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I was excited to
learn as a young writer,
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as I started to
put this together,
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talking to other writers,
talking to great writing
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teachers, that
there are elements
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that must be in a good story.
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Not just thrillers, all stories.
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We're gonna talk about thrillers
here primarily, but all of this
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is relevant to a storyteller.
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Whether you're writing a
memoir or a screenplay,
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this is about storytelling.
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And there are elements
that all good stories have.
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If you look out at
the highway, you
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will see countless
kinds of cars.
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You'll see minivans and
sports cars and tractors.
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They all have a different
purpose, a different driver.
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They're serving their
owners in different ways.
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But if you take all of these
vehicles and you lift the hood,
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you are gonna see
the exact same thing.
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You're gonna see the
elements of an engine that
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make this car run.
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Now they may be
crafted a little bit
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differently, put
together differently,
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but they're all there.
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The same thing with
stories that work.
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They all have the same elements.
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We're gonna talk a lot about
what those elements are
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in this class.
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In broad strokes, you
might have a world.
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You might have the
sole dramatic question.
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You've got to have a hero.
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You've got to have a goal.
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Your hero has to have something
he or she wants to accomplish.
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You have to have obstacles
that make it impossible.
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You have to have a moment when
the hero conquers the villain,
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when good conquers evil.
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These are all elements
that you're going
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to find in stories that work.
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And we're gonna
talk about them more
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in-depth in a little while.
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When I sit down
to write a book, I
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think in terms of
what I call the three
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Cs that I think could be
very, very helpful to anyone
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who's sitting down and trying
to outline and write a thriller.
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I call them the contract,
the clock, and the crucible.
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The contract is that
promise that you're
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making the reader, this idea
that if you read this book,
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you will find out the
following piece of information.
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Will the young attorney
escape the corrupt law firm
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that hired him?
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Will Ahab catch the whale?
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These sorts of things.
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Will the jackal kill his target?
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You make a contract
with the reader.
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And you don't break it.
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And no promise is small enough
that you don't have to keep it.
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Every single promise you make
to the reader, you need to keep.
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And I remember at the
end of "Da Vinci Code,"
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I think I had three or four days
to finish the end of this book
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before it had to go to press.
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And we had a list of
17 unanswered promises,
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an actual list
saying this is small,
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but you've made a
promise to your reader.
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You have to answer it.
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And we went through
and we found ways
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to give answers to
every single question.
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And the reason
people are gonna love
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your book is that when
you make a promise,
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you're going to keep it.
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And people will begin to
trust you as a writer.
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The crucible is just this
idea of saying, don't
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let your characters run away.
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A crucible is something
that holds things together
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and doesn't let them escape.
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If you look at the end of
Peter Benchley's "Jaws,"
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just a fantastic
thriller, you've
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got a boat that's sinking,
a shark that's coming in,
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and these people, if they
had two twin Evinrudes
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on the back of the boat
and could drive away,
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you don't have a thriller.
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They're sinking.
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They've got nowhere to go.
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They're in a crucible.
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They have to face the villain.
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Your job is to give
your hero one path.
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He can't escape.
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He's in a crucible.
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He's got one way out.
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And guess what?
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That way is miserable.
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It's just filled with obstacles
and monsters and danger
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and personal challenge.
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That's what's gonna
make your hero heroic.
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And that's what's gonna make
the finale of your thriller
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exciting and satisfying.
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And the final idea is
this idea of the clock.
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This ticking clock
in the background
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of every single thriller.
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There is time pressure.
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When I wrote
"Angels And Demons,"
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I wanted Robert
Langdon to follow
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the path of Illumination.
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If he'd had his
entire life to do it,
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it wouldn't have
been that exciting.
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So I decided I'm going to
take an antimatter bomb,
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a literal ticking clock--
not subtle, but effective--
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put it in the Vatican,
say, well, you kind of
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have to solve this by midnight,
or else there's a big problem.
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These are the sorts
of things that you
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want to do in your writing.
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You may have an
idea for a story.
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The second you can lay on
top of it a time pressure,
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suddenly you're moving toward
the genre of a thriller.
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When you ask people what the
elements of a thriller are,
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you'll probably get answers
like high stakes, suspense.
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The truth is that these elements
of high stakes and suspense
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are in every story.
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Thrillers, classic myths,
there's always suspense,
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because there are always high
stakes for the protagonist,
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for somebody.
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It may not be the
world's gonna blow up,
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but it may be this question of
will this young woman overcome
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her fear of her father
and find herself.
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What makes a book a
thriller is the pace
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at which the plot comes at you.
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I like thrillers that hit
you on the first page,
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hold on, and don't
let you go right
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till the end, The kind of
thrillers I like to read,
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and therefore the kind of
thrillers I like to write,
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are thrillers that ask a lot
of questions very quickly,
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and also give answers
very, very quickly.
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And when you're
writing your book,
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it's absolutely critical that
you put in as many questions
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as you can toward
the front of a book,
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but simultaneously
that you answer them
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at a rate that doesn't
leave your reader confused
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or wondering, am I ever going
to get the answer to this?
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So it really is this
kind of patchwork
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where you're asking a question,
giving an answer as you're
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asking a new question, making
new promises all the time,
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getting people to say, OK,
I just figured this out,
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but now there's
this new question.
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Keep them going.
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Suspense is all about
making promises.
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It's about telling
your reader, I
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know something you don't know.
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And I promise if you turn the
page, I'm going to tell you.
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If you want to write
successful stories,
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you cannot overstate the
importance of reading.
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Reading plays an enormous role
in the lives of all writers.
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Writers read to
learn, to get ideas,
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to gain knowledge so that they
have a perspective on whatever
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they're writing about.
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But the other
reason they read is
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to see how other people do it,
to see how stories are made.
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You as an aspiring
novelist should
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be reading as many
thrillers as you can,
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or as many memoirs as you can.
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Whatever it is
you want to write,
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see how other people do it.
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And you are gonna
learn from people
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who do it in a way you
love, but you're also
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gonna learn from people who
do it in a way you hate.
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It's not your taste.
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You're gonna say, well,
I don't want to do that.
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I wanna to do something else.
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The more you read,
the more you're
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gonna know how stories
are put together.
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So I grew up reading the Hardy
Boys, these little mysteries
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with a lot of cliffhangers.
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I loved them.
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And then when I went to
high school and college,
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I just read classics.
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And I really only read the
classics, a lot of old stuff,
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and I enjoyed it.
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I didn't really know the genre
of an adult thriller existed
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until I was on vacation.
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I was in Tahiti, of all places.
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Found a paperback on
the dock that somebody
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finished and left there.
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And it was a book by
Sidney Sheldon called
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"The Doomsday Conspiracy.
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"The Doomsday Conspiracy."
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I didn't know who
Sidney Sheldon was.
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I'd never heard of the book.
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And I read the first page.
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I thought, oh my god.
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And I read the next page
and I read the next page.
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And I just tore
through that book.
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And I thought, I didn't even
know this genre existed.
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This is like the
Hardy Boys for adults.
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And I had this strange
moment when I thought,
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maybe I could do
something like that.
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I didn't right away.
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But I also had
another experience
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later on reading
the original "Bourne
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Identity" by Robert Ludlum.
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The thing I loved about
"The Bourne Identity"
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is that one question, that
sole brick with which Ludlum
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built the foundation was
so quiet and ingenious.
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It's a man with amnesia.
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Will he figure out who he is?
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That's the whole book.
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Will this guy figure
out who he is?
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And, of course, you know
as the reader he will.
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He will.
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But you just want to
see how it happens.
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And, you know,
Ludlum does something
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so ingenious in this book
where you want to like him.
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You sort of sense
he's a good person.
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But the more he finds out about
himself, the worse he seems.
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You know, he's a deadly killer.
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You see his picture on the
paper saying he killed somebody.
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And as a reader, you
say, I trust the author.
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The author's going
to show me he's good.
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But how is he going to overcome
all these obstacles that
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say he's bad?
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You can actually
write a book that's
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entertaining from
which you learn
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about all these
different worlds, all
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these different skills,
different kinds of people.
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And I became very, very inspired
to try that sort of thing
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myself.
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And I wrote the book
"Digital Fortress."
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It's a young novel.
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I look back and I
say, I'd change this,
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I'd change that,
I'd change this.
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But the bones of it
are thriller bones.
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It's a simple hero.
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He too is a professor.
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I was finding Langdon.
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Wrote a character
named David Becker,
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who was a professor
of linguistics,
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and he gets challenged.
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He goes on this terrible journey
and all these ridiculous things
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happen to him.
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And he has to overcome them,
and, of course, he does.
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And again, what you
will find when you read
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thrillers that you enjoy--
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actually any novel
that you enjoy--
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is that you will get the
answer and the outcome
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that you've hoped for.
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But it will come to you, as
the reader, in a different way.
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And your job as a
writer, give the reader
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what they want in a way
they don't see coming.
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