that
only the top restauranteurs knew about.
516
00:24:01,669 --> 00:24:05,890
I continued to do my sleuthing, and after
what felt like forever, eventually found
517
00:24:05,890 --> 00:24:08,760
the exact butter knife I was looking
for, and immediately bought five of them.
518
00:24:08,970 --> 00:24:09,270
Right?
519
00:24:09,570 --> 00:24:11,330
So the idea is, this is...
520
00:24:11,689 --> 00:24:16,909
It's that desire of they used it.
521
00:24:16,949 --> 00:24:20,080
I mean, how many times have you done
that when you went to a restaurant and
522
00:24:20,080 --> 00:24:23,199
you're like, what, what sauce is this?
523
00:24:23,519 --> 00:24:24,110
What hot sauce?
524
00:24:24,149 --> 00:24:26,840
Or you go to a hotel and you're
like, what towels are these?
525
00:24:27,550 --> 00:24:27,840
What?
526
00:24:27,850 --> 00:24:29,400
I think they actually use that in Blissy.
527
00:24:29,840 --> 00:24:34,310
Uh, Blissy used, yes, I know that
for a fact, they used, one of their
528
00:24:34,310 --> 00:24:38,340
leads was like the family went to
a hotel and they all slept amazing.
529
00:24:38,480 --> 00:24:39,810
Why do they sleep amazing?
530
00:24:39,810 --> 00:24:41,440
It was because of these pillowcases.
531
00:24:41,810 --> 00:24:45,520
Hotel quality pillowcase, like
high end hotel quality pillowcases.
532
00:24:45,919 --> 00:24:47,080
It was unbelievable.
533
00:24:47,120 --> 00:24:49,820
And then that was the
story of the editorial.
534
00:24:50,740 --> 00:24:56,210
So it's taking, uh, you know, a desire
to have this thing that you saw it
535
00:24:56,220 --> 00:24:58,079
elsewhere and you want it for your own.
536
00:24:58,399 --> 00:25:02,019
For yourself for at home and
so you go and research it.
537
00:25:02,029 --> 00:25:03,709
So that's always really powerful.
538
00:25:03,719 --> 00:25:07,349
It's almost it's what's really
make sense is it's kind of
539
00:25:07,350 --> 00:25:08,729
like a real life demonstration.
540
00:25:08,729 --> 00:25:12,009
If you think about it, like they go and
they are able to demonstrate it somewhere,
541
00:25:12,039 --> 00:25:14,519
use it and be like, holy smokes.
542
00:25:14,539 --> 00:25:15,770
Now I want one.
543
00:25:16,370 --> 00:25:18,840
So then they go home and they
search out and try to get it,
544
00:25:18,900 --> 00:25:19,980
because they want it, right?
545
00:25:20,530 --> 00:25:23,200
So, uh, that was for the
Better Butter Spreader.
546
00:25:23,220 --> 00:25:26,559
And obviously, I'm not going to tell an
emotional story about a butter knife.
547
00:25:26,570 --> 00:25:29,449
Like, I'm not going to tell a
story of like, an intruder came in.
548
00:25:29,710 --> 00:25:33,340
I had nothing, except my
Better Butter Spreader.
549
00:25:34,200 --> 00:25:38,870
And I, I turned the
intruder into small noodles.
550
00:25:39,530 --> 00:25:42,070
Of flesh when I wiped it on his face.
551
00:25:42,070 --> 00:25:47,439
He was like, ah, and he ran away and
then I spread his skin over toast Like
552
00:25:47,710 --> 00:25:51,540
I can't use an emotional story for the
better butter spreader in that sense.
553
00:25:51,550 --> 00:25:55,609
I'm sure you could Maybe it's
some sort of like nostalgia.
554
00:25:55,610 --> 00:26:00,415
That's another thing to understand is
um Older people, older individuals, they
555
00:26:00,415 --> 00:26:06,044
tend to, and even myself, if you lean
into nostalgia, it's very, very powerful.
556
00:26:06,044 --> 00:26:07,264
I forgot who talked about this.
557
00:26:07,274 --> 00:26:08,194
It might have been Eugene Schwartz.
558
00:26:08,205 --> 00:26:08,625
No.
559
00:26:10,085 --> 00:26:11,045
Some marketer.
560
00:26:11,054 --> 00:26:12,304
It might have even been Dan Kennedy.
561
00:26:12,304 --> 00:26:13,874
But it's just, it's been
passed on for a long time.
562
00:26:13,875 --> 00:26:16,395
If you lean into nostalgia,
people love that.
563
00:26:16,585 --> 00:26:21,324
People want, because everyone's always,
when you get older, you're always kind of
564
00:26:21,324 --> 00:26:24,215
like wistful for, oh, the good old times.
565
00:26:24,805 --> 00:26:27,165
The good old, the good old Reagan days.
566
00:26:27,750 --> 00:26:31,469
Oh, I miss Reagan, you know, like
it's, I don't know why Reagan, but,
567
00:26:32,080 --> 00:26:34,270
uh, the idea is that nostalgia.
568
00:26:34,270 --> 00:26:35,449
It's really powerful stuff.
569
00:26:37,340 --> 00:26:37,870
Oh, that's right.
570
00:26:37,870 --> 00:26:40,249
Because the reason why I mentioned that
is because I had another lead that's
571
00:26:40,250 --> 00:26:43,710
like, hey, I mean, do you remember
the days of, I remember the days of
572
00:26:43,710 --> 00:26:47,459
like, you know, waking up and having
jelly on toast, something like that.
573
00:26:47,469 --> 00:26:49,800
Like I was using that kind of idea.
574
00:26:50,190 --> 00:26:53,070
Um, Anyway, so let's move on.
575
00:26:53,350 --> 00:26:54,440
So this is an example.
576
00:26:54,440 --> 00:26:56,730
This is for the, this pillow.
577
00:26:56,890 --> 00:26:57,500
Suterra?
578
00:26:57,660 --> 00:26:58,510
The Suterra pillow.
579
00:26:58,870 --> 00:26:59,320
Diana.
580
00:26:59,320 --> 00:27:02,180
So this was interesting because it's
done in a third person point of view.
581
00:27:02,200 --> 00:27:03,380
So it's giving names.
582
00:27:03,630 --> 00:27:06,110
Diana, 67, was terrified that her
husband's poor sleeping habits
583
00:27:06,110 --> 00:27:07,460
would destroy their marriage.
584
00:27:07,995 --> 00:27:08,455
Ooh.
585
00:27:08,925 --> 00:27:13,115
As a retired, uh, as a, uh, as a retired
claims service supervisor, she made a
586
00:27:13,115 --> 00:27:14,685
priority to Joyer Golden Years with him.
587
00:27:15,055 --> 00:27:18,734
The couple even moved to Arizona to
become closer to the son and grandkids.
588
00:27:18,735 --> 00:27:21,375
However, all that changed a few
months ago when her husband's
589
00:27:21,375 --> 00:27:22,495
health dramatically worsened.
590
00:27:22,895 --> 00:27:26,255
So he was dealing with
sleeping problems, right?
591
00:27:26,354 --> 00:27:29,904
Uh, husband was dealing with sleeping
problems, I guess, but he couldn't
592
00:27:29,904 --> 00:27:31,279
get, he couldn't get out of bed.
593
00:27:31,490 --> 00:27:33,170
So he was so stiff, he
couldn't get out of bed.
594
00:27:33,190 --> 00:27:34,860
I was so alarmed, I almost called 911.
595
00:27:35,380 --> 00:27:37,070
Um, 70 million Americans.
596
00:27:37,110 --> 00:27:38,870
Oh, this is a nice little coupling, too.
597
00:27:38,870 --> 00:27:39,989
It's also bringing in a stat.
598
00:27:40,000 --> 00:27:41,960
70 million Americans
experience trouble sleeping.
599
00:27:43,169 --> 00:27:45,219
Public health problem, the CDC says.
600
00:27:45,560 --> 00:27:47,330
At first, our husband's health
problems were bearable with
601
00:27:47,330 --> 00:27:48,570
medication and frequent doctor visits.
602
00:27:48,910 --> 00:27:50,960
After all, They've been
married for over 30 years.
603
00:27:50,960 --> 00:27:54,290
Diaz wasn't going to let that, let that
get in the way of the relationship.
604
00:27:54,290 --> 00:27:58,129
And as years of poor sleeping habits
passed by, she noticed behavior changes.
605
00:27:58,270 --> 00:28:02,460
He no longer wanted to play with their
two pet cockatoos and go on daily walks.
606
00:28:02,469 --> 00:28:05,760
So bringing in a lot of emotion
of who they were, like it's really
607
00:28:05,760 --> 00:28:07,090
leaning into these older people.
608
00:28:07,090 --> 00:28:09,889
They have cockatoos, they're
retired, they're in Arizona.
609
00:28:10,199 --> 00:28:11,980
They're just wanting to
spend all their golden years.
610
00:28:12,040 --> 00:28:12,490
Um.
611
00:28:13,020 --> 00:28:14,420
He didn't want to visit grandkids anymore.
612
00:28:14,420 --> 00:28:17,300
He would randomly snap at her emotional
distance, so he was not getting good
613
00:28:17,300 --> 00:28:18,740
sleep, so he's being really grumpy.
614
00:28:19,130 --> 00:28:20,880
My husband and I started growing apart.
615
00:28:20,910 --> 00:28:23,030
I didn't know it was even possible
after 30 years of marriage and
616
00:28:23,030 --> 00:28:23,830
building a family together.
617
00:28:23,830 --> 00:28:26,179
She admitted one day he told
her that he wanted to start
618
00:28:26,180 --> 00:28:27,310
sleeping in separate rooms.
619
00:28:27,340 --> 00:28:28,529
Oh, devastating too.
620
00:28:28,860 --> 00:28:30,280
So, and also this is interesting.
621
00:28:30,299 --> 00:28:34,555
If you were to bring in, Um, I highly
recommend reading a lot of fiction
622
00:28:34,865 --> 00:28:36,605
and also getting into psychology.
623
00:28:36,605 --> 00:28:39,605
If you're reading psychology,
anything with Carl Jung, I talk
624
00:28:39,605 --> 00:28:43,435
about archetypes and then talk about
also, uh, things with relationship.
625
00:28:43,435 --> 00:28:46,715
This could be really powerful too if
you talk about, uh, attachment theories.
626
00:28:46,785 --> 00:28:51,365
And so this is obviously she, certain
attachment theories, attachment styles.
627
00:28:51,515 --> 00:28:54,905
Because we each have an attachment
style to our significant other, uh, if
628
00:28:54,905 --> 00:28:56,525
you are married or in a relationship.
629
00:28:56,525 --> 00:28:56,925
And so.
630
00:28:57,130 --> 00:28:59,920
Learning about that is really powerful
because then you can also bring that
631
00:28:59,940 --> 00:29:04,550
into the story because people can
relate to attachment styles because
632
00:29:04,560 --> 00:29:06,850
that's what it makes when you listen to.
633
00:29:07,330 --> 00:29:10,940
Stories about relationships and go and
then you're like, oh, that's totally us.
634
00:29:11,010 --> 00:29:15,030
Oh, yeah, that's my spouse You know
you even hear for other people you go.
635
00:29:15,070 --> 00:29:19,390
Oh, yeah Your husband sounds just like
my husband or your husband sounds like
636
00:29:19,390 --> 00:29:23,820
my wife or you know It's vix versa or
vice versa because we all have attachment
637
00:29:23,830 --> 00:29:25,549
styles and so you can see right here.
638
00:29:25,549 --> 00:29:30,245
There's a certain attachment style
that um You can feel from her.
639
00:29:30,245 --> 00:29:31,955
It's coming from her point of view.
640
00:29:32,595 --> 00:29:34,995
Uh, so it's like a close third
person is what we would call it.
641
00:29:34,995 --> 00:29:38,115
So it's coming from, it's the
third person, meaning that it's
642
00:29:38,115 --> 00:29:39,585
giving names, but it's close.
643
00:29:39,585 --> 00:29:44,435
It's meaning we are closer to Diana
and her experience of what's going
644
00:29:44,435 --> 00:29:46,264
on than we are to her husband.
645
00:29:46,745 --> 00:29:50,375
But we're also sensing like she is
clearly more attached to him and
646
00:29:50,375 --> 00:29:55,155
is wanting to, wanting him to love
her more, but it's getting more
647
00:29:55,155 --> 00:29:57,855
difficult and it's causing her grief.
648
00:29:58,294 --> 00:29:58,865
So.
649
00:29:59,580 --> 00:30:00,930
I actually like this.
650
00:30:00,960 --> 00:30:02,160
I think this is pretty good.
651
00:30:02,160 --> 00:30:05,470
And I imagine, um, and then it
goes to sell a pillow, right?
652
00:30:05,500 --> 00:30:06,690
And this pillow is really unique.
653
00:30:06,690 --> 00:30:07,880
It's really weirdly shaped.
654
00:30:08,140 --> 00:30:09,330
I'll bring it up as an example.
655
00:30:09,369 --> 00:30:10,800
Oh, matter of fact, it's right here.
656
00:30:10,870 --> 00:30:11,230
There you go.
657
00:30:12,480 --> 00:30:15,640
67 year old woman discovers
simple side sleeper secret.
658
00:30:17,770 --> 00:30:19,370
Help eliminate neck and back discomfort.
659
00:30:19,390 --> 00:30:19,770
True story.
660
00:30:19,770 --> 00:30:21,860
The secret saved her marriage.
661
00:30:22,150 --> 00:30:25,340
So right away it goes into the
benefit of that it helps eliminate
662
00:30:25,530 --> 00:30:26,930
neck and back discomfort, right?
663
00:30:27,100 --> 00:30:30,450
So the main benefit isn't going
to be, and it saved her marriage.
664
00:30:30,469 --> 00:30:34,309
The main benefit is what it
actually does, which is reasonable,
665
00:30:34,520 --> 00:30:38,190
which is understandable because
a pillow can help with this.
666
00:30:38,460 --> 00:30:43,450
How can it, you know, I would,
it'd be interesting to see 60
667
00:30:43,450 --> 00:30:47,510
year old, seven, 67 year old woman
discovers simple size sleeper seeker
668
00:30:47,510 --> 00:30:49,160
that helped save her marriage.
669
00:30:50,530 --> 00:30:53,290
And eliminate naked back
discovery, you know what I mean?
670
00:30:53,300 --> 00:30:56,840
Like it just I don't know, it'd
be weird to test, but it's like
671
00:30:57,310 --> 00:30:58,840
it, the secret saved her marriage.
672
00:30:59,030 --> 00:31:03,620
So the first initial thing is that
fact that it, it, um, it helps.
673
00:31:03,630 --> 00:31:06,620
So the idea is, and then it
goes into what the pillow is,
674
00:31:06,620 --> 00:31:07,760
it's this weird shaped pillow.
675
00:31:07,780 --> 00:31:08,650
How does it work?
676
00:31:09,049 --> 00:31:09,189
Yeah.
677
00:31:09,539 --> 00:31:12,669
Oh, what's also good to this editorial
to, um, something we'll talk about
678
00:31:12,669 --> 00:31:19,539
later in design, but, um, showing that
it is, so you see how it's, this is
679
00:31:19,539 --> 00:31:27,109
really powerful stuff is when you show
the, it's coming from another, nice.
680
00:31:28,615 --> 00:31:31,775
We show it, uh, social proof
from an outside source.
681
00:31:31,785 --> 00:31:35,730
So when they see it like this, when
they see And then breaks out and it
682
00:31:35,730 --> 00:31:39,740
shows this is like a screenshot from
what looks like Instagram, right?
683
00:31:40,130 --> 00:31:43,060
This is really powerful stuff to use
in Abiturial because it shows social
684
00:31:43,060 --> 00:31:44,139
proof from a different platform.
685
00:31:45,090 --> 00:31:49,540
So it look, so it shows that
this is gone, this is bigger than
686
00:31:49,540 --> 00:31:50,790
where you're looking at it now.
687
00:31:51,080 --> 00:31:55,110
It's, in a sense, it's To the mind,
you go, oh, it's even being featured
688
00:31:55,110 --> 00:31:59,220
on Instagram, which I'm also on,
or maybe even show it on Facebook,
689
00:31:59,220 --> 00:32:03,110
or show it on TikTok, and so on,
like, that's really powerful stuff.
690
00:32:03,110 --> 00:32:06,420
So having a screenshot from Instagram
and having it plopped in here as
691
00:32:06,420 --> 00:32:07,780
well, I think it's pretty powerful.
692
00:32:14,000 --> 00:32:14,530
Dang it.
693
00:32:16,139 --> 00:32:17,919
Every time I do that, I like spill.
694
00:32:18,379 --> 00:32:22,410
It's like I, sometimes I wonder if
I don't know how to drink properly.
695
00:32:22,670 --> 00:32:25,960
Heath, you're just a mess.
696
00:32:26,340 --> 00:32:27,510
And I'm not editing this out.
697
00:32:27,810 --> 00:32:28,670
You get to see me.
698
00:32:29,330 --> 00:32:30,740
This is part of the bonuses.
699
00:32:31,155 --> 00:32:35,275
It's just Heath being a,
just a, just a messy boy.
700
00:32:35,545 --> 00:32:36,675
Messy boy.
701
00:32:37,035 --> 00:32:37,355
All right.
702
00:32:40,765 --> 00:32:41,345
Here we go.
703
00:32:41,725 --> 00:32:42,485
Example three.
704
00:32:45,640 --> 00:32:48,520
I can show this one, see if I
could, okay, I'll pull it up later.
705
00:32:49,430 --> 00:32:52,960
Example three, there aren't many
older folks, there aren't many
706
00:32:52,970 --> 00:32:54,260
older folks without knee pain.
707
00:32:54,290 --> 00:32:55,400
And so this is interesting.
708
00:32:55,400 --> 00:32:56,470
It's a nice combo.
709
00:32:56,769 --> 00:32:58,970
And this is also what I've
seen done with like Blissy.
710
00:32:59,010 --> 00:33:03,120
So they'll give like maybe a statistic
and then it'll go into so and so's chronic
711
00:33:03,120 --> 00:33:05,570
knee pain or like so and so's story.
712
00:33:05,745 --> 00:33:09,215
I've seen it where it's like Sally's
story or something like that.
713
00:33:09,215 --> 00:33:10,245
Paula's story.
714
00:33:10,245 --> 00:33:11,715
And then it's like really brief story.
715
00:33:11,815 --> 00:33:13,685
So here's a nice little stat.
716
00:33:13,695 --> 00:33:15,775
An estimated 30 million seniors
suffer with chronic knee pain.
717
00:33:15,775 --> 00:33:17,425
Millions have more have
occasional knee pain.
718
00:33:17,425 --> 00:33:21,635
It's super common, but one senior has
found the answer is as simple as changing
719
00:33:21,635 --> 00:33:22,955
how he gets dressed every morning.
720
00:33:23,095 --> 00:33:23,995
Ooh, that's nice, right?
721
00:33:24,364 --> 00:33:27,505
It's, it's as simple as
just getting dressed.
722
00:33:27,970 --> 00:33:28,550
That's awesome.
723
00:33:28,560 --> 00:33:31,150
That's, that's a nice
little connection, right?
724
00:33:31,510 --> 00:33:36,320
So what's good about that too, and
this is nice, is that it's nothing
725
00:33:36,430 --> 00:33:39,330
outside of the norm of their daily life.
726
00:33:39,360 --> 00:33:42,710
That's another thing too, is
you want to make the product,
727
00:33:42,710 --> 00:33:45,929
the offer part of their routine.
728
00:33:46,219 --> 00:33:47,759
It's as simple as just.
729
00:33:48,000 --> 00:33:50,200
It's, you know, it's
part of now my breakfast.
730
00:33:50,210 --> 00:33:52,390
It's part of my now morning routine.
731
00:33:52,730 --> 00:33:55,570
It's I just add it as I'm combing my hair.
732
00:33:55,890 --> 00:33:58,509
So it doesn't, it's not an extra step.
733
00:33:58,510 --> 00:34:01,080
You don't want people, people
don't want to do anything.
734
00:34:01,440 --> 00:34:04,070
They don't want to do an
extra thing they have to do.
735
00:34:04,289 --> 00:34:07,460
So then this actually slides
right into the normal thing
736
00:34:07,460 --> 00:34:08,849
that they are already doing.
737
00:34:09,215 --> 00:34:14,225
And whammo, like the benefit, uh,
how it benefits her life without
738
00:34:14,235 --> 00:34:16,185
having to do an extra something else.
739
00:34:16,225 --> 00:34:17,425
It's, it's great.
740
00:34:18,185 --> 00:34:19,905
So, uh, Jack's chronic knee pain.
741
00:34:19,905 --> 00:34:24,564
Jack was a typical 65 year old, a pretty,
so again, third person, pretty active
742
00:34:24,575 --> 00:34:28,895
middle class life and a nice pension
coming to him as a parcel delivery driver.
743
00:34:28,985 --> 00:34:29,335
Cool.
744
00:34:29,585 --> 00:34:32,885
So giving him a backstory, but
he was a, so it's like really
745
00:34:32,905 --> 00:34:35,685
honing in, honing, homing in the.
746
00:34:35,880 --> 00:34:37,100
Uh, avatar.
747
00:34:37,640 --> 00:34:39,720
One thing that wasn't the
typical was his knee pain.
748
00:34:39,720 --> 00:34:41,680
Years of delivering packages
took a toll on his knees.
749
00:34:41,750 --> 00:34:44,260
You can replace this with
a construction worker.
750
00:34:44,430 --> 00:34:45,280
You know, contractor.
751
00:34:45,280 --> 00:34:45,999
I think I've done that.
752
00:34:46,260 --> 00:34:47,699
I did that actually, yes, back in the day.
753
00:34:47,699 --> 00:34:49,520
Years ago, I did it for a CBD patch.
754
00:34:49,600 --> 00:34:54,260
One of the leads was like a construction
worker after years back breaking work.
755
00:34:54,519 --> 00:34:58,590
And it was a CBD patch that, you know,
you're able to just slap it where it's
756
00:34:58,730 --> 00:35:01,560
needs, where you need some, uh, help with.
757
00:35:02,095 --> 00:35:05,445
Pain relief, uh, and plane turns.
758
00:35:05,445 --> 00:35:06,375
Both of my knees hurt.
759
00:35:06,405 --> 00:35:09,855
Those years of truck, of truck steps,
then porch steps took their toll.
760
00:35:09,855 --> 00:35:12,905
My knees hurt more than, uh, hurt
more than most of my friends.
761
00:35:12,905 --> 00:35:15,815
Jack explained he went to the doctor
seeking relief and left disappointed.
762
00:35:15,820 --> 00:35:17,795
The doctor said they weren't bad
enough for knee replacements.
763
00:35:17,795 --> 00:35:19,805
He just suggested physical therapy.
764
00:35:20,105 --> 00:35:23,135
So like, this is going right
into this is great because
765
00:35:23,135 --> 00:35:24,755
it's like not getting answers.
766
00:35:25,045 --> 00:35:27,865
So it's being skeptical of doctors
not getting the answers they want.
767
00:35:27,865 --> 00:35:32,960
But then, uh, you know, And then got
stuck on painkillers and it sucked and
768
00:35:32,960 --> 00:35:38,260
then he came across this simple solution,
which is, of course, this knee sleeve.
769
00:35:38,580 --> 00:35:40,600
Um, and then I'm going to
show these different avatars.
770
00:35:40,609 --> 00:35:43,059
Let's go, let's go and look at right here.
771
00:35:44,130 --> 00:35:45,189
Find the avatar.
772
00:35:54,749 --> 00:35:55,079
Here we go.
773
00:35:57,099 --> 00:35:59,090
So it's this knee sleeve, right?
774
00:35:59,350 --> 00:35:59,940
So it's.
775
00:36:00,475 --> 00:36:01,645
Super simple.
776
00:36:02,195 --> 00:36:03,625
And then it's the answer.
777
00:36:03,635 --> 00:36:05,005
It's an alternative to surgery.
778
00:36:05,005 --> 00:36:06,665
It's alternative to painkillers.
779
00:36:07,005 --> 00:36:07,955
How awesome is that?
780
00:36:07,955 --> 00:36:11,295
He's able to do, and what the knee,
and then it goes into, and I'll talk
781
00:36:11,295 --> 00:36:14,614
about it in the body, what, how the
knee sleeve is different than other
782
00:36:14,615 --> 00:36:16,275
knee sleeves and it's affordable.
783
00:36:16,554 --> 00:36:18,975
And a lot of knee sleeves
through the doctor usually costs
784
00:36:18,984 --> 00:36:20,315
hundreds of dollars or whatever.
785
00:36:20,315 --> 00:36:21,425
This is very affordable.
786
00:36:21,665 --> 00:36:24,195
That's another thing too, is
always like lean into when it's,
787
00:36:24,245 --> 00:36:26,195
when it's a crowd that is 55 plus.
788
00:36:26,310 --> 00:36:29,350
Always lean into the fact that
it's affordable and it won't cost
789
00:36:29,350 --> 00:36:30,740
an arm and a leg, no pun intended.
790
00:36:31,060 --> 00:36:34,500
But like it won't cost them a
small fortune and it's, they
791
00:36:34,500 --> 00:36:35,330
don't have to see a doctor.
792
00:36:35,330 --> 00:36:36,830
They don't have to get
hooked on painkillers.
793
00:36:36,910 --> 00:36:37,290
Awesome.
794
00:36:37,370 --> 00:36:38,910
That's what seniors want.
795
00:36:39,349 --> 00:36:39,789
Okay.
796
00:36:40,000 --> 00:36:41,910
So those are the main leads.
797
00:36:41,910 --> 00:36:46,450
Now I'm going to go kind of talk
about it on, let's, let me show
798
00:36:46,520 --> 00:36:47,730
you some more examples here.
799
00:36:47,730 --> 00:36:48,320
Let's see here.
800
00:36:49,925 --> 00:36:50,795
Oh yeah, the actor trial.
801
00:36:50,825 --> 00:36:53,405
Okay, so this one is a personal
story that I recently wrote.
802
00:36:53,705 --> 00:36:57,755
So I wrote this from start to
start to finish in the bonus thing,
803
00:36:57,755 --> 00:37:00,785
and I, and I rewrote it, and then
I cleaned it up and everything.
804
00:37:01,165 --> 00:37:02,875
I lost my mind during all that.
805
00:37:02,875 --> 00:37:06,385
It was like two and a half hours of me
just like, whoa, late at night like.
806
00:37:06,385 --> 00:37:07,250
putting this together.
807
00:37:07,400 --> 00:37:07,880
It was fun.
808
00:37:07,880 --> 00:37:08,450
I had a good time.
809
00:37:08,890 --> 00:37:12,020
Uh, so this is based on what I know.
810
00:37:12,020 --> 00:37:13,070
Elite is working.
811
00:37:13,110 --> 00:37:17,770
I know that there is an editorial
already working for a watch
812
00:37:17,800 --> 00:37:19,390
a kind of Fitbit alternative.
813
00:37:19,520 --> 00:37:22,880
So I'm if I know that it is working
according to what I'm hearing from
814
00:37:22,880 --> 00:37:24,860
affiliates, why reinvent the wheel?
815
00:37:25,245 --> 00:37:26,605
Don't need to reinvent the wheel.
816
00:37:26,995 --> 00:37:28,755
Take what's working and rewrite it.
817
00:37:28,975 --> 00:37:33,125
Rewrite it and test another
and see where it's missing.
818
00:37:33,365 --> 00:37:35,565
See where you can improve upon.
819
00:37:36,075 --> 00:37:38,785
And rewrite it and get it out there.
820
00:37:38,794 --> 00:37:39,755
So quick summary.
821
00:37:40,864 --> 00:37:43,604
So if you're 55 and concerned about
your health, this new smartwatch
822
00:37:43,985 --> 00:37:46,815
May for seniors is a game changer
and can help detect serious health
823
00:37:46,815 --> 00:37:47,755
issues before it's too late.
824
00:37:47,995 --> 00:37:51,055
Where I saw where it's missing
is that they weren't mentioning
825
00:37:51,055 --> 00:37:52,804
that it's for seniors.
826
00:37:52,804 --> 00:37:58,134
Weren't, like, really getting
down to the brass tacks of the
827
00:37:58,145 --> 00:37:59,695
audience and who they're going for.
828
00:38:00,135 --> 00:38:01,560
So, I thought I was dying.
829
00:38:01,570 --> 00:38:03,490
The pain, the pain in
my chest was so intense.
830
00:38:03,500 --> 00:38:04,800
I thought for sure this is it.
831
00:38:04,810 --> 00:38:05,910
This is how I'm leaving this earth.
832
00:38:06,520 --> 00:38:07,690
It happened about a month back.
833
00:38:07,690 --> 00:38:09,920
I was outside fixing our sprinkler
system when I got lightheaded.
834
00:38:09,939 --> 00:38:12,709
My limbs went cold and my vision blurred
like I was swimming with my eyes open.
835
00:38:13,219 --> 00:38:15,089
Then my chest felt like
something was sitting on me,
836
00:38:15,200 --> 00:38:16,289
like someone was sitting on me.
837
00:38:16,290 --> 00:38:17,099
It was difficult to breathe.
838
00:38:17,160 --> 00:38:20,790
I panicked, went inside the house and
embarrassingly asked my wife for help.
839
00:38:21,415 --> 00:38:23,285
She arrested me to the emergency room.
840
00:38:23,285 --> 00:38:26,335
The dog checked me out and asked me
a ton of questions I didn't know.
841
00:38:26,635 --> 00:38:28,455
Questions like, are you keeping
an eye on your heart rate?
842
00:38:28,465 --> 00:38:29,975
Do you regularly check
your blood pressure?
843
00:38:30,264 --> 00:38:31,225
How have you been sleeping?
844
00:38:31,285 --> 00:38:33,235
I couldn't help but feel
ashamed like a little kid.
845
00:38:33,514 --> 00:38:34,854
I never paid attention to that stuff.
846
00:38:34,855 --> 00:38:38,164
I come from a long line of men that could
walk it off and be fine the next day.
847
00:38:38,405 --> 00:38:41,415
So a lot of this stuff is like, I'm
using the same cadence that I know
848
00:38:41,415 --> 00:38:43,805
is working from that abiturial,
but I'm switching things up and
849
00:38:43,805 --> 00:38:45,415
where I see it could improve upon.
850
00:38:45,805 --> 00:38:48,415
Um, being more specific,
getting the specificity.
851
00:38:48,424 --> 00:38:53,105
Anytime That you anytime I can see a
generalization or some sort of general.
852
00:38:53,125 --> 00:38:58,065
I want to be more specific There is more
emotion and connection with specificity
853
00:38:58,185 --> 00:39:02,374
Okay I couldn't help but feel ashamed
and this is also true through the
854
00:39:02,514 --> 00:39:06,295
through the research and also if you
know anyone In your family that is
855
00:39:06,295 --> 00:39:10,430
older Especially men, older men, they,
they can fall off a roof and break
856
00:39:10,430 --> 00:39:12,490
up their body and be like, I'm fine.
857
00:39:12,950 --> 00:39:13,270
Right.
858
00:39:13,280 --> 00:39:17,279
It's just, it's a ego thing for
older guys that are like, I'm fine.
859
00:39:17,280 --> 00:39:18,170
I don't complain.
860
00:39:18,189 --> 00:39:19,040
I'm not a baby.
861
00:39:20,200 --> 00:39:21,049
I'm not even that old.
862
00:39:21,080 --> 00:39:22,419
So pointing out that
he's not even that old.
863
00:39:22,420 --> 00:39:25,110
He's put on an extra few pounds, but
he wasn't as bad shape as other men.
864
00:39:25,460 --> 00:39:28,630
He sees his age and then it
turns out he has acute, he had
865
00:39:28,630 --> 00:39:32,140
acute pain, uh, you know, panic
attack from anxiety and stress.
866
00:39:32,510 --> 00:39:34,670
But the doc did warn me that
my age and size could be
867
00:39:34,670 --> 00:39:35,970
cute closer on my heart rate.
868
00:39:36,380 --> 00:39:39,500
And then the doc also told him like
what to do, cut out some beer, do
869
00:39:39,500 --> 00:39:40,779
some more walking, get better sleep.
870
00:39:41,130 --> 00:39:42,609
So then like, how can he do that?
871
00:39:42,670 --> 00:39:46,350
He wants to take these steps to
do that, but it's, there's so it's
872
00:39:46,350 --> 00:39:47,640
overwhelming for a lot of people.
873
00:39:47,640 --> 00:39:48,320
So what do you do?
874
00:39:48,330 --> 00:39:49,100
You start small.
875
00:39:49,110 --> 00:39:49,770
How do you do that?
876
00:39:50,010 --> 00:39:52,540
By getting this, by getting this device.
877
00:39:53,020 --> 00:39:57,370
So by getting this ActiveTrack
Pro, you're able to keep starting
878
00:39:57,370 --> 00:39:59,780
to keep track of these issues.
879
00:39:59,790 --> 00:40:03,320
So he was a little scared, you know,
he went searching online, found a good
880
00:40:03,320 --> 00:40:07,920
fitness tracker that was also, uh,
affordable and wasn't super expensive.
881
00:40:08,020 --> 00:40:11,670
Big brand name, like smart, like
Apple or Fitbit or any of that.
882
00:40:12,845 --> 00:40:15,055
And that it was made specifically for him.
883
00:40:15,065 --> 00:40:18,335
It's made for seniors, uh, which
I, you know, which I hate that
884
00:40:18,335 --> 00:40:19,565
word, but I hate computers more.
885
00:40:19,565 --> 00:40:22,455
So I'm pointing out the fact that like,
he doesn't want to be considered a senior.
886
00:40:22,455 --> 00:40:24,574
I'm not a senior, but
I also hate computers.
887
00:40:24,585 --> 00:40:27,065
So it's like, I want to
point that out, right?
888
00:40:27,525 --> 00:40:28,525
Made it easy to set up.
889
00:40:28,525 --> 00:40:31,085
And it was all awesome features
as the expense of smartwatches,
890
00:40:31,085 --> 00:40:32,045
but a fraction of the costs.
891
00:40:32,365 --> 00:40:32,995
So.
892
00:40:33,310 --> 00:40:37,710
Then it goes into, I do a comparison, I'll
talk more about the abiturial, the body of
893
00:40:37,710 --> 00:40:42,840
it later, but I wanted to bring in that,
like, that's just, that is not a long.
894
00:40:43,089 --> 00:40:44,950
I mean, maybe it's longer than usual.
895
00:40:44,990 --> 00:40:48,820
The story ones tend to be a little bit
longer when it comes to word count.
896
00:40:48,820 --> 00:40:50,159
So this is 311.
897
00:40:50,660 --> 00:40:50,980
Okay.
898
00:40:51,119 --> 00:40:53,839
So that one's a little bit
longer for sure for a lead.
899
00:40:54,289 --> 00:41:00,560
Um, but again, super short compared
to what you're seeing in VSLs
900
00:41:00,580 --> 00:41:02,079
or sales letters and all that.
901
00:41:02,500 --> 00:41:03,154
Um, Okay.
902
00:41:03,705 --> 00:41:04,495
Let's see here.
903
00:41:04,735 --> 00:41:04,995
Okay.
904
00:41:04,995 --> 00:41:06,965
And then I have a lead here.
905
00:41:06,975 --> 00:41:07,325
Let's see.
906
00:41:07,455 --> 00:41:08,215
No, that's the light.
907
00:41:08,325 --> 00:41:09,305
Oh, this is light socket.
908
00:41:11,140 --> 00:41:12,280
Diabetes solar.
909
00:41:12,340 --> 00:41:13,300
Okay, here's another one.
910
00:41:13,880 --> 00:41:17,160
So you know, some of a groan
wall light on my back in severe
911
00:41:17,160 --> 00:41:18,240
pain and covered red tomatoes.
912
00:41:18,240 --> 00:41:19,530
So I see the kitchen trash was swollen.
913
00:41:19,530 --> 00:41:20,490
I went down to take it out.
914
00:41:20,790 --> 00:41:23,670
It was late at night and I didn't realize
my back patio stairs had frozen over.
915
00:41:23,670 --> 00:41:24,360
It was dark and back.
916
00:41:24,365 --> 00:41:27,410
Patio light stopped working a while ago,
but meaning to get it replaced, but I
917
00:41:27,410 --> 00:41:30,320
just never got it around to it Anyway, I
slipped on the first step and down I went
918
00:41:30,320 --> 00:41:34,010
with a bag of trash, which ripped open,
made a mess all over me in the stairs.
919
00:41:34,040 --> 00:41:36,380
I was in pain for a good week
with really bad bruise on my
920
00:41:36,380 --> 00:41:37,730
pal bone and beating up ankle.
921
00:41:37,850 --> 00:41:38,570
Really feeling.
922
00:41:38,940 --> 00:41:39,890
Up there in my age.
923
00:41:40,340 --> 00:41:42,750
I told my neighbor about what
happened and he mentioned how he had
924
00:41:42,750 --> 00:41:46,230
something, how something similar,
something similar happened to him.
925
00:41:46,330 --> 00:41:50,810
He said he lucked out though, because he
had these new motion sensor floodlights
926
00:41:50,810 --> 00:41:51,900
that requires the electricity.
927
00:41:51,900 --> 00:41:53,570
No wire can be installed in 30 seconds.
928
00:41:54,029 --> 00:41:57,819
So the idea is we saw these lights that
you just, they're sensor lights, they're
929
00:41:57,819 --> 00:41:59,480
just sensor lights and you just can like.
930
00:42:00,080 --> 00:42:04,100
Put in the battery and put it
up and it just like brights up.
931
00:42:04,100 --> 00:42:07,560
Yeah, wherever you walk, it's sensor
picks you up and able to light your way.
932
00:42:07,820 --> 00:42:11,419
So the idea, the story goes
is like I told a, you know,
933
00:42:11,430 --> 00:42:13,020
scary story that no one wants.
934
00:42:13,269 --> 00:42:15,580
And then this is based on what
I've seen in research is like
935
00:42:15,590 --> 00:42:17,439
people that fall down their stairs.
936
00:42:17,750 --> 00:42:20,690
Because they're, they didn't
realize how cold it was outside.
937
00:42:20,700 --> 00:42:24,320
It frozen, the stairs frozen over,
they fell down, they didn't see it.
938
00:42:24,750 --> 00:42:25,400
And.
939
00:42:25,755 --> 00:42:28,015
And they hurt themselves
and no one wants that.
940
00:42:28,065 --> 00:42:28,335
Right.
941
00:42:29,355 --> 00:42:31,655
So that's an emotional one too.
942
00:42:31,665 --> 00:42:32,995
Let me show some more here.
943
00:42:32,995 --> 00:42:33,885
So I'll show you some.
944
00:42:33,895 --> 00:42:35,345
So this is the disruptor angle.
945
00:42:35,355 --> 00:42:35,975
How to German.
946
00:42:36,605 --> 00:42:39,155
Two Germans are crushing the market
with these powerful hearing aids.
947
00:42:39,155 --> 00:42:39,965
So this is here.
948
00:42:40,175 --> 00:42:40,545
com.
949
00:42:41,245 --> 00:42:47,995
Um, and this is, this is more, you
know, this talking about who they are.
950
00:42:48,065 --> 00:42:49,474
They've been knowing each
other for a long time.
951
00:42:49,724 --> 00:42:53,145
And then they came up with this
breakthrough technology that now
952
00:42:53,145 --> 00:42:56,684
they're able to disrupt this market
because now people can get amazing
953
00:42:56,694 --> 00:42:59,355
hearing aids for a fraction of the
cost of what it normally, you know,
954
00:42:59,395 --> 00:43:01,834
hearing aids can cost up to 5, 000.
955
00:43:01,835 --> 00:43:02,925
These are a fraction of the cost.
956
00:43:03,160 --> 00:43:03,520
Cost.
957
00:43:03,520 --> 00:43:05,140
And then you go click to qualify.
958
00:43:05,150 --> 00:43:09,290
And this is a lead gen because then people
would go to different locations, wherever
959
00:43:09,290 --> 00:43:13,479
they're located and get this specific
type of hearing aid, uh, installed.
960
00:43:15,270 --> 00:43:15,740
PowerPod.
961
00:43:15,740 --> 00:43:17,609
So this is a story base.
962
00:43:17,610 --> 00:43:19,020
Don't get straddled by
a dead phone battery.
963
00:43:19,020 --> 00:43:21,589
PowerPod gives you hours more
and it fits on any key chain.
964
00:43:21,590 --> 00:43:22,450
So, okay.
965
00:43:22,450 --> 00:43:23,400
I have a funny story to tell you.
966
00:43:23,410 --> 00:43:24,240
It wasn't funny at the time.
967
00:43:24,570 --> 00:43:26,660
To me, I think there's a lot of
rambling, but it's funny because
968
00:43:26,660 --> 00:43:29,790
it's told from this perspective of
an older individual because they're
969
00:43:29,790 --> 00:43:31,480
using, you know, it's about their son.
970
00:43:31,765 --> 00:43:34,435
Let's see their son Harrison
who's skateboarding.
971
00:43:34,675 --> 00:43:43,765
Um, and the idea is he When he was out,
you know his mom said like call when
972
00:43:43,765 --> 00:43:46,595
he's done You know, he'd never called.
973
00:43:46,665 --> 00:43:51,110
I just thought that it started raining
and I mean pouring He was still with
974
00:43:51,110 --> 00:43:54,620
his friends, I remember, oh yeah, he
told them about like, bring his power
975
00:43:54,620 --> 00:43:56,210
pod, he forgot about his power pod.
976
00:43:56,260 --> 00:44:00,130
He got in the car and said like,
oh, my, you know, my phone was dead.
977
00:44:01,460 --> 00:44:04,020
He threw open the car door and
said, my phone's dead again,
978
00:44:04,020 --> 00:44:04,830
I couldn't help but laugh.
979
00:44:04,830 --> 00:44:07,380
His friends left a while ago,
but he stayed to his perfect
980
00:44:07,380 --> 00:44:10,500
crowd as he, uh, as he called
out about got caught in the rain.
981
00:44:11,350 --> 00:44:13,980
I think, I think this is a very
long lead, it's kind of silly.
982
00:44:14,310 --> 00:44:18,570
But the idea was like, this kid
goes skateboarding, he didn't call.
983
00:44:19,390 --> 00:44:20,720
Mom goes and picks him up.
984
00:44:20,830 --> 00:44:21,300
He's poor.
985
00:44:21,310 --> 00:44:21,900
He's soak.
986
00:44:22,170 --> 00:44:27,610
He's soaking wet in the rain From
skateboarding because his phone died
987
00:44:27,680 --> 00:44:31,709
and he power, you know, but because he
forgot his power pod So what I would
988
00:44:31,709 --> 00:44:36,399
do too is make there's an opportunity
to make it more emotional like getting
989
00:44:36,429 --> 00:44:40,860
somewhere so an older individual
Obviously this is leaning into the fact
990
00:44:40,860 --> 00:44:45,950
of, uh, the emotion being coming from
the parent and their child being stuck
991
00:44:45,950 --> 00:44:47,460
stranded somewhere with a dead phone.
992
00:44:47,529 --> 00:44:49,240
Like no one wants, no parent wants that.
993
00:44:49,240 --> 00:44:49,860
It's very scary.
994
00:44:50,069 --> 00:44:53,700
So you could probably up the ante
on the emotion part of this story.
995
00:44:54,029 --> 00:44:56,019
Uh, instead of it just being, I mean.
996
00:44:56,265 --> 00:44:58,435
Possibly this is working
really, really well for them.
997
00:44:58,465 --> 00:45:02,955
Obviously, if it's on native,
but I, I would argue another lead
998
00:45:02,955 --> 00:45:06,414
that I would test out as I do a
dramatic one, do a dramatic one.
999
00:45:06,415 --> 00:45:09,324
Because no one, you know, if you're
stuck somewhere, if you're really like,
1000
00:45:09,335 --> 00:45:12,694
think about you as an individual, if
you got stuck somewhere and you couldn't
1001
00:45:12,704 --> 00:45:17,730
get a hold of friends, family, and then
you're, you know, You know, and then
1002
00:45:17,740 --> 00:45:19,610
bring it back to that attachment style.
1003
00:45:19,610 --> 00:45:22,800
Your husband or wife has a certain
attachment style at home and they're
1004
00:45:22,800 --> 00:45:25,960
freaking out where you're at and they
can't get ahold of you and they go and
1005
00:45:25,960 --> 00:45:29,320
call and call and call, but it goes right
to voicemail and they're freaking out
1006
00:45:29,320 --> 00:45:34,860
like that is, you can sense that emotions
like no one wants to be in that situation.
1007
00:45:35,149 --> 00:45:39,810
So there's an opportunity, I think, for
another story to test out for this one.
1008
00:45:40,180 --> 00:45:43,490
And that's another thing too, is
like when you're, when you're.
1009
00:45:44,325 --> 00:45:47,385
Pitching advertorials and they show you
like, say, for instance, you get with a
1010
00:45:47,385 --> 00:45:49,985
client that's already doing advertorials
and they show you the advertorials
1011
00:45:49,995 --> 00:45:53,865
that are, you ask, like, which ones
are working, which ones got close to
1012
00:45:53,884 --> 00:45:58,674
beating the current one and so on and
you can see, like, the more research
1013
00:45:58,674 --> 00:46:02,774
you do, the more you do these, you
could see, uh, opportunity to test out.
1014
00:46:02,774 --> 00:46:05,664
Hey, let's try out this
angle because, uh, Yeah.
1015
00:46:06,305 --> 00:46:09,285
Based on this audience, based
on the emotion, whatever, like
1016
00:46:09,485 --> 00:46:11,795
there's opportunity, there's always
opportunities to try out different
1017
00:46:11,795 --> 00:46:13,665
angles because you could be testing.
1018
00:46:13,735 --> 00:46:17,254
That's another thing too, is a lot of
these people, you come, you test so
1019
00:46:17,255 --> 00:46:19,405
many advertorials, test, test, test.
1020
00:46:19,405 --> 00:46:20,125
It never ends.
1021
00:46:20,704 --> 00:46:21,645
So let's go through here.
1022
00:46:21,645 --> 00:46:22,465
So miracle sheets.
1023
00:46:22,474 --> 00:46:27,585
So this is that one talk about, uh,
again, using that, uh, social proof.
1024
00:46:27,625 --> 00:46:29,855
People are, these are just, they're viral.
1025
00:46:29,855 --> 00:46:33,775
People are picking them up and
then talks about the stat and these
1026
00:46:33,775 --> 00:46:35,145
are the best sheets in the world.
1027
00:46:35,155 --> 00:46:35,175
Yeah.
1028
00:46:35,610 --> 00:46:36,700
What makes them so great?
1029
00:46:36,790 --> 00:46:38,650
Okay, I think you get
the idea of that one.
1030
00:46:39,150 --> 00:46:43,490
Uh, so this is the startup disrupting So
startup is disrupting the entire multi
1031
00:46:43,860 --> 00:46:48,160
multi billion dollar smartwatch industry
health benefits are credible So like
1032
00:46:48,160 --> 00:46:51,660
this one is very straightforward like
gaining popularity quickly in the u.
1033
00:46:51,660 --> 00:46:54,815
s And selling out everywhere for
long time support Watch industry,
1034
00:46:54,855 --> 00:46:57,355
just a big companies that could
set the prices they wanted.
1035
00:46:57,645 --> 00:47:01,705
So this line has been used so many
times for so many different leads.
1036
00:47:01,715 --> 00:47:06,515
First, I've used it for HVAC for,
uh, you can use it for lead gen.
1037
00:47:06,525 --> 00:47:10,134
You can use it just like the
idea is again, it's this underdog
1038
00:47:10,144 --> 00:47:11,265
going against the big guys.
1039
00:47:11,305 --> 00:47:12,035
It's powerful.
1040
00:47:12,475 --> 00:47:13,715
So look how short this lead is.
1041
00:47:13,815 --> 00:47:14,625
This is the lead.
1042
00:47:15,385 --> 00:47:18,275
That's not like what barely like a
over a little over a hundred words,
1043
00:47:18,275 --> 00:47:19,965
maybe not even, I don't even know.
1044
00:47:19,965 --> 00:47:21,075
Like it's so short.
1045
00:47:21,535 --> 00:47:24,035
That's not even a hundred
words, probably maybe like 50.
1046
00:47:25,320 --> 00:47:26,690
You know, and then it goes right into it.
1047
00:47:26,700 --> 00:47:27,290
What is it?
1048
00:47:28,110 --> 00:47:29,880
And we'll talk about that in another one.
1049
00:47:32,100 --> 00:47:35,919
So this one, this one is a
great example of right to it.
1050
00:47:36,220 --> 00:47:39,410
So this two inch arm patch from
a company called sleep is making
1051
00:47:39,410 --> 00:47:41,769
waves across the internet by helping
thousands finally get the sleep they
1052
00:47:41,770 --> 00:47:43,720
deserve and wake up feeling refreshed.
1053
00:47:43,929 --> 00:47:45,219
I mean, just gets right to it.
1054
00:47:45,240 --> 00:47:47,160
You could say that this
is the lead right here.
1055
00:47:47,615 --> 00:47:48,365
Gets right to it.
1056
00:47:48,385 --> 00:47:53,885
Some are saying breakthrough oral
sleep, uh, or break could eventually
1057
00:47:54,095 --> 00:47:56,984
make oral sleep supplements and
even prescription sleeping things.
1058
00:47:57,745 --> 00:47:59,955
Sleeping pills, I think in
the past I'm talking too fast.
1059
00:47:59,955 --> 00:48:00,395
I'm sorry.
1060
00:48:01,005 --> 00:48:05,205
Um, and then it goes into the reviews
and then it's like Susie story and
1061
00:48:05,205 --> 00:48:09,725
it's like, it's interspersed with these
little stories about which is just.
1062
00:48:10,035 --> 00:48:14,405
Testimonials dripping
through and then what is it?
1063
00:48:14,425 --> 00:48:16,415
How does it work and the benefits of it?
1064
00:48:16,715 --> 00:48:21,295
So that's really powerful That's
again example of get to it abattoir.
1065
00:48:21,305 --> 00:48:22,325
It just gets right to it.
1066
00:48:22,685 --> 00:48:24,984
This is a long one This
is actually a longer lead.
1067
00:48:24,985 --> 00:48:28,385
This is a story based one, which
is it's been running for a long
1068
00:48:28,385 --> 00:48:30,085
time So it must be working.
1069
00:48:30,155 --> 00:48:33,795
Um, it's interesting So this
japanese method sucks out
1070
00:48:33,805 --> 00:48:34,955
all the toxins in the body.
1071
00:48:35,075 --> 00:48:40,895
So this lead is so dragged out So what
I would do to test if they were to
1072
00:48:40,895 --> 00:48:46,170
test it I would Get right to it faster
because it's like one of our top editors
1073
00:48:46,170 --> 00:48:49,850
was great until he wasn't that's so
weird Dennis renamed here for privacy
1074
00:48:49,860 --> 00:48:53,360
reasons a great colleague a friend of
us It almost feels like a long like vsl
1075
00:48:53,369 --> 00:48:58,400
type lead and talks about all them All
this stuff about him like he started
1076
00:48:58,400 --> 00:49:04,330
dissing himself in the office all this
stuff He didn't like all these problems.
1077
00:49:04,330 --> 00:49:09,310
Like it's like It's just it's just all of
david is just all these problems all the
1078
00:49:09,520 --> 00:49:15,020
way through here and then he went Um, he
went to a spiritual retreat for a week.
1079
00:49:15,040 --> 00:49:16,270
So that was the solution.
1080
00:49:16,680 --> 00:49:18,990
Is he went, cause that's where
he found the solution, is when
1081
00:49:18,990 --> 00:49:20,280
he went to a spiritual retreat.
1082
00:49:20,690 --> 00:49:24,570
And where and what he found at the
spiritual retreat changed his life and can
1083
00:49:24,570 --> 00:49:26,760
now change thousands of other lives now.
1084
00:49:27,150 --> 00:49:27,510
Right?
1085
00:49:27,530 --> 00:49:29,090
So this one is a really long one.
1086
00:49:29,110 --> 00:49:32,960
And if you got my order bump, uh, for
all these swipes, you can read all this.
1087
00:49:33,100 --> 00:49:34,909
I think it's working.
1088
00:49:35,220 --> 00:49:35,730
Um.
1089
00:49:36,075 --> 00:49:40,095
What I would do, I'd be interested to
know what they were trying to do to
1090
00:49:40,135 --> 00:49:46,845
test different leads because this is
a very, it's very long and I wonder,
1091
00:49:46,885 --> 00:49:54,634
I would test some other, maybe I would
test an outcome, a benefit outcome
1092
00:49:54,644 --> 00:49:58,085
lead where it's like what it can do.
1093
00:49:58,795 --> 00:50:01,735
I would, there could be a
possibility for a disruptor market.
1094
00:50:02,160 --> 00:50:07,250
Um, some sort of stat could be here too,
just something that can get to it and
1095
00:50:07,250 --> 00:50:09,170
needs to get to it faster in my opinion.
1096
00:50:09,220 --> 00:50:12,209
It's just as like talking about
David and how he's just a schlub,
1097
00:50:12,429 --> 00:50:16,430
like basically just this like, no,
I'm sad at the office all the time.
1098
00:50:16,430 --> 00:50:18,150
And everyone's like, David,
get out of here, dude.
1099
00:50:18,579 --> 00:50:19,730
You're bumming everyone out.
1100
00:50:19,730 --> 00:50:20,660
Go on to a retreat.
1101
00:50:20,660 --> 00:50:21,180
He's like, fine.
1102
00:50:21,180 --> 00:50:22,130
I'll go and retreat.
1103
00:50:22,730 --> 00:50:25,240
Hey, I put these things on
my feet and now I'm better.
1104
00:50:25,600 --> 00:50:28,910
You know, like I feel like we can get
to it faster, but anyway, I just want
1105
00:50:28,910 --> 00:50:30,440
to show you this is a story based one.
1106
00:50:30,890 --> 00:50:36,740
So Excuse me, uh shine armor.
1107
00:50:36,840 --> 00:50:39,059
So are you tired of getting
showroom show always wanted?
1108
00:50:39,170 --> 00:50:42,410
So this is a good example of like
things of the past like people
1109
00:50:42,410 --> 00:50:47,610
aren't using wax anymore not
getting uh as good of A good of job.
1110
00:50:47,610 --> 00:50:51,510
So then it just kind of like I
like this waxing is dead So it's
1111
00:50:51,510 --> 00:50:56,429
bringing in this kind of stat, you
know using you know wax is the old
1112
00:50:56,430 --> 00:50:58,935
way of doing things You know, it's
1113
00:51:09,515 --> 00:51:11,845
yeah, it's just getting right
to it's where it's like, it's
1114
00:51:11,845 --> 00:51:12,915
just going right to the pain.
1115
00:51:12,915 --> 00:51:15,285
Like, are you, are you tired of
not getting the showroom shine?
1116
00:51:15,285 --> 00:51:18,124
You always wanted to get, maybe your
detailing products aren't as good as
1117
00:51:18,125 --> 00:51:19,465
you hope you need to keep bringing it.
1118
00:51:20,624 --> 00:51:22,654
I think the lead's okay, but maybe it's.
1119
00:51:24,115 --> 00:51:25,825
There's some ways to test.
1120
00:51:26,625 --> 00:51:31,535
And I did one for these guys years ago,
uh, through an agency, Weekend Digital.
1121
00:51:31,545 --> 00:51:34,664
Shout out to Tommy over
at Weekend Digital.
1122
00:51:34,674 --> 00:51:39,875
So when they had them as a client, so
I did one where it's like more of that
1123
00:51:39,875 --> 00:51:42,904
desire of wanting that showroom shine.
1124
00:51:43,304 --> 00:51:48,105
And um, it was almost like this
jealousy, like other people,
1125
00:51:48,105 --> 00:51:51,325
like, how are you getting your
car so shiny and leveraging that?
1126
00:51:51,335 --> 00:51:52,345
Like leveraging.
1127
00:51:53,145 --> 00:51:57,855
What others want from that guy that is
like the professional detailer and what
1128
00:51:57,955 --> 00:52:01,825
what are the professionals using that
they're not again It goes back to that
1129
00:52:01,825 --> 00:52:06,364
like what's the secret to these guys
getting huge that I'm not using to get
1130
00:52:06,365 --> 00:52:09,775
huge, you know People always want that.
1131
00:52:10,014 --> 00:52:10,314
Okay.
1132
00:52:11,754 --> 00:52:13,115
So this is again.
1133
00:52:13,125 --> 00:52:19,465
It's what works is kind of like I guess
you could say another example of a lead
1134
00:52:19,465 --> 00:52:23,815
is like the old thing, the old way of
doing things or it doesn't work anymore.
1135
00:52:23,945 --> 00:52:26,315
It might, it might've worked
up until a point, but now it's,
1136
00:52:26,345 --> 00:52:27,824
here's the new way of doing things.
1137
00:52:28,155 --> 00:52:29,805
So like this one has done really well.
1138
00:52:30,155 --> 00:52:34,474
Uh, this, this cosmic, uh,
impressive high res near and far
1139
00:52:34,494 --> 00:52:35,755
photos with just a smartphone.
1140
00:52:35,755 --> 00:52:38,485
So the idea is you hook up
this to your phone and you
1141
00:52:38,485 --> 00:52:39,815
can get a closer, better shot.
1142
00:52:39,905 --> 00:52:43,685
So, uh, and obviously in the
hero image, they're showing like.
1143
00:52:44,030 --> 00:52:47,840
An outdoorsman and what you're able to
capture look at that image of that ego
1144
00:52:47,840 --> 00:52:50,920
what you're able to capture and here's
what it looks Like and now it hooks up to
1145
00:52:50,920 --> 00:52:53,160
your iphone or to your smartphone, right?
1146
00:52:53,430 --> 00:52:56,120
So right here smartphone camera
technology has come a long way in
1147
00:52:56,120 --> 00:53:00,449
recent years putting a near pro quality
camera everyone's hands But still even
1148
00:53:00,449 --> 00:53:03,130
the best phone cameras have limits.
1149
00:53:03,140 --> 00:53:07,420
So it's again showing like it's it's
come a long ways however, it's no longer
1150
00:53:07,450 --> 00:53:12,695
like it's not as good as it could be
and that this answer helps it be Even
1151
00:53:12,695 --> 00:53:16,265
better you can get better shots and
it's and it's also bringing the fact
1152
00:53:16,265 --> 00:53:20,445
that it's so simple It's like you can
if anyone has a smartphone you can have
1153
00:53:20,445 --> 00:53:25,384
this and take the best shots of your
life Out and about and whatever so it
1154
00:53:25,435 --> 00:53:29,135
adds that again that convenience factor
of like you don't have to do an extra
1155
00:53:29,175 --> 00:53:32,815
step You literally just take this thing
and hook it to your and there you go
1156
00:53:33,165 --> 00:53:36,455
Um, it's with you all the time Okay.
1157
00:53:38,495 --> 00:53:38,995
That's it.
1158
00:53:39,065 --> 00:53:41,245
That's it for now of all the leads.
1159
00:53:41,245 --> 00:53:42,225
I think I've given you plenty.
1160
00:53:42,225 --> 00:53:43,365
It's almost an hour long thing.
1161
00:53:43,365 --> 00:53:43,915
Yikes.
1162
00:53:44,255 --> 00:53:49,705
Uh, but I wanted to give you that look
at the best thing to do is obviously go
1163
00:53:49,705 --> 00:53:51,914
back to the audience, go to the audience.
1164
00:53:51,935 --> 00:53:58,325
And is this a product that is, has,
can be set to disrupt a market, disrupt
1165
00:53:58,325 --> 00:54:03,665
a market that everyone That everyone
is part of, and like, it's the big
1166
00:54:03,675 --> 00:54:05,325
market, like again, the smartwatch.
1167
00:54:05,625 --> 00:54:08,545
So if there's, everyone knows about
the smartwatch, but like this, the
1168
00:54:08,545 --> 00:54:12,085
underdog smartwatch that's coming
through and is even better, and no one
1169
00:54:12,085 --> 00:54:17,255
knows about, the disruptor, the hearing
aids that are a cost of fraction, that
1170
00:54:17,255 --> 00:54:21,085
are a fraction of the cost of normal
hearing aids, and it's disrupting the
1171
00:54:21,095 --> 00:54:23,955
big hearing aid tech company, right?
1172
00:54:24,315 --> 00:54:27,205
So under, disruptor angles
always work for the leads.
1173
00:54:27,970 --> 00:54:32,850
Maybe I don't want to say always
work, but they work so well for a lot
1174
00:54:32,850 --> 00:54:37,480
of the gadgets, a lot of the e comm
products, the logic headline, um,
1175
00:54:38,630 --> 00:54:43,960
bringing in a logic, like what the, uh,
the problems help, like a statistic.
1176
00:54:45,249 --> 00:54:49,710
Did you know that, you know, one in
three houses get robbed every, every.
1177
00:54:50,565 --> 00:54:52,705
Or like, you know, did you
know that there's a robbery?
1178
00:54:52,705 --> 00:54:56,375
I use this actually for these
little, we called it the home howler,
1179
00:54:56,465 --> 00:54:59,405
but it's like this little alarm
we've set up underneath the door.
1180
00:54:59,605 --> 00:55:02,885
And when the door opens, it
like, it like triggers the alarm.
1181
00:55:03,125 --> 00:55:05,985
And so we use a statistic
where it's like, what is it?
1182
00:55:05,985 --> 00:55:08,925
Like a home gets robbed every thirty
seconds or something like that.
1183
00:55:09,215 --> 00:55:10,305
So using that.
1184
00:55:10,630 --> 00:55:14,700
As a statistic, like, wow, like, it just
makes you like, oh, it kind of makes you
1185
00:55:14,700 --> 00:55:18,350
sit up and, you know, and this little,
this little door stopping alarm, this
1186
00:55:18,350 --> 00:55:22,940
little door stopper alarm is now set
to disrupt the home security system,
1187
00:55:23,510 --> 00:55:27,920
uh, the billion dollar home security
system, and it's so easy and it costs
1188
00:55:27,920 --> 00:55:30,020
a fraction and you can get one today.
1189
00:55:30,330 --> 00:55:33,550
So, statistic is really, really powerful.
1190
00:55:33,640 --> 00:55:37,540
Statistic with a disruptor,
even bigger whammy.
1191
00:55:38,670 --> 00:55:40,700
And then, of course, an
emotional story, we'll always.
1192
00:55:41,155 --> 00:55:47,955
Not again, I'm using always, but not
always, but if it calls, if it can use an
1193
00:55:47,955 --> 00:55:53,444
emotional hook, if there is an emotional
hook available, if you, if it, again,
1194
00:55:53,444 --> 00:55:57,034
it goes to your audience, if there's
something there that could be used, great.
1195
00:55:57,365 --> 00:56:01,045
I've seen it where I'm like, I don't
think this is, I've seen an advertorial
1196
00:56:01,055 --> 00:56:06,165
with her using an emotional story
for something that I felt was too
1197
00:56:06,165 --> 00:56:08,405
far left field for this product.
1198
00:56:08,425 --> 00:56:12,285
In other words, like it's
just the emotion didn't.
1199
00:56:13,415 --> 00:56:16,915
It didn't match for what the
product is actually solving.
1200
00:56:17,215 --> 00:56:18,295
It was a reach.
1201
00:56:18,325 --> 00:56:21,805
In other words, it's equivalent, again,
to that Better Butter Spreader, where
1202
00:56:21,805 --> 00:56:25,085
like, I didn't have a weapon, but I
added my Better Butter Spreader to
1203
00:56:25,085 --> 00:56:26,895
this, to this burglar that came in.
1204
00:56:27,355 --> 00:56:28,425
It's a reach.
1205
00:56:28,565 --> 00:56:34,644
Like, you don't need, you don't, don't
force an emotional story if it's not.
1206
00:56:35,005 --> 00:56:39,725
If it's not available, uh, and
when I say emotional, like dramatic
1207
00:56:39,875 --> 00:56:43,885
life and death, there could still
be an emotional story based on
1208
00:56:43,894 --> 00:56:45,725
nostalgia, based on embarrassment.
1209
00:56:45,725 --> 00:56:49,664
There's other emotions that we can
feel, uh, that people can relate to.
1210
00:56:49,665 --> 00:56:51,055
So just keep that in mind.
1211
00:56:51,385 --> 00:56:55,525
I hope this was really helpful and you
can, again, take this, take this example.
1212
00:56:55,945 --> 00:56:59,735
Take this as your example download
this and you can use it and replace
1213
00:56:59,735 --> 00:57:03,385
it and be there with you So you can
now like anytime you write a lead
1214
00:57:03,385 --> 00:57:06,744
you're like, how did he What did he
thrive for that lead for the disruptor?
1215
00:57:06,745 --> 00:57:11,245
Here you go Um, and then also if you have
the order bump if you picked up for all
1216
00:57:11,245 --> 00:57:14,555
the swipes You can take a look at all
those leads and help you out as well.
1217
00:57:14,835 --> 00:57:17,665
Uh, that's it for now That
was a long lesson on leads,
1218
00:57:17,665 --> 00:57:18,765
but I hope it was helpful.
1219
00:57:18,855 --> 00:57:19,425
Thanks guys.
1220
00:57:19,835 --> 00:57:19,945
Bye.
1221
00:57:19,945 --> 00:57:20,575
Bye
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